十三、书面表达。(共7分)
请结合孟信的故事续写下文。提示:故事的结局为侄子心生愧疚。说一说侄子后来做出了什么改变?孟信之后是怎么对待这头牛的?你从故事中得到了什么启发?
请结合孟信的故事续写下文。提示:故事的结局为侄子心生愧疚。说一说侄子后来做出了什么改变?孟信之后是怎么对待这头牛的?你从故事中得到了什么启发?
答案
One possible version:
Later, Meng Xin's nephew said sorry to him. He promised that he would never lie again. Meng Xin was kind and forgave him. He took good care of the old ox. Although the ox was sick, Meng Xin loved it. He believed that being honest was more important than money. From then on, Meng Xin's nephew became an honest child and lived a happy life. This story tells us we should always be honest.
Later, Meng Xin's nephew said sorry to him. He promised that he would never lie again. Meng Xin was kind and forgave him. He took good care of the old ox. Although the ox was sick, Meng Xin loved it. He believed that being honest was more important than money. From then on, Meng Xin's nephew became an honest child and lived a happy life. This story tells us we should always be honest.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达的故事续写题,需紧扣三个核心提示:侄子的改变、孟信对牛的态度、故事的启发。解题思路:1. 承接孟信故事的诚信背景,先写侄子因愧疚做出的具体改变(道歉、承诺不再撒谎);2. 描述孟信的反应(善良原谅)以及对牛的照顾(体现仁爱);3. 点明故事的核心启发(诚信比金钱重要),确保内容完整,语句通顺,符合英语书面表达规范。
【解析】写作时需按提示分层次展开:首先写侄子的愧疚表现(道歉、承诺改正),接着写孟信的态度(原谅)及对牛的照顾,最后点明故事的启发,使用恰当的英语句式,保证逻辑连贯,覆盖所有要求要点。
【答案】One possible version:
Later, Meng Xin's nephew said sorry to him. He promised that he would never lie again. Meng Xin was kind and forgave him. He took good care of the old ox. Although the ox was sick, Meng Xin loved it. He believed that being honest was more important than money. From then on, Meng Xin's nephew became an honest child and lived a happy life. This story tells us we should always be honest.
【知识点】英语书面表达 故事续写 诚信主题
【点评】本题围绕诚信主题考查英语写作能力,要求学生结合给定故事续写,需覆盖所有提示要点,语言通顺连贯,体现故事的教育意义,难度适中,能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时需按提示分层次展开:首先写侄子的愧疚表现(道歉、承诺改正),接着写孟信的态度(原谅)及对牛的照顾,最后点明故事的启发,使用恰当的英语句式,保证逻辑连贯,覆盖所有要求要点。
【答案】One possible version:
Later, Meng Xin's nephew said sorry to him. He promised that he would never lie again. Meng Xin was kind and forgave him. He took good care of the old ox. Although the ox was sick, Meng Xin loved it. He believed that being honest was more important than money. From then on, Meng Xin's nephew became an honest child and lived a happy life. This story tells us we should always be honest.
【知识点】英语书面表达 故事续写 诚信主题
【点评】本题围绕诚信主题考查英语写作能力,要求学生结合给定故事续写,需覆盖所有提示要点,语言通顺连贯,体现故事的教育意义,难度适中,能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
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