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十、书面表达。(7分)
假如你是刘涛,请根据表格提示,以"How do we go to school?"为题写一篇英语短文,介绍一下你以及你的好朋友们住在哪里和怎样上学。
How do we go to school?
假如你是刘涛,请根据表格提示,以"How do we go to school?"为题写一篇英语短文,介绍一下你以及你的好朋友们住在哪里和怎样上学。
How do we go to school?
Hello, I'm Liu Tao. My home is on Park Street. I go to school by taxi. Because my father is a taxi driver.
Yang Ling lives near school. So she goes to school on foot.
Mike's home is in Sunshine Town. His home is far from school. He goes to school by metro.
Su Hai and Su Yang live in a new home now. It's on Moon Street.
But it's far from their school, so they go to school by bus every day.
答案
示例:
How do we go to school?
Hello, I'm Liu Tao. My home is on Park
Street. I go to school by taxi. Because my
father is a taxi driver. Yang Ling lives near
school. So she goes to school on foot. Mike's
home is in Sunshine Town. His home is far
from school. He goes to school by metro. Su
Hai and Su Yang live in a new home now. It's
on Moon Street. But it's far from their school,
so they go to school by bus every day.
How do we go to school?
Hello, I'm Liu Tao. My home is on Park
Street. I go to school by taxi. Because my
father is a taxi driver. Yang Ling lives near
school. So she goes to school on foot. Mike's
home is in Sunshine Town. His home is far
from school. He goes to school by metro. Su
Hai and Su Yang live in a new home now. It's
on Moon Street. But it's far from their school,
so they go to school by bus every day.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题，先明确核心要求：身份设定为刘涛，主题是介绍自己和几位好友的居住位置、上学的交通方式，所有信息都可以从给定表格里直接提取。第一步先开篇自我介绍，先把自己的住址Park Street、上学乘坐出租车的信息写出来，还可以补充一个合理的小原因让内容更自然。第二步按照表格的人物顺序，依次介绍剩下的人物：先介绍杨玲，她住在学校附近，对应的出行方式是步行，补充因果逻辑让语句通顺。第三步介绍Mike，他住在阳光镇，距离学校很远，对应出行方式是乘坐地铁。第四步介绍苏海和苏洋，她们住在月亮街，家离学校远，对应出行方式是乘坐公交。最后把所有内容用简单通顺的基础英语句式串联，确保所有表格信息都不遗漏，没有语法错误就完成写作了。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇引入：先点明身份，呼应题目主题，写出自己的住址和上学的交通方式，补充合理细节让内容流畅：Hello, I'm Liu Tao. My home is on Park Street. I go to school by taxi. Because my father is a taxi driver.
2. 介绍杨玲的相关信息：对应表格里near school的住址信息，搭配步行的出行方式，补充因果逻辑：Yang Ling lives near school. So she goes to school on foot.
3. 介绍Mike的相关信息：对应Sunshine Town的住址，说明家离学校远，搭配乘坐地铁的出行方式：Mike's home is in Sunshine Town. His home is far from school. He goes to school by metro.
4. 介绍苏海和苏洋的相关信息：对应Moon Street的住址，说明距离学校远，搭配乘坐公交的出行方式：Su Hai and Su Yang live in a new home now. It's on Moon Street. But it's far from their school, so they go to school by bus every day.
5. 整体通读检查，确认所有表格给出的人物、地点、出行方式信息都完整覆盖，语法没有错误，语句连贯。
【答案】
How do we go to school?
Hello, I'm Liu Tao. My home is on Park Street. I go to school by taxi. Because my father is a taxi driver. Yang Ling lives near school. So she goes to school on foot. Mike's home is in Sunshine Town. His home is far from school. He goes to school by metro. Su Hai and Su Yang live in a new home now. It's on Moon Street. But it's far from their school, so they go to school by bus every day.
【知识点】
交通方式表达
一般现在时
地点方位描述
【点评】
本题属于小学英语基础信息类书面表达，所有写作素材都已经在表格中给出，不需要学生额外拓展复杂内容，只需要准确提取对应信息，用简单的常用句式串联，适当补充因果逻辑让短文通顺即可，重点考察学生对本单元核心的出行方式、地点相关英语表达的掌握程度。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题，先明确核心要求：身份设定为刘涛，主题是介绍自己和几位好友的居住位置、上学的交通方式，所有信息都可以从给定表格里直接提取。第一步先开篇自我介绍，先把自己的住址Park Street、上学乘坐出租车的信息写出来，还可以补充一个合理的小原因让内容更自然。第二步按照表格的人物顺序，依次介绍剩下的人物：先介绍杨玲，她住在学校附近，对应的出行方式是步行，补充因果逻辑让语句通顺。第三步介绍Mike，他住在阳光镇，距离学校很远，对应出行方式是乘坐地铁。第四步介绍苏海和苏洋，她们住在月亮街，家离学校远，对应出行方式是乘坐公交。最后把所有内容用简单通顺的基础英语句式串联，确保所有表格信息都不遗漏，没有语法错误就完成写作了。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇引入：先点明身份，呼应题目主题，写出自己的住址和上学的交通方式，补充合理细节让内容流畅：Hello, I'm Liu Tao. My home is on Park Street. I go to school by taxi. Because my father is a taxi driver.
2. 介绍杨玲的相关信息：对应表格里near school的住址信息，搭配步行的出行方式，补充因果逻辑：Yang Ling lives near school. So she goes to school on foot.
3. 介绍Mike的相关信息：对应Sunshine Town的住址，说明家离学校远，搭配乘坐地铁的出行方式：Mike's home is in Sunshine Town. His home is far from school. He goes to school by metro.
4. 介绍苏海和苏洋的相关信息：对应Moon Street的住址，说明距离学校远，搭配乘坐公交的出行方式：Su Hai and Su Yang live in a new home now. It's on Moon Street. But it's far from their school, so they go to school by bus every day.
5. 整体通读检查，确认所有表格给出的人物、地点、出行方式信息都完整覆盖，语法没有错误，语句连贯。
【答案】
How do we go to school?
Hello, I'm Liu Tao. My home is on Park Street. I go to school by taxi. Because my father is a taxi driver. Yang Ling lives near school. So she goes to school on foot. Mike's home is in Sunshine Town. His home is far from school. He goes to school by metro. Su Hai and Su Yang live in a new home now. It's on Moon Street. But it's far from their school, so they go to school by bus every day.
【知识点】
交通方式表达
一般现在时
地点方位描述
【点评】
本题属于小学英语基础信息类书面表达，所有写作素材都已经在表格中给出，不需要学生额外拓展复杂内容，只需要准确提取对应信息，用简单的常用句式串联，适当补充因果逻辑让短文通顺即可，重点考察学生对本单元核心的出行方式、地点相关英语表达的掌握程度。
【难度系数】
0.7
