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八、(2025·南京联合体期末)书面表达(22分)
你校英文网站正面向全校学生举办主题为“How to Go Green at School”的征文活动。请你根据竞赛启事,用英语写一篇征文投稿。
注意:1. 内容涵盖要点,全文连贯、通顺;2. 词数80左右(已给出的征文开头和结尾不计入总词数);3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
How to Go Green at School
Without green, life has no hope. Going green means we should
Thanks for your reading!
你校英文网站正面向全校学生举办主题为“How to Go Green at School”的征文活动。请你根据竞赛启事,用英语写一篇征文投稿。
注意:1. 内容涵盖要点,全文连贯、通顺;2. 词数80左右(已给出的征文开头和结尾不计入总词数);3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
How to Go Green at School
Without green, life has no hope. Going green means we should
protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution. However, I often see bad behaviours in our school, such as wasting paper, leaving lights on, and littering.
To make our school greener, here's my advice: First,
→动词不定式短语作目的状语。
turn off lights and electric fans when leaving classrooms.
Second, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Third,
bring reusable water bottles instead of plastic ones. Finally,
plant more trees in school gardens.
Small actions make big differences. Let's work together
for a greener school!
To make our school greener, here's my advice: First,
→动词不定式短语作目的状语。
turn off lights and electric fans when leaving classrooms.
Second, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Third,
bring reusable water bottles instead of plastic ones. Finally,
plant more trees in school gardens.
Small actions make big differences. Let's work together
for a greener school!
Thanks for your reading!
答案
One possible version:
How to Go Green at School
Without green, life has no hope. Going green means we should protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution. However, I often see bad behaviours in our school, such as wasting paper, leaving lights on, and littering.
To make our school greener, here's my advice: First,
→动词不定式短语作目的状语。
turn off lights and electric fans when leaving classrooms.
Second, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Third,
bring reusable water bottles instead of plastic ones. Finally,
plant more trees in school gardens.
Small actions make big differences. Let's work together
for a greener school!
Thanks for your reading!
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:短文须涵盖竞赛启事中提及的三个要点going green的含义、校园不良行为、建议措施，语言简洁、连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，定义“going green”为节约资源、减少污染；第二步，列举校园中常见的浪费行为；第三步，分点给出具体措施；第四步，号召集体行动。
[亮点词汇]
① save resources节约资源 ② reduce pollution减少污染
③ reusable water bottles可重复使用的水瓶
[高分句型]
① Going green means we should protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution.宾语从句省略了that
② First, turn off lights and electric fans when leaving classrooms.祈使句
How to Go Green at School
Without green, life has no hope. Going green means we should protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution. However, I often see bad behaviours in our school, such as wasting paper, leaving lights on, and littering.
To make our school greener, here's my advice: First,
→动词不定式短语作目的状语。
turn off lights and electric fans when leaving classrooms.
Second, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Third,
bring reusable water bottles instead of plastic ones. Finally,
plant more trees in school gardens.
Small actions make big differences. Let's work together
for a greener school!
Thanks for your reading!
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:短文须涵盖竞赛启事中提及的三个要点going green的含义、校园不良行为、建议措施，语言简洁、连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，定义“going green”为节约资源、减少污染；第二步，列举校园中常见的浪费行为；第三步，分点给出具体措施；第四步，号召集体行动。
[亮点词汇]
① save resources节约资源 ② reduce pollution减少污染
③ reusable water bottles可重复使用的水瓶
[高分句型]
① Going green means we should protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution.宾语从句省略了that
② First, turn off lights and electric fans when leaving classrooms.祈使句
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：需围绕“How to Go Green at School”主题，涵盖三个要点（“going green”的含义、校园不良行为、环保建议），词数80左右，不得提及个人信息。解题思路：1. 解释“going green”的含义，结合环保核心，即节约资源、减少污染；2. 列举校园中常见的浪费/不环保行为，如浪费纸张、忘关电器、乱扔垃圾；3. 分点给出具体可行的环保建议，如随手关电器、重复利用物品、使用可重复用品、植树等；4. 结尾发出号召，呼应主题，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
本文为材料类英语书面表达，时态以一般现在时为主，结构如下：
1. 承接开头，解释“going green”的含义：Going green means we should protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution.
2. 列举校园不良行为：However, I often see bad behaviours in our school, such as wasting paper, leaving lights on, and littering.
3. 分点给出环保建议：First, turn off lights and electric fans when leaving classrooms. Second, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Third, bring reusable water bottles instead of plastic ones. Finally, plant more trees in school gardens.
4. 结尾呼应主题，发出号召：Small actions make big differences. Let's work together for a greener school!
全文紧扣要点，语言简洁连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to Go Green at School
Without green, life has no hope. Going green means we should protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution. However, I often see bad behaviours in our school, such as wasting paper, leaving lights on, and littering.
To make our school greener, here's my advice: First, turn off lights and electric fans when leaving classrooms. Second, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Third, bring reusable water bottles instead of plastic ones. Finally, plant more trees in school gardens.
Small actions make big differences. Let's work together for a greener school!
Thanks for your reading!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环保主题词汇、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖了竞赛启事要求的三个核心要点，结构清晰，分点阐述建议，语言简洁通顺，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确题目要求：需围绕“How to Go Green at School”主题，涵盖三个要点（“going green”的含义、校园不良行为、环保建议），词数80左右，不得提及个人信息。解题思路：1. 解释“going green”的含义，结合环保核心，即节约资源、减少污染；2. 列举校园中常见的浪费/不环保行为，如浪费纸张、忘关电器、乱扔垃圾；3. 分点给出具体可行的环保建议，如随手关电器、重复利用物品、使用可重复用品、植树等；4. 结尾发出号召，呼应主题，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
本文为材料类英语书面表达，时态以一般现在时为主，结构如下：
1. 承接开头，解释“going green”的含义：Going green means we should protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution.
2. 列举校园不良行为：However, I often see bad behaviours in our school, such as wasting paper, leaving lights on, and littering.
3. 分点给出环保建议：First, turn off lights and electric fans when leaving classrooms. Second, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Third, bring reusable water bottles instead of plastic ones. Finally, plant more trees in school gardens.
4. 结尾呼应主题，发出号召：Small actions make big differences. Let's work together for a greener school!
全文紧扣要点，语言简洁连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to Go Green at School
Without green, life has no hope. Going green means we should protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution. However, I often see bad behaviours in our school, such as wasting paper, leaving lights on, and littering.
To make our school greener, here's my advice: First, turn off lights and electric fans when leaving classrooms. Second, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Third, bring reusable water bottles instead of plastic ones. Finally, plant more trees in school gardens.
Small actions make big differences. Let's work together for a greener school!
Thanks for your reading!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环保主题词汇、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖了竞赛启事要求的三个核心要点，结构清晰，分点阐述建议，语言简洁通顺，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
