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以史为镜可以明得失。某英文网站正在开展以“学历史”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。
提示问题：1. What did you do to learn history? 2. What benefits have you got from doing so?
要求：1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，可适当发挥；2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
以史为镜可以明得失。某英文网站正在开展以“学历史”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。
提示问题：1. What did you do to learn history? 2. What benefits have you got from doing so?
要求：1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，可适当发挥；2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
答案
# Learn from History
Nowadays, many students think history is useless and boring, but I love learning history a lot.
I have taken lots of actions to learn history well. First, I listened very carefully in every history class, and I used to make clear notes for important events and famous people in history. Second, I spent most of my free time reading different history books at the school library. Last year, I also joined a history club and visited several history museums with my club members during holidays.
I have got so much from learning history. On one hand, the stories of great ancient people teach me to be brave and never give up when I meet difficulties in my daily life. On the other hand, I can learn lessons from past events, so I can avoid making the same mistakes when I deal with problems. As the old saying goes, history is a mirror that tells us gains and losses. Learning history helps me become a wiser person.
Nowadays, many students think history is useless and boring, but I love learning history a lot.
I have taken lots of actions to learn history well. First, I listened very carefully in every history class, and I used to make clear notes for important events and famous people in history. Second, I spent most of my free time reading different history books at the school library. Last year, I also joined a history club and visited several history museums with my club members during holidays.
I have got so much from learning history. On one hand, the stories of great ancient people teach me to be brave and never give up when I meet difficulties in my daily life. On the other hand, I can learn lessons from past events, so I can avoid making the same mistakes when I deal with problems. As the old saying goes, history is a mirror that tells us gains and losses. Learning history helps me become a wiser person.
解析
【分析】本题为英语主题征文写作，需围绕“学历史”主题，回答两个核心问题：一是学习历史的具体做法，二是学习历史带来的益处。解题思路为：1. 开头点明对历史的态度，引出写作主题；2. 分点列举学习历史的具体行动（课堂学习、课外阅读、实践活动）；3. 阐述学习历史的收获（品格塑造、经验借鉴）；4. 用名言升华主旨，确保覆盖所有提示要点，语言通顺且无真实人名地名。
【解析】首先拟定标题《Learn from History》；开头指出多数学生认为历史无用枯燥的误解，表明自己热爱历史；接着分三点说明学习历史的具体行动：①认真听讲并整理重要历史事件、人物的笔记；②利用课余时间在学校图书馆阅读各类历史书籍；③加入历史社团，假期与社团成员参观历史博物馆；最后从两方面阐述益处：①古代伟人的故事教会自己遇到困难时要勇敢不放弃；②从历史事件中吸取教训，避免犯同样的错误，引用“以史为镜可以明得失”的名言升华主题，完成符合要求的征文。
【答案】# Learn from History
Nowadays, many students think history is useless and boring, but I love learning history a lot.
I have taken lots of actions to learn history well. First, I listened very carefully in every history class, and I used to make clear notes for important events and famous people in history. Second, I spent most of my free time reading different history books at the school library. Last year, I also joined a history club and visited several history museums with my club members during holidays.
I have got so much from learning history. On one hand, the stories of great ancient people teach me to be brave and never give up when I meet difficulties in my daily life. On the other hand, I can learn lessons from past events, so I can avoid making the same mistakes when I deal with problems. As the old saying goes, history is a mirror that tells us gains and losses. Learning history helps me become a wiser person.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、主题征文写作
【点评】本文紧扣“学历史”的征文主题，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，全面覆盖提示问题的所有要点，内容充实，语言流畅自然，引用名言增强了文章的深度，符合征文的各项要求，是一篇优秀的英语征文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先拟定标题《Learn from History》；开头指出多数学生认为历史无用枯燥的误解，表明自己热爱历史；接着分三点说明学习历史的具体行动：①认真听讲并整理重要历史事件、人物的笔记；②利用课余时间在学校图书馆阅读各类历史书籍；③加入历史社团，假期与社团成员参观历史博物馆；最后从两方面阐述益处：①古代伟人的故事教会自己遇到困难时要勇敢不放弃；②从历史事件中吸取教训，避免犯同样的错误，引用“以史为镜可以明得失”的名言升华主题，完成符合要求的征文。
【答案】# Learn from History
Nowadays, many students think history is useless and boring, but I love learning history a lot.
I have taken lots of actions to learn history well. First, I listened very carefully in every history class, and I used to make clear notes for important events and famous people in history. Second, I spent most of my free time reading different history books at the school library. Last year, I also joined a history club and visited several history museums with my club members during holidays.
I have got so much from learning history. On one hand, the stories of great ancient people teach me to be brave and never give up when I meet difficulties in my daily life. On the other hand, I can learn lessons from past events, so I can avoid making the same mistakes when I deal with problems. As the old saying goes, history is a mirror that tells us gains and losses. Learning history helps me become a wiser person.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、主题征文写作
【点评】本文紧扣“学历史”的征文主题，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，全面覆盖提示问题的所有要点，内容充实，语言流畅自然，引用名言增强了文章的深度，符合征文的各项要求，是一篇优秀的英语征文。
【难度系数】0.5
素材积累＞＞
[开头句]
1. Sanxingdui is the remains of the ancient Shu Kingdom. （历史归属）
2. The famous Mawangdui Tombs Exhibition is held at the Hunan Museum. （举办地点）
[中间句]
1. Sanxingdui is such an amazing place that it is now world-famous. （世界地位）
2. It presented ancient Chinese fashions in a lively way. （展示方式）
[结尾句]
1. They help to give us confidence about where we are going. （历史意义）
2. We'll work even harder so that people know more about our wonderful past. （未来打算）
[名言警句]
The past is the key to the future.
以史为钥，方能开启未来之门。
写作演练＞＞
假如你是李辉，将参加学校的英语演讲比赛。请以“读历史故事”为主题写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：1. 你喜欢读的历史故事；2. 读历史故事的好处；3. 对全校学生提出号召。
要求：词数90，已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
1. 体裁：记叙文；2. 人称：第一人称；3. 时态：一般现在时。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear teachers and students,
I'm happy to share my experience of reading history stories with you.
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
[开头句]
1. Sanxingdui is the remains of the ancient Shu Kingdom. （历史归属）
2. The famous Mawangdui Tombs Exhibition is held at the Hunan Museum. （举办地点）
[中间句]
1. Sanxingdui is such an amazing place that it is now world-famous. （世界地位）
2. It presented ancient Chinese fashions in a lively way. （展示方式）
[结尾句]
1. They help to give us confidence about where we are going. （历史意义）
2. We'll work even harder so that people know more about our wonderful past. （未来打算）
[名言警句]
The past is the key to the future.
以史为钥，方能开启未来之门。
写作演练＞＞
假如你是李辉，将参加学校的英语演讲比赛。请以“读历史故事”为主题写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：1. 你喜欢读的历史故事；2. 读历史故事的好处；3. 对全校学生提出号召。
要求：词数90，已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
1. 体裁：记叙文；2. 人称：第一人称；3. 时态：一般现在时。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear teachers and students,
I'm happy to share my experience of reading history stories with you.
I love the stories about the Three Kingdoms period in China, especially the stories of wise and heroic characters like Zhuge Liang and Guan Yu.
Reading history stories has many benefits. First, it helps us learn about our past and understand how our society has developed. Second, it teaches us valuable lessons about life, such as perseverance and leadership. Third, it can improve our reading and analytical skills.
I encourage all of you to read more history stories. They are not only interesting but also educational. Let's make reading history a part of our daily life and learn from the past to build a better future. Thank you for listening!
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
答案
One possible version:
Dear teachers and students,
I'm happy to share my experience of reading history stories with you. I love the stories about the Three Kingdoms period in China, especially the stories of wise and heroic characters like Zhuge Liang and Guan Yu.
Reading history stories has many benefits. First, it helps us learn about our past and understand how our society has developed. Second, it teaches us valuable lessons about life, such as perseverance and leadership. Third, it can improve our reading and analytical skills.
I encourage all of you to read more history stories. They are not only interesting but also educational. Let's make reading history a part of our daily life and learn from the past to build a better future.
Thank you for listening!
Dear teachers and students,
I'm happy to share my experience of reading history stories with you. I love the stories about the Three Kingdoms period in China, especially the stories of wise and heroic characters like Zhuge Liang and Guan Yu.
Reading history stories has many benefits. First, it helps us learn about our past and understand how our society has developed. Second, it teaches us valuable lessons about life, such as perseverance and leadership. Third, it can improve our reading and analytical skills.
I encourage all of you to read more history stories. They are not only interesting but also educational. Let's make reading history a part of our daily life and learn from the past to build a better future.
Thank you for listening!
解析
【分析】本题为英语演讲稿写作题，要求围绕“读历史故事”主题完成，需包含三个核心内容：喜欢的历史故事、读历史故事的好处、对全校学生的号召。解题思路：1. 依据思维导图结构，将演讲稿分为引入、主体、号召三部分；2. 引入部分结合素材中三国故事相关内容，明确自己喜欢的历史故事；3. 主体部分用First、Second、Third分三点阐述读历史故事的好处，结合素材提供的表达；4. 号召部分用素材中的鼓励语句，补充历史意义相关内容，收尾呼应主题。需注意使用第一人称、一般现在时，词数符合要求。
【解析】1. 开头已给出，引入部分补充：结合素材中三国故事，说明喜欢的具体人物（如诸葛亮、关羽），即“I love the stories about the Three Kingdoms period in China, especially the stories of wise and heroic characters like Zhuge Liang and Guan Yu.”；2. 主体部分分三点：First，结合素材中“了解过去、社会发展”的表达，写“it helps us learn about our past and understand how our society has developed.”；Second，结合“学到人生教训”，写“it teaches us valuable lessons about life, such as perseverance and leadership.”；Third，结合“提升阅读和分析能力”，写“it can improve our reading and analytical skills.”；3. 号召部分：用素材中鼓励语句，补充历史意义，即“I encourage all of you to read more history stories. They are not only interesting but also educational. Let's make reading history a part of our daily life and learn from the past to build a better future.”，最后加“Thank you for listening!”收尾，确保词数达标，结构完整。
【答案】Dear teachers and students,
I'm happy to share my experience of reading history stories with you. I love the stories about the Three Kingdoms period in China, especially the stories of wise and heroic characters like Zhuge Liang and Guan Yu.
Reading history stories has many benefits. First, it helps us learn about our past and understand how our society has developed. Second, it teaches us valuable lessons about life, such as perseverance and leadership. Third, it can improve our reading and analytical skills.
I encourage all of you to read more history stories. They are not only interesting but also educational. Let's make reading history a part of our daily life and learn from the past to build a better future.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、历史主题英语表达
【点评】本题提供了清晰的写作框架、素材及思路，要求明确，学生可依据提示完成符合要求的演讲稿，内容涵盖所有要点，语言流畅，符合词数要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 开头已给出，引入部分补充：结合素材中三国故事，说明喜欢的具体人物（如诸葛亮、关羽），即“I love the stories about the Three Kingdoms period in China, especially the stories of wise and heroic characters like Zhuge Liang and Guan Yu.”；2. 主体部分分三点：First，结合素材中“了解过去、社会发展”的表达，写“it helps us learn about our past and understand how our society has developed.”；Second，结合“学到人生教训”，写“it teaches us valuable lessons about life, such as perseverance and leadership.”；Third，结合“提升阅读和分析能力”，写“it can improve our reading and analytical skills.”；3. 号召部分：用素材中鼓励语句，补充历史意义，即“I encourage all of you to read more history stories. They are not only interesting but also educational. Let's make reading history a part of our daily life and learn from the past to build a better future.”，最后加“Thank you for listening!”收尾，确保词数达标，结构完整。
【答案】Dear teachers and students,
I'm happy to share my experience of reading history stories with you. I love the stories about the Three Kingdoms period in China, especially the stories of wise and heroic characters like Zhuge Liang and Guan Yu.
Reading history stories has many benefits. First, it helps us learn about our past and understand how our society has developed. Second, it teaches us valuable lessons about life, such as perseverance and leadership. Third, it can improve our reading and analytical skills.
I encourage all of you to read more history stories. They are not only interesting but also educational. Let's make reading history a part of our daily life and learn from the past to build a better future.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、历史主题英语表达
【点评】本题提供了清晰的写作框架、素材及思路，要求明确，学生可依据提示完成符合要求的演讲稿，内容涵盖所有要点，语言流畅，符合词数要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6
