【主题写作实践】
请结合下面的提示信息,以“Change for the Better”为题,写一篇文章介绍自己的成长和进步,并向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。
提示:
1. What did you use to be like?
2. What change(s) have you made?
3. What are you like now?
要求:
1. 短文内容包括提示中的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得透露个人真实信息;
3. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Change for the Better
Everything changes all the time, and so do I.
请结合下面的提示信息,以“Change for the Better”为题,写一篇文章介绍自己的成长和进步,并向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。
提示:
1. What did you use to be like?
2. What change(s) have you made?
3. What are you like now?
要求:
1. 短文内容包括提示中的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得透露个人真实信息;
3. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Change for the Better
Everything changes all the time, and so do I.
答案
I used to be a shy and quiet girl. I was afraid of speaking in public, and never dared to answer teachers' questions in class. I even refused to take part in any school activities.
Later, my head teacher had a long talk with me and encouraged me to join the school English corner. I kept practicing speaking with my partners every week.
Now I am outgoing and confident. I can give speeches in front of crowds bravely, and I have made lots of new friends as well. I really love this better version of myself.
Later, my head teacher had a long talk with me and encouraged me to join the school English corner. I kept practicing speaking with my partners every week.
Now I am outgoing and confident. I can give speeches in front of crowds bravely, and I have made lots of new friends as well. I really love this better version of myself.
解析
本题是单元主题写作题,核心考查本单元所学的used to do(过去常常/曾经……)结构的运用,写作需要完整覆盖三个提示要点:首先介绍过去的性格、行为特点,接着说明自己做出改变的具体行动,最后描述现在的状态和成长收获,注意控制词数在80左右,不透露个人真实信息,行文符合向校刊投稿的积极风格即可。
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