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六、书面表达
54.今天是周六，你们一家人正在农场游玩。请根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文，描述你们一家在农场的情况。
提示:(1) What is the weather like?
(2) What are your family doing now?
(3) How do you feel?
注意：(1)文章应包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
(2)词数70左右。
54.今天是周六，你们一家人正在农场游玩。请根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文，描述你们一家在农场的情况。
提示:(1) What is the weather like?
(2) What are your family doing now?
(3) How do you feel?
注意：(1)文章应包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
(2)词数70左右。
Today is Saturday. I am on the farm with my family. The weather is sunny and warm. It's a perfect day to do outdoor activities.
Many farmers are busy with their work. Right now, we are picking apples together. My dad is helping me reach the higher branches, while my mum is taking pictures of us.
My brother is practising riding a horse. It's his first time riding a horse, so he is a little nervous.
The farm is full of colourful flowers, and the smell of fresh grass is everywhere.
What an exciting day it is! I feel very happy and relaxed.
答案
54. One possible version:
Today is Saturday. I am on the farm with my family. The weather is sunny and warm. It's a perfect day to do outdoor activities.
Many farmers are busy with their work. Right now, we are picking apples together. My dad is helping me reach the higher branches, while my mum is taking pictures of us. My brother is practising riding a horse. It's his first time riding a horse, so he is a little nervous. The farm is full of colourful flowers, and the smell of fresh grass is everywhere.
What an exciting day it is! I feel very happy and relaxed.
Today is Saturday. I am on the farm with my family. The weather is sunny and warm. It's a perfect day to do outdoor activities.
Many farmers are busy with their work. Right now, we are picking apples together. My dad is helping me reach the higher branches, while my mum is taking pictures of us. My brother is practising riding a horse. It's his first time riding a horse, so he is a little nervous. The farm is full of colourful flowers, and the smell of fresh grass is everywhere.
What an exciting day it is! I feel very happy and relaxed.
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇描述周六一家人在农场游玩的英语短文，需包含天气、家人当下的活动、个人感受三个提示点，词数约70。解题思路：1. 确定时态：描述正在进行的动作用现在进行时，交代背景用一般现在时；2. 结构布局：开头点明时间、人物、地点及天气，中间详细描述家人的活动，结尾抒发游玩感受；3. 适当补充细节丰富内容，控制词数，确保覆盖所有要求。
【解析】
写作时需注意：① 时态正确：现在进行时结构为“am/is/are + 现在分词”，准确体现“正在做”的动作；② 覆盖所有提示：明确写出天气（晴朗温暖）、家人各自的活动（摘苹果、爸爸帮忙、妈妈拍照、弟弟骑马）、个人感受（开心放松）；③ 语言通顺，适当添加细节（如弟弟第一次骑马的小紧张），词数控制在70左右，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Today is Saturday. I am on the farm with my family. The weather is sunny and warm. It's a perfect day to do outdoor activities.
Many farmers are busy with their work. Right now, we are picking apples together. My dad is helping me reach the higher branches, while my mum is taking pictures of us. My brother is practising riding a horse. It's his first time riding a horse, so he is a little nervous. The farm is full of colourful flowers, and the smell of fresh grass is everywhere.
What an exciting day it is! I feel very happy and relaxed.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、现在进行时、情景写作
【点评】
本篇范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示内容，时态运用准确规范，内容具体生动，语言流畅自然，符合初中英语书面表达的要求，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一篇描述周六一家人在农场游玩的英语短文，需包含天气、家人当下的活动、个人感受三个提示点，词数约70。解题思路：1. 确定时态：描述正在进行的动作用现在进行时，交代背景用一般现在时；2. 结构布局：开头点明时间、人物、地点及天气，中间详细描述家人的活动，结尾抒发游玩感受；3. 适当补充细节丰富内容，控制词数，确保覆盖所有要求。
【解析】
写作时需注意：① 时态正确：现在进行时结构为“am/is/are + 现在分词”，准确体现“正在做”的动作；② 覆盖所有提示：明确写出天气（晴朗温暖）、家人各自的活动（摘苹果、爸爸帮忙、妈妈拍照、弟弟骑马）、个人感受（开心放松）；③ 语言通顺，适当添加细节（如弟弟第一次骑马的小紧张），词数控制在70左右，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Today is Saturday. I am on the farm with my family. The weather is sunny and warm. It's a perfect day to do outdoor activities.
Many farmers are busy with their work. Right now, we are picking apples together. My dad is helping me reach the higher branches, while my mum is taking pictures of us. My brother is practising riding a horse. It's his first time riding a horse, so he is a little nervous. The farm is full of colourful flowers, and the smell of fresh grass is everywhere.
What an exciting day it is! I feel very happy and relaxed.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、现在进行时、情景写作
【点评】
本篇范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示内容，时态运用准确规范，内容具体生动，语言流畅自然，符合初中英语书面表达的要求，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
