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五、书面表达
假设你是李明，你和你的父母上周末去了明月山旅游。请你根据表格中的内容写一篇短文，介绍你们的旅游经历。
时间 上周末
地点 明月山
起床 早上6点
交通方式及路上花费的时间
乘高铁1小时
天气 晴朗
活动 爬山、吃美食、买礼物等
感受 ……
要求：
1. 文章必须包括表格中的所有要点；
2. 词数不少于80；
3. 语法正确，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：明月山 Mount Mingyue
高铁 high-speed train
假设你是李明，你和你的父母上周末去了明月山旅游。请你根据表格中的内容写一篇短文，介绍你们的旅游经历。
时间 上周末
地点 明月山
起床 早上6点
交通方式及路上花费的时间
乘高铁1小时天气 晴朗
活动 爬山、吃美食、买礼物等
感受 ……
要求：
1. 文章必须包括表格中的所有要点；
2. 词数不少于80；
3. 语法正确，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：明月山 Mount Mingyue
高铁 high-speed train
答案
A Great Trip to Mount Mingyue
Last weekend, I went to Mount Mingyue with my parents.
We got up at 6 o'clock in the early morning that day. Then we took the high-speed train to the mountain, and the trip on the train only took us one hour. It was sunny that day, and the scenery there was really beautiful. We climbed the mountain happily and took lots of photos. After we finished climbing, we tried different kinds of delicious local food for lunch. Before we left, we also bought some nice gifts for our grandparents and my best friend.
We all felt a little tired after the full-day trip, but we had so much fun. This trip is really an unforgettable experience for me.
Last weekend, I went to Mount Mingyue with my parents.
We got up at 6 o'clock in the early morning that day. Then we took the high-speed train to the mountain, and the trip on the train only took us one hour. It was sunny that day, and the scenery there was really beautiful. We climbed the mountain happily and took lots of photos. After we finished climbing, we tried different kinds of delicious local food for lunch. Before we left, we also bought some nice gifts for our grandparents and my best friend.
We all felt a little tired after the full-day trip, but we had so much fun. This trip is really an unforgettable experience for me.
解析
这是一篇介绍过往旅游经历的记叙文，写作时需注意：1. 全文使用一般过去时，匹配描述过去发生事件的语境；2. 按照时间逻辑串联表格全部要点：出行时间、起床时间、交通方式与耗时、当日天气、游玩活动，最后补充合理的游玩感受，保证内容完整无遗漏；3. 用简单衔接词串联内容，行文连贯，词数满足不少于80的要求，使用符合七年级水平的表达，避免超纲词汇。
