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[开头句]
1. What is your family like? (提出问题)
2. As teenagers, what should we do to get along well with our parents? (明确主题)
[中间句]
1. Tears quietly run down his face. (刻画细节)
2. I think parents should set good examples for their children, so they should shut their phones off or spend less time on them. (提出建议)
[结尾句]
1. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parent-child relationship.(总结呼吁)
2. We are a family, together or far away. (升华主题)
[名言警句]
1. Blood is thicker than water. 血浓于水。
2. East or west, home is best.
金窝,银窝,不如自家的草窝。
写作演练 >>
假设你是David,你的英国朋友Tony给你写了一封信,信中描述了他这个假期在家待了很长时间,和家人有更多机会相处,但他也遇到一些问题。请根据提示给予回复。80词左右。
提示:1. What do you often do to show your love to your family? 2. What's the best way to spend your time together?
[思路点拨]
1. 时态:以一般现在时为主;2. 人称:以第一人称为主;3. 写作时:第一段介绍“我”的行动,第二段举例说明“我”的建议,第三段表达祝愿。
[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
[开头句]
1. What is your family like? (提出问题)
2. As teenagers, what should we do to get along well with our parents? (明确主题)
[中间句]
1. Tears quietly run down his face. (刻画细节)
2. I think parents should set good examples for their children, so they should shut their phones off or spend less time on them. (提出建议)
[结尾句]
1. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parent-child relationship.(总结呼吁)
2. We are a family, together or far away. (升华主题)
[名言警句]
1. Blood is thicker than water. 血浓于水。
2. East or west, home is best.
金窝,银窝,不如自家的草窝。
写作演练 >>
假设你是David,你的英国朋友Tony给你写了一封信,信中描述了他这个假期在家待了很长时间,和家人有更多机会相处,但他也遇到一些问题。请根据提示给予回复。80词左右。
提示:1. What do you often do to show your love to your family? 2. What's the best way to spend your time together?
[思路点拨]
1. 时态:以一般现在时为主;2. 人称:以第一人称为主;3. 写作时:第一段介绍“我”的行动,第二段举例说明“我”的建议,第三段表达祝愿。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Tony,
I'm glad that we both have a wonderful family time these days. Deeply touched by their love, I try to do something to show my love too. I often help Mum with housework, such as sweeping the floor, washing the clothes and so on. And I can cook now! My parents are proud to see I'm growing.
I think the best way to spend our time together is to do something meaningful together. Last time Dad and I enjoyed a wonderful film together, and then we shared our feelings.
I hope this can help you and that you can have a good time with your parents.
Yours, David
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案
One possible version:
Dear Tony,
I'm glad that we both have a wonderful family time these days. Deeply touched by their love, I try to do something to show my love too. I often help Mum with housework, such as sweeping the floor, washing the clothes and so on. And I can cook now! My parents are proud to see I'm growing.
I think the best way to spend our time together is to do something meaningful together. Last time Dad and I enjoyed a wonderful film together, and then we shared our feelings.
I hope this can help you and that you can have a good time with your parents.
Yours,
David
Dear Tony,
I'm glad that we both have a wonderful family time these days. Deeply touched by their love, I try to do something to show my love too. I often help Mum with housework, such as sweeping the floor, washing the clothes and so on. And I can cook now! My parents are proud to see I'm growing.
I think the best way to spend our time together is to do something meaningful together. Last time Dad and I enjoyed a wonderful film together, and then we shared our feelings.
I hope this can help you and that you can have a good time with your parents.
Yours,
David
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书信写作题,需给英国朋友Tony写回信,围绕“与家人相处”的主题,回应两个核心问题:如何向家人表达爱、共度时光的最佳方式。写作遵循三段结构:第一段呼应Tony的情况,说明自己表达对家人爱的具体行动;第二段提出共度时光的最佳方式并举例;第三段表达祝愿,时态以一般现在时为主,用第一人称,符合书信格式和字数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头写称呼Dear Tony,点明自己和Tony一样有美好的家庭时光,接着说明自己用行动表达爱,比如帮妈妈做家务(扫地、洗衣服等),还学会了做饭,让父母骄傲;
2. 第二段提出和家人共度时光的最好方式是一起做有意义的事,举例上次和爸爸一起看电影并分享感受;
3. 第三段表达对Tony的祝愿,最后署名David,确保内容紧扣主题,语言简洁流畅,符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tony,
I'm glad that we both have a wonderful family time these days. Deeply touched by their love, I try to do something to show my love too. I often help Mum with housework, such as sweeping the floor, washing the clothes and so on. And I can cook now! My parents are proud to see I'm growing.
I think the best way to spend our time together is to do something meaningful together. Last time Dad and I enjoyed a wonderful film together, and then we shared our feelings.
I hope this can help you and that you can have a good time with your parents.
Yours,
David
【知识点】
英语书信写作、家庭话题表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,结构清晰,三段式布局合理,内容具体有细节,符合书信格式要求,准确回应了提示的两个问题,语言简洁流畅,适合初中英语写作练习。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题是英语书信写作题,需给英国朋友Tony写回信,围绕“与家人相处”的主题,回应两个核心问题:如何向家人表达爱、共度时光的最佳方式。写作遵循三段结构:第一段呼应Tony的情况,说明自己表达对家人爱的具体行动;第二段提出共度时光的最佳方式并举例;第三段表达祝愿,时态以一般现在时为主,用第一人称,符合书信格式和字数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头写称呼Dear Tony,点明自己和Tony一样有美好的家庭时光,接着说明自己用行动表达爱,比如帮妈妈做家务(扫地、洗衣服等),还学会了做饭,让父母骄傲;
2. 第二段提出和家人共度时光的最好方式是一起做有意义的事,举例上次和爸爸一起看电影并分享感受;
3. 第三段表达对Tony的祝愿,最后署名David,确保内容紧扣主题,语言简洁流畅,符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tony,
I'm glad that we both have a wonderful family time these days. Deeply touched by their love, I try to do something to show my love too. I often help Mum with housework, such as sweeping the floor, washing the clothes and so on. And I can cook now! My parents are proud to see I'm growing.
I think the best way to spend our time together is to do something meaningful together. Last time Dad and I enjoyed a wonderful film together, and then we shared our feelings.
I hope this can help you and that you can have a good time with your parents.
Yours,
David
【知识点】
英语书信写作、家庭话题表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,结构清晰,三段式布局合理,内容具体有细节,符合书信格式要求,准确回应了提示的两个问题,语言简洁流畅,适合初中英语写作练习。
【难度系数】
0.3
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