十三、书面表达。(10 分)
假如你是李华,请你写一篇推文,分享你的心声(学校的新变化、有待改进之处或自己未来的规划)。要求语言通顺,条理清晰,约 50 个词。


假如你是李华,请你写一篇推文,分享你的心声(学校的新变化、有待改进之处或自己未来的规划)。要求语言通顺,条理清晰,约 50 个词。
答案
参考范文:
I'm Li Hua from Class 1 Grade 6. My school changes a lot. Before, there was only one teaching building. There was no art room or computer room. Now, there are three teaching buildings. There is an art room and a computer room.
I usually play games with my friends on the playground. I like running and I can join the sports club. We have a sports meet every autumn.
I'm going to the middle school soon. I want to make new friends in the school. I'll study hard and stay healthy.
I'm Li Hua from Class 1 Grade 6. My school changes a lot. Before, there was only one teaching building. There was no art room or computer room. Now, there are three teaching buildings. There is an art room and a computer room.
I usually play games with my friends on the playground. I like running and I can join the sports club. We have a sports meet every autumn.
I'm going to the middle school soon. I want to make new friends in the school. I'll study hard and stay healthy.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以李华的身份写推文分享心声,可选择学校新变化、待改进之处或未来规划,需语言通顺、条理清晰,约50词。解题思路:1. 明确身份(李华,六年级);2. 确定分享内容(选学校新变化,结合过去与现在对比);3. 补充个人日常或未来规划,控制词数,使用基础词汇和句式。
【解析】
先介绍自身身份,再对比学校过去与现在的变化,接着提及个人日常活动,最后说明未来规划,确保内容贴合主题,语言简洁通顺,符合词数要求。
【答案】
I'm Li Hua from Class 1 Grade 6. My school changes a lot. Before, there was only one teaching building. There was no art room or computer room. Now, there are three teaching buildings. There is an art room and a computer room. I usually play games with my friends on the playground. I like running and I can join the sports club. We have a sports meet every autumn. I'm going to the middle school soon. I want to make new friends in the school. I'll study hard and stay healthy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、时态对比、未来计划表达
【点评】
本题围绕校园生活展开,贴近学生实际,考查基础写作能力,要求内容贴合主题,语言通顺,是常见的话题写作题。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以李华的身份写推文分享心声,可选择学校新变化、待改进之处或未来规划,需语言通顺、条理清晰,约50词。解题思路:1. 明确身份(李华,六年级);2. 确定分享内容(选学校新变化,结合过去与现在对比);3. 补充个人日常或未来规划,控制词数,使用基础词汇和句式。
【解析】
先介绍自身身份,再对比学校过去与现在的变化,接着提及个人日常活动,最后说明未来规划,确保内容贴合主题,语言简洁通顺,符合词数要求。
【答案】
I'm Li Hua from Class 1 Grade 6. My school changes a lot. Before, there was only one teaching building. There was no art room or computer room. Now, there are three teaching buildings. There is an art room and a computer room. I usually play games with my friends on the playground. I like running and I can join the sports club. We have a sports meet every autumn. I'm going to the middle school soon. I want to make new friends in the school. I'll study hard and stay healthy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、时态对比、未来计划表达
【点评】
本题围绕校园生活展开,贴近学生实际,考查基础写作能力,要求内容贴合主题,语言通顺,是常见的话题写作题。
【难度系数】
0.6
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