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Ⅲ. 书面表达
假如你所在学校将要举办“我心中的英雄”主题英语演讲活动。请你以“My Hero — Zhang Guimei”为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，向大家介绍张桂梅校长的事迹并表达你的感想。
（1）张桂梅是一位贫困山区女子高中的校长；
（2）她帮助很多女孩免费上学，让她们有机会考上大学；
（3）她工作非常辛苦，每天只睡几个小时；
（4）她的身体不好，但从不放弃自己的工作；
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：校长 headmaster；贫困山区 poor mountain area；免费的 free
写作要求：
（1）词数：80-100；
（2）题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
My Hero — Zhang Guimei
Hello, everyone. Today I want to tell you about my hero — Zhang Guimei.
假如你所在学校将要举办“我心中的英雄”主题英语演讲活动。请你以“My Hero — Zhang Guimei”为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，向大家介绍张桂梅校长的事迹并表达你的感想。
（1）张桂梅是一位贫困山区女子高中的校长；
（2）她帮助很多女孩免费上学，让她们有机会考上大学；
（3）她工作非常辛苦，每天只睡几个小时；
（4）她的身体不好，但从不放弃自己的工作；
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：校长 headmaster；贫困山区 poor mountain area；免费的 free
写作要求：
（1）词数：80-100；
（2）题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
My Hero — Zhang Guimei
Hello, everyone. Today I want to tell you about my hero — Zhang Guimei.
She is the headmaster who runs a high school for girls in a poor mountain area.
Because many families there couldn't afford education, she decided to help girls go to school for free so that they could have a chance to go to college.
She works very hard and sleeps only a few hours every day.
Even though she is in poor health, she never gives up.
In my opinion, Zhang Guimei is a true hero because she always thinks of others first.
I think we should learn from her and study hard, so that one day we can also help those in need.
Thank you!
答案
( One possible version )
My Hero — Zhang Guimei
Hello, everyone. Today I want to tell you about my hero — Zhang Guimei. She is the headmaster who runs a high school for girls in a poor mountain area. Because many families there couldn't afford education, she decided to help girls go to school for free so that they could have a chance to go to college. She works very hard and sleeps only a few hours every day. Even though she is in poor health, she never gives up.
In my opinion, Zhang Guimei is a true hero because she always thinks of others first. I think we should learn from her and study hard, so that one day we can also help those in need.
Thank you!
My Hero — Zhang Guimei
Hello, everyone. Today I want to tell you about my hero — Zhang Guimei. She is the headmaster who runs a high school for girls in a poor mountain area. Because many families there couldn't afford education, she decided to help girls go to school for free so that they could have a chance to go to college. She works very hard and sleeps only a few hours every day. Even though she is in poor health, she never gives up.
In my opinion, Zhang Guimei is a true hero because she always thinks of others first. I think we should learn from her and study hard, so that one day we can also help those in need.
Thank you!
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达中的演讲稿写作题，主题是介绍张桂梅校长。解题思路：首先明确写作要求，需涵盖给定的5个要点，词数80-100，开头和题目已提供，行文连贯且可适当发挥；接着梳理内容顺序：先介绍张桂梅的身份，再讲述她帮助女孩免费上学的事迹，然后描述她的工作状态与身体情况，最后表达个人感想；最后选用合适的英语词汇和句式，确保要点齐全、逻辑通顺，符合演讲稿的语气。
【解析】承接开头，先点明张桂梅是贫困山区女子高中的校长，因当地家庭无力承担教育费用，她帮助女孩免费上学以获得考大学的机会；再描述她工作辛苦，每天仅睡几小时，即便身体不好也不放弃工作；最后表达自己的感想，认为她是真正的英雄，应向她学习并帮助他人，收尾致谢。
【答案】( One possible version )
My Hero — Zhang Guimei
Hello, everyone. Today I want to tell you about my hero — Zhang Guimei. She is the headmaster who runs a high school for girls in a poor mountain area. Because many families there couldn't afford education, she decided to help girls go to school for free so that they could have a chance to go to college. She works very hard and sleeps only a few hours every day. Even though she is in poor health, she never gives up.
In my opinion, Zhang Guimei is a true hero because she always thinks of others first. I think we should learn from her and study hard, so that one day we can also help those in need.
Thank you!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、人物介绍类书面表达
【点评】该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，行文连贯流畅，语言准确恰当，符合演讲稿的格式要求，情感真挚，体现了对英雄的崇敬之情，是一篇符合要求的优秀作品。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】承接开头，先点明张桂梅是贫困山区女子高中的校长，因当地家庭无力承担教育费用，她帮助女孩免费上学以获得考大学的机会；再描述她工作辛苦，每天仅睡几小时，即便身体不好也不放弃工作；最后表达自己的感想，认为她是真正的英雄，应向她学习并帮助他人，收尾致谢。
【答案】( One possible version )
My Hero — Zhang Guimei
Hello, everyone. Today I want to tell you about my hero — Zhang Guimei. She is the headmaster who runs a high school for girls in a poor mountain area. Because many families there couldn't afford education, she decided to help girls go to school for free so that they could have a chance to go to college. She works very hard and sleeps only a few hours every day. Even though she is in poor health, she never gives up.
In my opinion, Zhang Guimei is a true hero because she always thinks of others first. I think we should learn from her and study hard, so that one day we can also help those in need.
Thank you!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、人物介绍类书面表达
【点评】该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，行文连贯流畅，语言准确恰当，符合演讲稿的格式要求，情感真挚，体现了对英雄的崇敬之情，是一篇符合要求的优秀作品。
【难度系数】0.6
