八、书面表达。(5分)
同学们,请根据所给图片和提示,仿照例子写一写你关爱他人的经历。
要求:1. 条理清晰,意思连贯,语句通顺;2. 书写工整、规范;3. 适当发挥想象。


On Tuesday, my friend Lily is sad.
She can't find her pencil.
I give her my new blue pencil.
I give her my rubber too.
I feel happy because I help her.
同学们,请根据所给图片和提示,仿照例子写一写你关爱他人的经历。
要求:1. 条理清晰,意思连贯,语句通顺;2. 书写工整、规范;3. 适当发挥想象。
On Tuesday, my friend Lily is sad.
On Saturday
, my friend Lucy
is ill
.She can't find her pencil.
I give her my new blue pencil.
I give her my rubber too.
I feel happy because I help her.
She can't go to school. She needs to have a rest.
I miss her.
I give her hot water and read stories to her.
I am happy to help her.
答案
范文:
On Saturday, my friend Lucy is ill.
She can't go to school. She needs to have a rest.
I miss her.
I give her hot water and read stories to her.
I am happy to help her.
On Saturday, my friend Lucy is ill.
She can't go to school. She needs to have a rest.
I miss her.
I give her hot water and read stories to her.
I am happy to help her.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,要求仿照给定示例,围绕“关爱他人的经历”写作。解题思路为:先明确写作结构,需包含时间、帮助对象状态、具体帮助行为及自身感受;再结合生活实际选合适场景(如朋友生病等);最后按示例句式用通顺连贯的英语完成写作,适当发挥想象即可。
【解析】1. 确定主题场景:选朋友生病的场景,契合关爱他人的主题;2. 按示例结构搭建内容:先点明时间(On Saturday)、帮助对象及状态(my friend Lucy is ill);接着描述朋友困境(She can't go to school. She needs to have a rest.);再写具体帮助行为(I give her hot water and read stories to her.);最后表达感受(I am happy to help her.);3. 检查语句通顺连贯,符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】On Saturday, my friend Lucy is ill. She can't go to school. She needs to have a rest. I miss her. I give her hot water and read stories to her. I am happy to help her.
【知识点】英语书面表达、关爱他人话题写作、一般现在时
【点评】本题结合生活实际,考查学生英语书面表达能力,要求仿照示例写作,既锻炼语言组织运用能力,又传递关爱他人的情感,符合英语学习的实用性要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 确定主题场景:选朋友生病的场景,契合关爱他人的主题;2. 按示例结构搭建内容:先点明时间(On Saturday)、帮助对象及状态(my friend Lucy is ill);接着描述朋友困境(She can't go to school. She needs to have a rest.);再写具体帮助行为(I give her hot water and read stories to her.);最后表达感受(I am happy to help her.);3. 检查语句通顺连贯,符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】On Saturday, my friend Lucy is ill. She can't go to school. She needs to have a rest. I miss her. I give her hot water and read stories to her. I am happy to help her.
【知识点】英语书面表达、关爱他人话题写作、一般现在时
【点评】本题结合生活实际,考查学生英语书面表达能力,要求仿照示例写作,既锻炼语言组织运用能力,又传递关爱他人的情感,符合英语学习的实用性要求。
【难度系数】0.6
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