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九、书面表达。（10分）
假如你是Lingling，请以“My Healthy Life and Money Management”为题，写一篇短文，分享自己的健康生活方式和理财方法。
要求：包含思维导图全部内容，句子通顺，书写规范，不少于5句话。
My Healthy Life and Money Management
假如你是Lingling，请以“My Healthy Life and Money Management”为题，写一篇短文，分享自己的健康生活方式和理财方法。
要求：包含思维导图全部内容，句子通顺，书写规范，不少于5句话。
My Healthy Life and Money Management
Hello, everyone! My name is Lingling. I have a healthy life and good ways to manage my money.
First, I keep healthy. I exercise every morning, like running or playing basketball. I eat healthy food, such as vegetables and fruit. I also go to bed early every night.
Second, I manage my pocket money well. I often use my money to buy books, because I love reading. Sometimes I get some pocket money from selling old things.
I never waste money on useless things.
These are my ways. I think they are good for me!
答案
范文
My Healthy Life and Money Management
Hello, everyone! My name is Lingling. I have a healthy life and good ways to manage my money.
First, I keep healthy. I exercise every morning, like running or playing basketball. I eat healthy food, such as vegetables and fruit. I also go to bed early every night.
Second, I manage my pocket money well. I often use my money to buy books, because I love reading. Sometimes I get some pocket money from selling old things. I never waste money on useless things.
These are my ways. I think they are good for me!
My Healthy Life and Money Management
Hello, everyone! My name is Lingling. I have a healthy life and good ways to manage my money.
First, I keep healthy. I exercise every morning, like running or playing basketball. I eat healthy food, such as vegetables and fruit. I also go to bed early every night.
Second, I manage my pocket money well. I often use my money to buy books, because I love reading. Sometimes I get some pocket money from selling old things. I never waste money on useless things.
These are my ways. I think they are good for me!
解析
【分析】本题是英语话题书面表达，要求以“My Healthy Life and Money Management”为题，需覆盖思维导图中健康生活（exercise、healthy food、go to bed early）和理财（pocket money、buy books、sell old things to get pocket money）的全部内容，不少于5句话。解题时，先介绍自己引出主题，再分两部分展开：第一部分详细说明健康生活的三个要点，第二部分说明理财的三个要点，最后总结，确保语句通顺、要点齐全。
【解析】首先开头介绍自己并点明主题：“Hello, everyone! My name is Lingling. I have a healthy life and good ways to manage my money.”；接着阐述健康生活方式：“First, I keep healthy. I exercise every morning, like running or playing basketball. I eat healthy food, such as vegetables and fruit. I also go to bed early every night.”；然后说明理财方法：“Second, I manage my pocket money well. I often use my money to buy books, because I love reading. Sometimes I get some pocket money from selling old things. I never waste money on useless things.”；最后总结：“These are my ways. I think they are good for me!”，确保覆盖所有思维导图内容，句子连贯，符合要求。
【答案】My Healthy Life and Money Management
Hello, everyone! My name is Lingling. I have a healthy life and good ways to manage my money.
First, I keep healthy. I exercise every morning, like running or playing basketball. I eat healthy food, such as vegetables and fruit. I also go to bed early every night.
Second, I manage my pocket money well. I often use my money to buy books, because I love reading. Sometimes I get some pocket money from selling old things. I never waste money on useless things.
These are my ways. I think they are good for me!
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文、要点写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖思维导图的所有内容，结构清晰，分为健康生活和理财两部分，语言通顺自然，符合初中英语写作的规范，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先开头介绍自己并点明主题：“Hello, everyone! My name is Lingling. I have a healthy life and good ways to manage my money.”；接着阐述健康生活方式：“First, I keep healthy. I exercise every morning, like running or playing basketball. I eat healthy food, such as vegetables and fruit. I also go to bed early every night.”；然后说明理财方法：“Second, I manage my pocket money well. I often use my money to buy books, because I love reading. Sometimes I get some pocket money from selling old things. I never waste money on useless things.”；最后总结：“These are my ways. I think they are good for me!”，确保覆盖所有思维导图内容，句子连贯，符合要求。
【答案】My Healthy Life and Money Management
Hello, everyone! My name is Lingling. I have a healthy life and good ways to manage my money.
First, I keep healthy. I exercise every morning, like running or playing basketball. I eat healthy food, such as vegetables and fruit. I also go to bed early every night.
Second, I manage my pocket money well. I often use my money to buy books, because I love reading. Sometimes I get some pocket money from selling old things. I never waste money on useless things.
These are my ways. I think they are good for me!
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文、要点写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖思维导图的所有内容，结构清晰，分为健康生活和理财两部分，语言通顺自然，符合初中英语写作的规范，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.5
