Ⅶ. Think and write.
俗话说,“无以规矩不成方圆”。生活中,我们会遇到各种规则(如交通规则、校规等)。有时遵守规则需要耐心或克服困难,但它能保护我们或他人。请根据以下表格提示用英语写写你遵守规则的经历或感受。

写作要求:
(1)词数:80—120 词;
(2)可参考提供的要点、词汇和短语;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
俗话说,“无以规矩不成方圆”。生活中,我们会遇到各种规则(如交通规则、校规等)。有时遵守规则需要耐心或克服困难,但它能保护我们或他人。请根据以下表格提示用英语写写你遵守规则的经历或感受。
写作要求:
(1)词数:80—120 词;
(2)可参考提供的要点、词汇和短语;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
答案
Possible version:
A story about following rules
As the saying goes, "Nothing can be done without norms or standards." Following rules is important for everyone.
One rainy morning, I walked to school. When I reached a traffic light, it turned red. Some people crossed the street, but I remembered the rule: wait for the green light to cross. Though worried about being late, I waited patiently. Soon, the light turned green, and I crossed safely.
This rule protects us from danger. I learned that following rules may take time, but it keeps us safe. Now, I always remind my friends to obey traffic rules. Rules help us, not limit us!
A story about following rules
As the saying goes, "Nothing can be done without norms or standards." Following rules is important for everyone.
One rainy morning, I walked to school. When I reached a traffic light, it turned red. Some people crossed the street, but I remembered the rule: wait for the green light to cross. Though worried about being late, I waited patiently. Soon, the light turned green, and I crossed safely.
This rule protects us from danger. I learned that following rules may take time, but it keeps us safe. Now, I always remind my friends to obey traffic rules. Rules help us, not limit us!
解析
【分析】本题为英语写作题,要求结合给定的四个要点(时间地点、遵守的规则、具体做法、感悟)及参考词汇,写遵守规则的经历。解题思路:1. 确定写作主题为遵守交通规则的经历;2. 按要点组织内容:先以俗语引出遵守规则的重要性,再叙述具体事件(时间:雨天上学路上,遇到红灯,他人闯红灯,自己遵守规则等待绿灯),最后写感悟(遵守规则的意义,自身收获);3. 注意词数要求,不出现真实信息,灵活运用参考词汇。
【解析】写作步骤:① 开头:用俗语“Nothing can be done without norms or standards.”引出遵守规则的重要性,点明主题;② 中间叙事:交代时间(a rainy morning)、地点(on my way to school),遇到红灯时,部分人闯红灯,自己想起“wait for the green light to cross”的规则,虽担心迟到仍“stay patient”等待;③ 结尾:说明该规则“protect us from danger”,自己学到遵守规则需耐心,能“keep us safe”,还会提醒他人遵守规则,升华主题。
【答案】Possible version:
A story about following rules
As the saying goes, "Nothing can be done without norms or standards." Following rules is important for everyone.
One rainy morning, I walked to school. When I reached a traffic light, it turned red. Some people crossed the street, but I remembered the rule: wait for the green light to cross. Though worried about being late, I waited patiently. Soon, the light turned green, and I crossed safely.
This rule protects us from danger. I learned that following rules may take time, but it keeps us safe. Now, I always remind my friends to obey traffic rules. Rules help us, not limit us!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、交通规则英语表达、英语叙事写作
【点评】本文紧扣写作要点,结构清晰,叙事完整,准确运用参考词汇,语言流畅自然,感悟深刻,符合题目要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤:① 开头:用俗语“Nothing can be done without norms or standards.”引出遵守规则的重要性,点明主题;② 中间叙事:交代时间(a rainy morning)、地点(on my way to school),遇到红灯时,部分人闯红灯,自己想起“wait for the green light to cross”的规则,虽担心迟到仍“stay patient”等待;③ 结尾:说明该规则“protect us from danger”,自己学到遵守规则需耐心,能“keep us safe”,还会提醒他人遵守规则,升华主题。
【答案】Possible version:
A story about following rules
As the saying goes, "Nothing can be done without norms or standards." Following rules is important for everyone.
One rainy morning, I walked to school. When I reached a traffic light, it turned red. Some people crossed the street, but I remembered the rule: wait for the green light to cross. Though worried about being late, I waited patiently. Soon, the light turned green, and I crossed safely.
This rule protects us from danger. I learned that following rules may take time, but it keeps us safe. Now, I always remind my friends to obey traffic rules. Rules help us, not limit us!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、交通规则英语表达、英语叙事写作
【点评】本文紧扣写作要点,结构清晰,叙事完整,准确运用参考词汇,语言流畅自然,感悟深刻,符合题目要求。
【难度系数】0.6
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