图1 典例赏析
榜样就像一座灯塔，为我们指引方向。在我们成长过程中一定有很多值得学习的榜样，比如科学家、老师、同学……你们学校英语俱乐部将举行主题为“The Power of an Example”的征文比赛，请你根据提示，写一篇英语短文谈一谈你心中的榜样。

注意：词数80-100。


审题指导：
1. 体裁：说明文 2. 时态：以一般现在时为主 3. 人称：以第三人称为主
写作框架：

优秀范文：

The Power of an Example
In my heart, my classmate Zhang Wei is the most touching example for me.
Zhang Wei has great interest in science and he is really hard-working. He spent most of his spare time inventing small useful things last term. What's more, he often helps classmates work out difficult physics problems.
From him, I learn persistence can help us make progress. Now I actively join in the school science club and try to think creatively, and I become much more hard-working than before.

【分析】首先明确征文主题为“The Power of an Example”，需围绕“榜样的力量”展开，按照审题指导，体裁为说明文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一步确定自己的榜样（如同学张伟）；第二步描述榜样的具体事迹与品质（对科学感兴趣、勤奋、利用课余时间发明实用小物件、帮助同学解决难题）；第三步阐述榜样对自己的影响（学到坚持的重要性，自身行为的改变），确保词数在80-100之间，紧扣主题。
【解析】根据写作框架，先点明自己心中的榜样是同学张伟；接着介绍张伟的品质与具体行为：对科学感兴趣、勤奋，课余时间发明实用小物件，还常帮同学解决物理难题；最后说明从他身上学到的道理及自身的改变，呼应主题“榜样的力量”，符合体裁、时态、人称要求，词数达标。
【答案】The Power of an Example
In my heart, my classmate Zhang Wei is the most touching example for me.
Zhang Wei has great interest in science and he is really hard-working. He spent most of his spare time inventing small useful things last term. What's more, he often helps classmates work out difficult physics problems.
From him, I learn persistence can help us make progress. Now I actively join in the school science club and try to think creatively, and I become much more hard-working than before.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时运用、第三人称叙事
【点评】范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，通过具体事例展现榜样的品质，突出榜样对自身的积极影响，符合征文要求，语言流畅，词数达标。
【难度系数】0.5