七、书面表达
假设你是李华,你校正在举办以“Our amazing world”为主题的英语征文活动。请你根据以下提示,选取其中一个角度,阐述你的理由及看法,介绍你眼中的“美好世界”。
注意:(1)提供信息仅供参考,可做适当拓展;
(2)文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;
(3)词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。

I think makes our world amazing.
假设你是李华,你校正在举办以“Our amazing world”为主题的英语征文活动。请你根据以下提示,选取其中一个角度,阐述你的理由及看法,介绍你眼中的“美好世界”。
注意:(1)提供信息仅供参考,可做适当拓展;
(2)文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;
(3)词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
I think makes our world amazing.
答案
One possible version:
I think a traditional festival makes our world amazing. The Spring Festival is one of the most important festivals in China.
It usually comes in January or February. Before the festival, families clean houses and make them beautiful. On New Year's Eve, families get together and have a big dinner with dumplings. Children are very happy because they can get lucky money.
I love the Spring Festival best. It brings families together and fills people with warmth and hope.
I think a traditional festival makes our world amazing. The Spring Festival is one of the most important festivals in China.
It usually comes in January or February. Before the festival, families clean houses and make them beautiful. On New Year's Eve, families get together and have a big dinner with dumplings. Children are very happy because they can get lucky money.
I love the Spring Festival best. It brings families together and fills people with warmth and hope.
解析
【分析】本题是英语书面表达题,主题为“Our amazing world”,要求从传统节日、神奇动物、重要植物三个角度选其一,结合提示拓展写作,词数约80,开头已给出。解题思路:先确定易展开的写作角度(如传统节日),再围绕该角度补充具体细节(节日时间、活动、意义),紧扣“让世界美好”的主题,组织语言时注意符合词数要求,不出现真实信息,衔接自然。
【解析】写作步骤:1. 衔接给定开头,点明观点(传统节日让世界美好,以春节为例);2. 介绍春节基本情况:是中国重要节日,通常在1-2月;3. 描述节日活动:节前打扫房屋,除夕全家团圆吃年夜饭,孩子可获得压岁钱;4. 总结春节意义:凝聚家人,带来温暖与希望,呼应主题。
【答案】One possible version:
I think a traditional festival makes our world amazing. The Spring Festival is one of the most important festivals in China.
It usually comes in January or February. Before the festival, families clean houses and make them beautiful. On New Year's Eve, families get together and have a big dinner with dumplings. Children are very happy because they can get lucky money.
I love the Spring Festival best. It brings families together and fills people with warmth and hope.
【知识点】英语书面表达,节日话题写作
【点评】本题贴近学生生活,提示清晰,既考查学生对节日相关英语词汇、句型的运用能力,又引导学生表达对主题的理解,符合初中英语写作的考查要求,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤:1. 衔接给定开头,点明观点(传统节日让世界美好,以春节为例);2. 介绍春节基本情况:是中国重要节日,通常在1-2月;3. 描述节日活动:节前打扫房屋,除夕全家团圆吃年夜饭,孩子可获得压岁钱;4. 总结春节意义:凝聚家人,带来温暖与希望,呼应主题。
【答案】One possible version:
I think a traditional festival makes our world amazing. The Spring Festival is one of the most important festivals in China.
It usually comes in January or February. Before the festival, families clean houses and make them beautiful. On New Year's Eve, families get together and have a big dinner with dumplings. Children are very happy because they can get lucky money.
I love the Spring Festival best. It brings families together and fills people with warmth and hope.
【知识点】英语书面表达,节日话题写作
【点评】本题贴近学生生活,提示清晰,既考查学生对节日相关英语词汇、句型的运用能力,又引导学生表达对主题的理解,符合初中英语写作的考查要求,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
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