八、书面表达。(5 分)
假如你是Jack,请根据思维导图和提示词,发挥想象,介绍
一下你和家人的出行方式,可适当拓展。
要求:语句通顺,书写规范,不少于5句话。
提示:usually, sometimes, often, teacher, doctor, nurse,
student

参考范文:
Hello! I'm Jack. I have a happy family.
We live on Moon Street. My father is a
doctor. He usually goes to work by car.
Sometimes he goes to work by metro. My
mother is a teacher. She often goes to work
by bike. My sister is a nurse. She is very
beautiful and hard-working. She often goes
to work by bus. I am a student. I always go
to school on foot because my school is near
my home. I love my family.

【分析】
首先拿到这道题先明确写作要求：身份是Jack，需要结合思维导图的信息，介绍自己和家人的职业、日常出行方式，要用上给出的提示词，语句通顺不少于5句话。解题思路可以按以下步骤走：1. 开篇先做自我介绍，引出自己的家庭；2. 按照思维导图的顺序，依次介绍父亲、母亲、姐姐、自己的身份，对应匹配图里的出行工具，合理搭配usually、sometimes、often这些频率副词，让内容符合日常逻辑；3. 最后可以补充少量合理的细节，比如家的位置、学校离家很近这类内容，最后收尾表达对家庭的喜爱，写完后检查有没有遗漏信息点、语法有没有错误，确保句子数量达标。
【解析】
写作步骤参考：
1. 开篇引入：先打招呼自我介绍，点明自己拥有幸福的家庭，补充居住地点让内容更饱满，完成开篇铺垫。
2. 介绍父亲：对应图中父亲的医生职业，匹配私家车、地铁两种出行方式，搭配频率副词usually和sometimes，符合日常出行的逻辑。
3. 介绍母亲：对应图中母亲的教师职业，匹配自行车出行方式，用频率副词often修饰，内容自然合理。
4. 介绍姐姐：对应图中姐姐的护士职业，匹配公交出行方式，用often修饰，可补充简单的人物描述让内容更生动。
5. 介绍自己：对应自身学生身份，匹配步行出行方式，补充学校离家近的原因，让出行选择更有说服力。
6. 收尾：表达对家庭的喜爱，通读全文检查所有提示词都已用到，语句通顺，句子数量满足不少于5句的要求，没有语法错误即可。
【答案】
参考范文:
Hello! I'm Jack. I have a happy family. We live on Moon Street. My father is a doctor. He usually goes to work by car. Sometimes he goes to work by metro. My mother is a teacher. She often goes to work by bike. My sister is a nurse. She is very beautiful and hard-working. She often goes to work by bus. I am a student. I always go to school on foot because my school is near my home. I love my family.
【知识点】
出行方式表达，一般现在时，英语写作
【点评】
本题属于小学英语基础类写作题，所有核心信息点都通过思维导图给出，还配套了提示词降低写作门槛，学生只需要理清人物顺序，正确使用交通方式的固定搭配，注意一般现在时里第三人称单数谓语动词的变化，就可以顺利完成写作，适当补充少量合理细节还能让文章更流畅自然，拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.7