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Ⅹ. Writing(写作)9%
请以“Computers in my eyes”为题写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的工具。
要求:1. 写出你最喜欢的工具是什么；
2. 写出它的用处(至少1点)；
3. 语句通顺，不少于50词，可适当发挥。
参考词汇:useful,help,can,I think,important
Computers in my eyes
请以“Computers in my eyes”为题写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的工具。
要求:1. 写出你最喜欢的工具是什么；
2. 写出它的用处(至少1点)；
3. 语句通顺，不少于50词，可适当发挥。
参考词汇:useful,help,can,I think,important
Computers in my eyes
答案
参考范文:
Computers in my eyes
Computers are very useful. The first computer was very big. It was as big as a room. Now computers are small. We have laptops. We can use computers to write emails,do homework and search for information. Sometimes I listen to music on the computer to relax myself.
We should use computers correctly. Don't drink near the computer. Set a safe password. Don't let others use your computer easily. I think computers help me a lot. They make my study easier and my life more interesting. I like using computers properly every day.
Computers in my eyes
Computers are very useful. The first computer was very big. It was as big as a room. Now computers are small. We have laptops. We can use computers to write emails,do homework and search for information. Sometimes I listen to music on the computer to relax myself.
We should use computers correctly. Don't drink near the computer. Set a safe password. Don't let others use your computer easily. I think computers help me a lot. They make my study easier and my life more interesting. I like using computers properly every day.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以“Computers in my eyes”为题，介绍最喜欢的工具，需包含：1. 明确最喜欢的工具（电脑）；2. 至少1点用处；3. 语句通顺、不少于50词，需使用参考词汇。解题思路：①开篇点题，说明电脑是自己最喜欢的工具；②可简单提及电脑的发展变化（如从大型到小型）；③列举电脑的具体用处（如写邮件、做作业、查资料等）；④补充正确使用电脑的注意事项；⑤结尾表达对电脑的看法，合理运用参考词汇，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照写作思路组织内容，紧扣要求完成短文：
Computers in my eyes
Computers are very useful. The first computer was very big, as big as a room. Now we have small laptops. We can use computers to write emails, do homework and search for information. Sometimes I listen to music on the computer to relax myself.
We should use computers correctly: don’t drink near it, set a safe password, and don’t let others use it easily. I think computers help me a lot. They make my study easier and life more interesting. I like using them properly every day.
【答案】
Computers in my eyes
Computers are very useful. The first computer was very big. It was as big as a room. Now computers are small. We have laptops. We can use computers to write emails, do homework and search for information. Sometimes I listen to music on the computer to relax myself.
We should use computers correctly. Don't drink near the computer. Set a safe password. Don't let others use your computer easily. I think computers help me a lot. They make my study easier and my life more interesting. I like using computers properly every day.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、词汇运用
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，清晰介绍了最喜欢的工具是电脑，列举了电脑的多种实用功能，补充了正确使用电脑的注意事项，结尾表达了对电脑的认可，语句通顺、符合词数要求，恰当运用了参考词汇，结构完整。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确题目要求：以“Computers in my eyes”为题，介绍最喜欢的工具，需包含：1. 明确最喜欢的工具（电脑）；2. 至少1点用处；3. 语句通顺、不少于50词，需使用参考词汇。解题思路：①开篇点题，说明电脑是自己最喜欢的工具；②可简单提及电脑的发展变化（如从大型到小型）；③列举电脑的具体用处（如写邮件、做作业、查资料等）；④补充正确使用电脑的注意事项；⑤结尾表达对电脑的看法，合理运用参考词汇，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照写作思路组织内容，紧扣要求完成短文：
Computers in my eyes
Computers are very useful. The first computer was very big, as big as a room. Now we have small laptops. We can use computers to write emails, do homework and search for information. Sometimes I listen to music on the computer to relax myself.
We should use computers correctly: don’t drink near it, set a safe password, and don’t let others use it easily. I think computers help me a lot. They make my study easier and life more interesting. I like using them properly every day.
【答案】
Computers in my eyes
Computers are very useful. The first computer was very big. It was as big as a room. Now computers are small. We have laptops. We can use computers to write emails, do homework and search for information. Sometimes I listen to music on the computer to relax myself.
We should use computers correctly. Don't drink near the computer. Set a safe password. Don't let others use your computer easily. I think computers help me a lot. They make my study easier and my life more interesting. I like using computers properly every day.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、词汇运用
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，清晰介绍了最喜欢的工具是电脑，列举了电脑的多种实用功能，补充了正确使用电脑的注意事项，结尾表达了对电脑的认可，语句通顺、符合词数要求，恰当运用了参考词汇，结构完整。
【难度系数】
0.5
