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Ⅷ. 书面表达(共15分)
(2024·徐州中考)假定你是徐州的一名九年级学生李华。你校英文报正组织题为“A famous person in the history of Xuzhou”的征文活动,你选择的人物是苏轼(1077—1079年间任徐州知州)。请结合以下要点写一篇英语短文,参加征文活动。
注意:1. 征文需包括以上三个要点;
2. 词数100左右。
提示词:苏堤 Su Causeway
黄楼 Huanglou Pavilion
A famous person in the history of Xuzhou
Su Shi is widely regarded as one of the greatest poets in Chinese history. Su Shi's contributions to Xuzhou, in particular, are significant and have left a lasting influence on the city.
He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou. Su Shi also discovered coal in the area. Besides his achievements, Su Shi was a productive poet. Su Shi's time in Xuzhou was a period of great creativity and productivity, and his works reflect his love for the city and its people. When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.
I think Su Shi's legacy in Xuzhou lives on through his writings, the structures he helped build, and the memories of the people he touched. His contributions to the city will never be forgotten.
题中题 054
(2024·徐州中考)假定你是徐州的一名九年级学生李华。你校英文报正组织题为“A famous person in the history of Xuzhou”的征文活动,你选择的人物是苏轼(1077—1079年间任徐州知州)。请结合以下要点写一篇英语短文,参加征文活动。
注意:1. 征文需包括以上三个要点;
2. 词数100左右。
提示词:苏堤 Su Causeway
黄楼 Huanglou Pavilion
A famous person in the history of Xuzhou
Su Shi is widely regarded as one of the greatest poets in Chinese history. Su Shi's contributions to Xuzhou, in particular, are significant and have left a lasting influence on the city.
He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou. Su Shi also discovered coal in the area. Besides his achievements, Su Shi was a productive poet. Su Shi's time in Xuzhou was a period of great creativity and productivity, and his works reflect his love for the city and its people. When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.
I think Su Shi's legacy in Xuzhou lives on through his writings, the structures he helped build, and the memories of the people he touched. His contributions to the city will never be forgotten.
题中题 054
答案
Ⅷ. One possible version:
A famous person in the history of Xuzhou
Su Shi is widely regarded as one of the greatest poets in Chinese history. Su Shi's contributions to Xuzhou, in particular, are significant and have left a lasting influence on the city.
He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou. Su Shi also discovered coal in the area. Besides his achievements, Su Shi was a productive poet. Su Shi's time in Xuzhou was a period of great creativity and productivity, and his works reflect his love for the city and its people. When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.
I think Su Shi's legacy in Xuzhou lives on through his writings, the structures he helped build, and the memories of the people he touched. His contributions to the city will never be forgotten.
【审题】本文是一篇材料作文；时态以一般过去时为主；写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要漏写自己的感受，并适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
【写作步骤】第一步，简单阐述苏轼的身份以及成就；第二步，简述苏轼在任徐州知州期间的经历；第三步，说说你的感受。
【短语积累】①be regarded as 被认为
②leave an influence on 对……产生影响
【高分句型】①He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou.(定语从句)
②When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.(时间状语从句)
A famous person in the history of Xuzhou
Su Shi is widely regarded as one of the greatest poets in Chinese history. Su Shi's contributions to Xuzhou, in particular, are significant and have left a lasting influence on the city.
He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou. Su Shi also discovered coal in the area. Besides his achievements, Su Shi was a productive poet. Su Shi's time in Xuzhou was a period of great creativity and productivity, and his works reflect his love for the city and its people. When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.
I think Su Shi's legacy in Xuzhou lives on through his writings, the structures he helped build, and the memories of the people he touched. His contributions to the city will never be forgotten.
【审题】本文是一篇材料作文；时态以一般过去时为主；写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要漏写自己的感受，并适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
【写作步骤】第一步，简单阐述苏轼的身份以及成就；第二步，简述苏轼在任徐州知州期间的经历；第三步，说说你的感受。
【短语积累】①be regarded as 被认为
②leave an influence on 对……产生影响
【高分句型】①He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou.(定语从句)
②When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.(时间状语从句)
解析
【分析】本题是英语书面表达题，要求以徐州九年级学生李华的身份，围绕“A famous person in the history of Xuzhou”为题写征文，核心人物为苏轼，需涵盖三个要点：苏轼在徐州带领百姓抗洪水、修建苏堤与黄楼、寻煤炭；离开时百姓不舍；还要融入个人感受。写作时需注意时态以一般过去时为主，词数约100，语言连贯且要点齐全。
【解析】1. 审题：确定文体为材料类英语征文，人称用第三人称介绍苏轼、第一人称表达感受，时态以一般过去时为主。2. 写作结构：开头点明苏轼的身份及对徐州的重要性；中间具体阐述苏轼在徐州的事迹（抗洪水、建苏堤黄楼、寻煤炭）；结尾表达百姓的不舍及个人感悟。3. 语言运用：使用提示词，运用定语从句、时间状语从句丰富句式，确保词数符合要求。
【答案】A famous person in the history of Xuzhou
Su Shi is widely regarded as one of the greatest poets in Chinese history. Su Shi's contributions to Xuzhou, in particular, are significant and have left a lasting influence on the city.
He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou. Su Shi also discovered coal in the area. Besides his achievements, Su Shi was a productive poet. Su Shi's time in Xuzhou was a period of great creativity and productivity, and his works reflect his love for the city and its people. When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.
I think Su Shi's legacy in Xuzhou lives on through his writings, the structures he helped build, and the memories of the people he touched. His contributions to the city will never be forgotten.
【知识点】英语书面表达、材料作文写作
【点评】本题结合徐州本地历史人物苏轼，既考察学生对给定信息的整合能力，又要求用规范英语表达，同时融入个人感悟，贴近学生生活，符合初中英语写作的考察要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 审题：确定文体为材料类英语征文，人称用第三人称介绍苏轼、第一人称表达感受，时态以一般过去时为主。2. 写作结构：开头点明苏轼的身份及对徐州的重要性；中间具体阐述苏轼在徐州的事迹（抗洪水、建苏堤黄楼、寻煤炭）；结尾表达百姓的不舍及个人感悟。3. 语言运用：使用提示词，运用定语从句、时间状语从句丰富句式，确保词数符合要求。
【答案】A famous person in the history of Xuzhou
Su Shi is widely regarded as one of the greatest poets in Chinese history. Su Shi's contributions to Xuzhou, in particular, are significant and have left a lasting influence on the city.
He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou. Su Shi also discovered coal in the area. Besides his achievements, Su Shi was a productive poet. Su Shi's time in Xuzhou was a period of great creativity and productivity, and his works reflect his love for the city and its people. When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.
I think Su Shi's legacy in Xuzhou lives on through his writings, the structures he helped build, and the memories of the people he touched. His contributions to the city will never be forgotten.
【知识点】英语书面表达、材料作文写作
【点评】本题结合徐州本地历史人物苏轼，既考察学生对给定信息的整合能力，又要求用规范英语表达，同时融入个人感悟，贴近学生生活，符合初中英语写作的考察要求。
【难度系数】0.6
