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【话题分析】
本单元的话题是“鼓舞人心的人”，在写相关作文时，要介绍清楚人物的基本信息、主要成就、优秀品质，并阐述其鼓舞人心的原因。
【范文剖析】
假设你所在的英语俱乐部正在举办“我心中的榜样”征文活动。请你写一篇短文，介绍一位你钦佩的鼓舞人心的人物。词数100左右。
1. 审题指导：
体裁：记叙文
时态：一般过去时（介绍人物过往成就）和一般现在时（介绍人物现状或评价）
人称：第三人称为主，可适当使用第一人称表达个人感受
2. 思路点拨：
总体介绍人物基本信息→描述主要成就和事迹→表达个人感悟
3. 素材准备：
短语
①be full of courage and wisdom 充满勇气和智慧
②look up to 钦佩，仰慕
③never give up 永不放弃
④live on 永存，延续
句子
①It was really brave/admirable/creative of him/her to... 他/她做……真的很勇敢/令人钦佩/有创造力。
②His/Her love for... lives on in... 他/她对……的热爱在……中延续。
③What made him/her admirable was that... 让他/她令人钦佩的是……
4. 佳作展示：
The person I admire most is Marie
Curie, a great scientist who made important discoveries in physics and chemistry.
Marie Curie was born in Poland in 1867. At an early age, she showed great curiosity about science. Even though she faced many difficulties as a woman scientist back then, she never gave up her studies. She discovered two new elements, polonium and radium, and won two Nobel Prizes! It was amazing that she became the first person ever to win this prize twice.
What I admire most about Marie Curie is her courage and dedication. She devoted her whole life to science, even though her work was sometimes dangerous. Her story teaches us that with hard work and a strong will, we can achieve great things.
I look up to her because she shows us that nothing is impossible if we keep going.
本单元的话题是“鼓舞人心的人”，在写相关作文时，要介绍清楚人物的基本信息、主要成就、优秀品质，并阐述其鼓舞人心的原因。
【范文剖析】
假设你所在的英语俱乐部正在举办“我心中的榜样”征文活动。请你写一篇短文，介绍一位你钦佩的鼓舞人心的人物。词数100左右。
1. 审题指导：
体裁：记叙文
时态：一般过去时（介绍人物过往成就）和一般现在时（介绍人物现状或评价）
人称：第三人称为主，可适当使用第一人称表达个人感受
2. 思路点拨：
总体介绍人物基本信息→描述主要成就和事迹→表达个人感悟
3. 素材准备：
短语
①be full of courage and wisdom 充满勇气和智慧
②look up to 钦佩，仰慕
③never give up 永不放弃
④live on 永存，延续
句子
①It was really brave/admirable/creative of him/her to... 他/她做……真的很勇敢/令人钦佩/有创造力。
②His/Her love for... lives on in... 他/她对……的热爱在……中延续。
③What made him/her admirable was that... 让他/她令人钦佩的是……
4. 佳作展示：
The person I admire most is Marie
Curie, a great scientist who made important discoveries in physics and chemistry.
Marie Curie was born in Poland in 1867. At an early age, she showed great curiosity about science. Even though she faced many difficulties as a woman scientist back then, she never gave up her studies. She discovered two new elements, polonium and radium, and won two Nobel Prizes! It was amazing that she became the first person ever to win this prize twice.
What I admire most about Marie Curie is her courage and dedication. She devoted her whole life to science, even though her work was sometimes dangerous. Her story teaches us that with hard work and a strong will, we can achieve great things.
I look up to her because she shows us that nothing is impossible if we keep going.
答案
The person I admire most is Marie Curie, a great scientist who made important discoveries in physics and chemistry.
Marie Curie was born in Poland in 1867. At an early age, she showed great curiosity about science. Even though she faced many difficulties as a woman scientist back then, she never gave up her studies. She discovered two new elements, polonium and radium, and won two Nobel Prizes! It was amazing that she became the first person ever to win this prize twice.
What I admire most about Marie Curie is her courage and dedication. She devoted her whole life to science, even though her work was sometimes dangerous. Her story teaches us that with hard work and a strong will, we can achieve great things.
I look up to her because she shows us that nothing is impossible if we keep going.
Marie Curie was born in Poland in 1867. At an early age, she showed great curiosity about science. Even though she faced many difficulties as a woman scientist back then, she never gave up her studies. She discovered two new elements, polonium and radium, and won two Nobel Prizes! It was amazing that she became the first person ever to win this prize twice.
What I admire most about Marie Curie is her courage and dedication. She devoted her whole life to science, even though her work was sometimes dangerous. Her story teaches us that with hard work and a strong will, we can achieve great things.
I look up to her because she shows us that nothing is impossible if we keep going.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语“我心中的榜样”征文写作题，核心要求是围绕“鼓舞人心的人”完成100词左右的记叙文。审题需明确：体裁为记叙文，时态结合一般过去时（人物过往经历）与一般现在时（评价），人称以第三人称为主，可加入第一人称感受。写作思路需遵循：开篇点明钦佩的人物及身份→介绍人物基本信息与主要成就→阐述其优秀品质→表达个人感悟，同时要运用给定短语和句式，控制词数。
【解析】
按照写作思路分步完成：1. 开篇直接点明最钦佩的人物是居里夫人，明确其科学家身份；2. 介绍基本信息（1867年生于波兰，早年对科学好奇，克服女性科学家的困境不放弃），再讲核心成就（发现钋和镭，两次获诺贝尔奖，是首位两次获诺奖的人）；3. 阐述钦佩的品质（勇气、奉献，为科学献身，工作危险仍坚持）；4. 表达感悟（教会我们努力和坚强意志能成就大事），最后用指定短语“look up to”收尾，呼应主题，符合词数要求。
【答案】
The person I admire most is Marie Curie, a great scientist who made important discoveries in physics and chemistry.
Marie Curie was born in Poland in 1867. At an early age, she showed great curiosity about science. Even though she faced many difficulties as a woman scientist back then, she never gave up her studies. She discovered two new elements, polonium and radium, and won two Nobel Prizes! It was amazing that she became the first person ever to win this prize twice.
What I admire most about Marie Curie is her courage and dedication. She devoted her whole life to science, even though her work was sometimes dangerous. Her story teaches us that with hard work and a strong will, we can achieve great things.
I look up to her because she shows us that nothing is impossible if we keep going.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、人物介绍类英语作文、英语常用短语与句式运用
【点评】
这篇征文符合题目要求，结构清晰逻辑连贯，准确覆盖人物基本信息、主要成就、优秀品质及鼓舞人心的原因，运用了指定短语和句式，语言地道，符合词数要求，是优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语“我心中的榜样”征文写作题，核心要求是围绕“鼓舞人心的人”完成100词左右的记叙文。审题需明确：体裁为记叙文，时态结合一般过去时（人物过往经历）与一般现在时（评价），人称以第三人称为主，可加入第一人称感受。写作思路需遵循：开篇点明钦佩的人物及身份→介绍人物基本信息与主要成就→阐述其优秀品质→表达个人感悟，同时要运用给定短语和句式，控制词数。
【解析】
按照写作思路分步完成：1. 开篇直接点明最钦佩的人物是居里夫人，明确其科学家身份；2. 介绍基本信息（1867年生于波兰，早年对科学好奇，克服女性科学家的困境不放弃），再讲核心成就（发现钋和镭，两次获诺贝尔奖，是首位两次获诺奖的人）；3. 阐述钦佩的品质（勇气、奉献，为科学献身，工作危险仍坚持）；4. 表达感悟（教会我们努力和坚强意志能成就大事），最后用指定短语“look up to”收尾，呼应主题，符合词数要求。
【答案】
The person I admire most is Marie Curie, a great scientist who made important discoveries in physics and chemistry.
Marie Curie was born in Poland in 1867. At an early age, she showed great curiosity about science. Even though she faced many difficulties as a woman scientist back then, she never gave up her studies. She discovered two new elements, polonium and radium, and won two Nobel Prizes! It was amazing that she became the first person ever to win this prize twice.
What I admire most about Marie Curie is her courage and dedication. She devoted her whole life to science, even though her work was sometimes dangerous. Her story teaches us that with hard work and a strong will, we can achieve great things.
I look up to her because she shows us that nothing is impossible if we keep going.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、人物介绍类英语作文、英语常用短语与句式运用
【点评】
这篇征文符合题目要求，结构清晰逻辑连贯，准确覆盖人物基本信息、主要成就、优秀品质及鼓舞人心的原因，运用了指定短语和句式，语言地道，符合词数要求，是优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
(2025·淮安中考)假如你是阳光中学的一名学生,你校英语节将开展以“Friendship Lights Up My Life”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇文章投稿,介绍你的朋友并分享你们的故事。文章须包含以下要点:
1. 描绘朋友的基本信息(年龄,长相,爱好等);
2. 描述一个事例,体现朋友对你的帮助;
3. 谈谈你对友谊的理解。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
1. 描绘朋友的基本信息(年龄,长相,爱好等);
2. 描述一个事例,体现朋友对你的帮助;
3. 谈谈你对友谊的理解。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Friendship Lights Up My Life
I'd like to introduce my best friend, Li Hua. He is 14 years old, just like me. He has short black hair and always wears a warm smile. He loves playing basketball and reading books.
I'd like to introduce my best friend, Li Hua. He is 14 years old, just like me. He has short black hair and always wears a warm smile. He loves playing basketball and reading books.
Last term, I failed my Maths exam and felt very upset. Li Hua noticed my sadness. He spent two hours every day helping me review Maths after school. With his help, my Maths improved a lot.
As an old saying goes, "A friend in need is a friend indeed." This experience made me understand that true friendship is about being there for each other, especially in difficult times. A good friend is like a light that guides you and makes your life brighter. I'm truly thankful to have such a friend as Li Hua.
答案
One possible version:
Friendship Lights Up My Life
I'd like to introduce my best friend, Li Hua. He is 14 years old, just like me. He has short black hair and always wears a warm smile. He loves playing basketball and reading books.
Last term, I failed my Maths exam and felt very upset. Li Hua noticed my sadness. He spent two hours every day helping me review Maths after school. With his help, my Maths improved a lot.
As an old saying goes, "A friend in need is a friend indeed." This experience made me understand that true friendship is about being there for each other, especially in difficult times. A good friend is like a light that guides you and makes your life brighter. I'm truly thankful to have such a friend as Li Hua.
思路梳理 【总体分析】
①体裁:记叙文;②时态:一般过去时和一般现在时;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,介绍朋友的基本信息,包括年龄、长相、爱好等;第二步,描述一个事例,体现朋友对自己的帮助;第三步,谈谈自己对友谊的理解。
Friendship Lights Up My Life
I'd like to introduce my best friend, Li Hua. He is 14 years old, just like me. He has short black hair and always wears a warm smile. He loves playing basketball and reading books.
Last term, I failed my Maths exam and felt very upset. Li Hua noticed my sadness. He spent two hours every day helping me review Maths after school. With his help, my Maths improved a lot.
As an old saying goes, "A friend in need is a friend indeed." This experience made me understand that true friendship is about being there for each other, especially in difficult times. A good friend is like a light that guides you and makes your life brighter. I'm truly thankful to have such a friend as Li Hua.
思路梳理 【总体分析】
①体裁:记叙文;②时态:一般过去时和一般现在时;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,介绍朋友的基本信息,包括年龄、长相、爱好等;第二步,描述一个事例,体现朋友对自己的帮助;第三步,谈谈自己对友谊的理解。
解析
【分析】
本题为中考英语话题征文，主题为“Friendship Lights Up My Life”，要求写记叙文，需包含三个核心要点：朋友的基本信息、体现朋友帮助的事例、对友谊的理解。写作时需注意时态（介绍朋友用一般现在时，事例用一般过去时），词数控制在100左右，不得出现真实人名、校名、地名，结构需清晰，每个要点对应明确段落，语言简洁流畅。
【解析】
第一步，介绍朋友基本信息：用一般现在时，说明朋友年龄（14岁）、长相（短黑发、常带微笑）、爱好（篮球、读书）；第二步，描述帮助事例：用一般过去时，讲述自己数学考试失利后，朋友每天花两小时帮复习，成绩提升的经历；第三步，谈对友谊的理解：引用谚语“A friend in need is a friend indeed”，点明友谊是照亮生活的光，升华主题，确保符合词数要求，无违规信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Friendship Lights Up My Life
I'd like to introduce my best friend. He is 14 years old, just like me. He has short black hair and always wears a warm smile. He loves playing basketball and reading books.
Last term, I failed my Maths exam and felt very upset. My friend noticed my sadness. He spent two hours every day helping me review Maths after school. With his help, my Maths improved a lot.
As an old saying goes, "A friend in need is a friend indeed." This experience made me understand that true friendship is about being there for each other, especially in difficult times. A good friend is like a light that guides you and makes your life brighter. I'm truly thankful to have such a friend.
【知识点】
英语话题作文（友谊主题）、英语记叙文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，事例具体生动，语言表达自然流畅，结构清晰，结尾用谚语点明主旨，符合中考英语作文的评分要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为中考英语话题征文，主题为“Friendship Lights Up My Life”，要求写记叙文，需包含三个核心要点：朋友的基本信息、体现朋友帮助的事例、对友谊的理解。写作时需注意时态（介绍朋友用一般现在时，事例用一般过去时），词数控制在100左右，不得出现真实人名、校名、地名，结构需清晰，每个要点对应明确段落，语言简洁流畅。
【解析】
第一步，介绍朋友基本信息：用一般现在时，说明朋友年龄（14岁）、长相（短黑发、常带微笑）、爱好（篮球、读书）；第二步，描述帮助事例：用一般过去时，讲述自己数学考试失利后，朋友每天花两小时帮复习，成绩提升的经历；第三步，谈对友谊的理解：引用谚语“A friend in need is a friend indeed”，点明友谊是照亮生活的光，升华主题，确保符合词数要求，无违规信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Friendship Lights Up My Life
I'd like to introduce my best friend. He is 14 years old, just like me. He has short black hair and always wears a warm smile. He loves playing basketball and reading books.
Last term, I failed my Maths exam and felt very upset. My friend noticed my sadness. He spent two hours every day helping me review Maths after school. With his help, my Maths improved a lot.
As an old saying goes, "A friend in need is a friend indeed." This experience made me understand that true friendship is about being there for each other, especially in difficult times. A good friend is like a light that guides you and makes your life brighter. I'm truly thankful to have such a friend.
【知识点】
英语话题作文（友谊主题）、英语记叙文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，事例具体生动，语言表达自然流畅，结构清晰，结尾用谚语点明主旨，符合中考英语作文的评分要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
