三 假如你是Amy,请以“My Happy Weekends”为题,写一篇英语短文介绍你的周末活动,可适当发挥想象。
要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯;2.不少于5句话。
提示:visit grandparents, watch TV, play football...
usually, always, often, sometimes...
My Happy Weekends
要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯;2.不少于5句话。
提示:visit grandparents, watch TV, play football...
usually, always, often, sometimes...
My Happy Weekends
My name is Amy. My weekends are always fun. I usually visit my grandparents on Saturday morning. We talk and play together happily.
In the afternoon, I often play football with my friends.
Sometimes I stay at home and watch TV on Sunday. I feel relaxed all the time.
I love my wonderful weekends.
答案
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My Happy Weekends
My name is Amy. My weekends are always fun. I usually visit my grandparents on Saturday morning. We talk and play together happily. In the afternoon, I often play football with my friends. Sometimes I stay at home and watch TV on Sunday. I feel relaxed all the time. I love my wonderful weekends.
My Happy Weekends
My name is Amy. My weekends are always fun. I usually visit my grandparents on Saturday morning. We talk and play together happily. In the afternoon, I often play football with my friends. Sometimes I stay at home and watch TV on Sunday. I feel relaxed all the time. I love my wonderful weekends.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“My Happy Weekends”,身份设定为Amy;需结合提示的活动(看望祖父母、踢足球、看电视等)及频率副词(usually、often、sometimes),要求语句通顺连贯且不少于5句话。写作思路可分为四步:1. 开篇介绍自己并点明周末开心的主题;2. 描述周六的活动(上午看望祖父母,下午和朋友踢足球);3. 描述周日的活动(有时在家看电视);4. 结尾表达对周末的喜爱,确保符合所有要求。
【解析】按照上述思路,运用一般现在时(描述经常性活动),结合指定频率副词组织内容,确保语句通顺连贯,具体如下:My name is Amy. My weekends are always fun. I usually visit my grandparents on Saturday morning. We talk and play together happily. In the afternoon, I often play football with my friends. Sometimes I stay at home and watch TV on Sunday. I feel relaxed all the time. I love my wonderful weekends.
【答案】My name is Amy. My weekends are always fun. I usually visit my grandparents on Saturday morning. We talk and play together happily. In the afternoon, I often play football with my friends. Sometimes I stay at home and watch TV on Sunday. I feel relaxed all the time. I love my wonderful weekends.
【知识点】英语话题写作、频率副词运用、一般现在时
【点评】该作文紧扣题目要求,身份明确,合理运用了指定的频率副词和活动提示,语句通顺连贯,内容完整,表达了对周末的喜爱之情,符合不少于5句话的要求,是一篇符合标准的话题作文。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】按照上述思路,运用一般现在时(描述经常性活动),结合指定频率副词组织内容,确保语句通顺连贯,具体如下:My name is Amy. My weekends are always fun. I usually visit my grandparents on Saturday morning. We talk and play together happily. In the afternoon, I often play football with my friends. Sometimes I stay at home and watch TV on Sunday. I feel relaxed all the time. I love my wonderful weekends.
【答案】My name is Amy. My weekends are always fun. I usually visit my grandparents on Saturday morning. We talk and play together happily. In the afternoon, I often play football with my friends. Sometimes I stay at home and watch TV on Sunday. I feel relaxed all the time. I love my wonderful weekends.
【知识点】英语话题写作、频率副词运用、一般现在时
【点评】该作文紧扣题目要求,身份明确,合理运用了指定的频率副词和活动提示,语句通顺连贯,内容完整,表达了对周末的喜爱之情,符合不少于5句话的要求,是一篇符合标准的话题作文。
【难度系数】0.7
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