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主题语境:人与社会——良好的人际关系和人际交往
写作题目:假设你是Jack,请根据表格内容,介绍你和好朋友Mike之间的相同点和不同点。80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Step 1.辨模式(Patterns)——辨识特征 列纲建模
1.辨人称: 第一人称
2.辨时态: 一般现在时
3.辨核心:介绍自己和朋友(或家人)的相同点和不同点
Step 2.明实例(Examples)——润色成篇 典例示范
续表
范文点评:
本文语言流畅,逻辑清晰,要点齐全,具体优点有:
①开篇点题,点明我和朋友有相同点和不同点。
②分别运用as...as和比较级描述相同点、不同点,语言结构丰富。
③运用should表达观点。
④灵活运用as long as引导的条件状语从句。
Step 3.会实践(Practice)——迁移创新 实战演练
请你以“My Friend”为题写一篇短文,介绍你朋友并谈谈你对朋友的看法。
内容包括:
1.你对朋友的看法;
2.介绍你的一个朋友,比较你们的性格特点、生活习惯和学习成绩等情况;
3.简单介绍朋友之间相互帮助的一件事情,呼吁大家珍惜友谊。
要求:
1.请完整表述以上信息。
2.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Friend
Different people have different opinions about friends.
写作题目:假设你是Jack,请根据表格内容,介绍你和好朋友Mike之间的相同点和不同点。80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Step 1.辨模式(Patterns)——辨识特征 列纲建模
1.辨人称: 第一人称
2.辨时态: 一般现在时
3.辨核心:介绍自己和朋友(或家人)的相同点和不同点
Step 2.明实例(Examples)——润色成篇 典例示范
续表
范文点评:
本文语言流畅,逻辑清晰,要点齐全,具体优点有:
①开篇点题,点明我和朋友有相同点和不同点。
②分别运用as...as和比较级描述相同点、不同点,语言结构丰富。
③运用should表达观点。
④灵活运用as long as引导的条件状语从句。
Step 3.会实践(Practice)——迁移创新 实战演练
请你以“My Friend”为题写一篇短文,介绍你朋友并谈谈你对朋友的看法。
内容包括:
1.你对朋友的看法;
2.介绍你的一个朋友,比较你们的性格特点、生活习惯和学习成绩等情况;
3.简单介绍朋友之间相互帮助的一件事情,呼吁大家珍惜友谊。
要求:
1.请完整表述以上信息。
2.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Friend
Different people have different opinions about friends.
答案
My Friend
Different people have different opinions about friends. In my opinion, friends are like books. They are necessary in my life and I can always learn from them.
Jane is one of my best friends. She is very outgoing and we are both good at sports. As for study, she is more hard-working, so she can get better grades than me. She often helps me with my study. Last Wednesday, I failed the maths test. Jane didn't go home until she helped me work out all the maths problems. I was very thankful to her.
Friends play an important role in our life. Jane is important for me, too.
Different people have different opinions about friends. In my opinion, friends are like books. They are necessary in my life and I can always learn from them.
Jane is one of my best friends. She is very outgoing and we are both good at sports. As for study, she is more hard-working, so she can get better grades than me. She often helps me with my study. Last Wednesday, I failed the maths test. Jane didn't go home until she helped me work out all the maths problems. I was very thankful to her.
Friends play an important role in our life. Jane is important for me, too.
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以“My Friend”为题完成短文。需明确写作规则：人称用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主；内容要涵盖对朋友的看法、与朋友在性格/习惯/学习上的对比、朋友互助的事例，最后呼吁珍惜友谊；开头已给出，需控制在80词左右。写作时需先承接开头表达对朋友的观点，再介绍朋友并对比差异，加入具体互助小事，最后升华主题，运用合适句式丰富表达。
【解析】1. 承接开头句，表达对朋友的看法，如“Friends are like books, necessary in my life.”；2. 介绍朋友（如Jane），对比性格（如She is outgoing, we both like sports）、学习情况（She is more hard-working, gets better grades）；3. 加入互助事例（如Last Wednesday helped me with math test）；4. 结尾点明友谊重要性，呼应主题。注意控制词数，正确使用一般现在时和形容词比较级。
【答案】My Friend
Different people have different opinions about friends. In my opinion, friends are like books. They are necessary in my life and I can always learn from them.
Jane is one of my best friends. She is very outgoing and we are both good at sports. As for study, she is more hard-working, so she can get better grades than me. She often helps me with my study. Last Wednesday, I failed the maths test. Jane didn't go home until she helped me work out all the maths problems. I was very thankful to her.
Friends play an important role in our life. Jane is important for me, too.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、形容词比较级、一般现在时
【点评】本文紧扣写作要求，要点齐全，逻辑清晰；运用形容词比较级描述朋友间的差异，加入具体互助事例使内容真实，结尾升华主题，符合初中英语写作的规范要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 承接开头句，表达对朋友的看法，如“Friends are like books, necessary in my life.”；2. 介绍朋友（如Jane），对比性格（如She is outgoing, we both like sports）、学习情况（She is more hard-working, gets better grades）；3. 加入互助事例（如Last Wednesday helped me with math test）；4. 结尾点明友谊重要性，呼应主题。注意控制词数，正确使用一般现在时和形容词比较级。
【答案】My Friend
Different people have different opinions about friends. In my opinion, friends are like books. They are necessary in my life and I can always learn from them.
Jane is one of my best friends. She is very outgoing and we are both good at sports. As for study, she is more hard-working, so she can get better grades than me. She often helps me with my study. Last Wednesday, I failed the maths test. Jane didn't go home until she helped me work out all the maths problems. I was very thankful to her.
Friends play an important role in our life. Jane is important for me, too.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、形容词比较级、一般现在时
【点评】本文紧扣写作要求，要点齐全，逻辑清晰；运用形容词比较级描述朋友间的差异，加入具体互助事例使内容真实，结尾升华主题，符合初中英语写作的规范要求。
【难度系数】0.6
