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Ⅳ. 书面表达(15分)
35. “民以食为天”,食品安全和健康受到越来越多的关注和重视。请你以“Say no to junk food”为题,根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。
要点:(1)垃圾食品虽然美味,但对健康无益,而且其过多的包装会产生更多的垃圾；
(2)远离垃圾食品,选择正确的生活方式:①三餐要有规律,少吃零食;②多吃蔬菜和水果等,以提供身体必需的营养;③多参加户外活动。
要求:(1)词数80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)内容必须包括上述所有要点,可进行适当发挥。
参考词汇:过多包装 over packaging;有规律地 regularly;营养 nutrition
Say no to junk food
Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food.
In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger.
35. “民以食为天”,食品安全和健康受到越来越多的关注和重视。请你以“Say no to junk food”为题,根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。
要点:(1)垃圾食品虽然美味,但对健康无益,而且其过多的包装会产生更多的垃圾；
(2)远离垃圾食品,选择正确的生活方式:①三餐要有规律,少吃零食;②多吃蔬菜和水果等,以提供身体必需的营养;③多参加户外活动。
要求:(1)词数80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)内容必须包括上述所有要点,可进行适当发挥。
参考词汇:过多包装 over packaging;有规律地 regularly;营养 nutrition
Say no to junk food
Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food.
In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger.
答案
35.【参考范文】
Say no to junk food
Nowadays, more and more attention hasbeen paid to food safety and health. As far as Iam concerned, we should say no to junk food.
There is no doubt that junk food isdelicious and attractive, but it surely doesharm to our body. Meanwhile, the overpackaging leads to much more rubbish.
To get away from junk food, we shouldchoose a healthy lifestyle. There are many tipsto follow. First, regularly eat three meals a dayon time. Try to eat as few snacks and little fastfood as possible. Second, eat more fruit andvegetables which can provide the nutrition weneed. What's more, do more outdoor activities,which are good for our health.
In a word, a healthy diet with less junkfood can help make us stronger and stronger.
Say no to junk food
Nowadays, more and more attention hasbeen paid to food safety and health. As far as Iam concerned, we should say no to junk food.
There is no doubt that junk food isdelicious and attractive, but it surely doesharm to our body. Meanwhile, the overpackaging leads to much more rubbish.
To get away from junk food, we shouldchoose a healthy lifestyle. There are many tipsto follow. First, regularly eat three meals a dayon time. Try to eat as few snacks and little fastfood as possible. Second, eat more fruit andvegetables which can provide the nutrition weneed. What's more, do more outdoor activities,which are good for our health.
In a word, a healthy diet with less junkfood can help make us stronger and stronger.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“Say no to junk food”为题，结合给定要点完成短文。解题思路如下：1. 明确结构：开头与结尾已给出，需补充中间主体段；2. 主体段分两部分：先阐述垃圾食品的危害（美味但有害健康、过度包装产生垃圾），再说明远离垃圾食品的健康生活方式（三餐规律少吃零食、多吃蔬果补充营养、多参加户外活动）；3. 注意词数80左右，适当发挥，正确使用参考词汇，确保内容完整、逻辑通顺。
【解析】
1. 中间主体前半部分：对应要点(1)，点明垃圾食品虽美味但有害健康，同时其过度包装会产生更多垃圾；2. 中间主体后半部分：对应要点(2)，从三个方面说明健康生活方式：①三餐规律，少吃零食；②多吃蔬果提供所需营养；③多参加户外活动；3. 结尾段呼应主题，总结健康饮食的好处。
【答案】
Say no to junk food
Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food.
There is no doubt that junk food is delicious and attractive, but it surely does harm to our body. Meanwhile, the over packaging leads to much more rubbish.
To get away from junk food, we should choose a healthy lifestyle. There are many tips to follow. First, regularly eat three meals a day on time. Try to eat as few snacks and little fast food as possible. Second, eat more fruit and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need. What's more, do more outdoor activities, which are good for our health.
In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点式写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有给定要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言通顺，恰当使用参考词汇，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“Say no to junk food”为题，结合给定要点完成短文。解题思路如下：1. 明确结构：开头与结尾已给出，需补充中间主体段；2. 主体段分两部分：先阐述垃圾食品的危害（美味但有害健康、过度包装产生垃圾），再说明远离垃圾食品的健康生活方式（三餐规律少吃零食、多吃蔬果补充营养、多参加户外活动）；3. 注意词数80左右，适当发挥，正确使用参考词汇，确保内容完整、逻辑通顺。
【解析】
1. 中间主体前半部分：对应要点(1)，点明垃圾食品虽美味但有害健康，同时其过度包装会产生更多垃圾；2. 中间主体后半部分：对应要点(2)，从三个方面说明健康生活方式：①三餐规律，少吃零食；②多吃蔬果提供所需营养；③多参加户外活动；3. 结尾段呼应主题，总结健康饮食的好处。
【答案】
Say no to junk food
Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food.
There is no doubt that junk food is delicious and attractive, but it surely does harm to our body. Meanwhile, the over packaging leads to much more rubbish.
To get away from junk food, we should choose a healthy lifestyle. There are many tips to follow. First, regularly eat three meals a day on time. Try to eat as few snacks and little fast food as possible. Second, eat more fruit and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need. What's more, do more outdoor activities, which are good for our health.
In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点式写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有给定要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言通顺，恰当使用参考词汇，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
