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本单元的话题属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群，涉及子主题“同伴交往，相互尊重，友好互助”。学生可灵活运用形容词、副词比较级，围绕人物外貌特征、喜好、性格等方面的相似与不同展开写作。
写作素材
【词汇】
hard-working, outgoing, similar, interest, honest, thanks to, care about, reach for, lend (sb) a hand
【句型】
◆开头句
1. I'm happy to tell you something about my friend Mike.
2. When it comes to friendship, many people think friends should be alike.
◆中间句
1. We are similar in many ways.
2. But our personalities are quite different.
3. We are different, but we are stronger together.
◆结尾句
1. True friends are always there whenever we are in difficult situations.
2. True friends should respect each other’s differences and learn from each other.
【名言积累】
1. A friend is a second self.
朋友是第二个自我。
2. A friend in need is a friend indeed.
患难见真情。
写作典范
遇到好朋友是缘分，古有彼此信任的管
鲍之交，也有彼此欣赏的知音之交，你和你的朋友是什么样的友谊呢？假设你是李华，请你用英文从以下方面向王林介绍你的好朋友Mike。
注意:1. 根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Lin,
I'm happy to tell you something about my friend Mike.
Yours,
Li Hua
【审题立意】
1. 审主题:介绍朋友及友谊观
2. 审体裁:应用文
3. 审人称:第一人称
4. 审时态:一般现在时
【思路点拨】
【佳作欣赏】
Dear Wang Lin,
I'm happy to tell you something about my friend Mike. He is a tall boy with big eyes. He is funnier than anyone else I know.
As the saying goes, a friend is a second self. Mike and I have similar hobbies and interests. For example, we both love sports, especially basketball. We are similar in other ways. We both love reading and we often share interesting books with each other. But our personalities are quite different. Mike is more outgoing and humorous, while I am quieter and kind of serious. We are different, but we are stronger together.
A friend in need is a friend indeed. True friends are always there whenever we are in difficult situations. True friends should also respect each other’s differences and learn from each other.
Yours,
Li Hua
本单元的话题属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群，涉及子主题“同伴交往，相互尊重，友好互助”。学生可灵活运用形容词、副词比较级，围绕人物外貌特征、喜好、性格等方面的相似与不同展开写作。
写作素材
【词汇】
hard-working, outgoing, similar, interest, honest, thanks to, care about, reach for, lend (sb) a hand
【句型】
◆开头句
1. I'm happy to tell you something about my friend Mike.
2. When it comes to friendship, many people think friends should be alike.
◆中间句
1. We are similar in many ways.
2. But our personalities are quite different.
3. We are different, but we are stronger together.
◆结尾句
1. True friends are always there whenever we are in difficult situations.
2. True friends should respect each other’s differences and learn from each other.
【名言积累】
1. A friend is a second self.
朋友是第二个自我。
2. A friend in need is a friend indeed.
患难见真情。
写作典范
遇到好朋友是缘分，古有彼此信任的管
鲍之交，也有彼此欣赏的知音之交，你和你的朋友是什么样的友谊呢？假设你是李华，请你用英文从以下方面向王林介绍你的好朋友Mike。
注意:1. 根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Lin,
I'm happy to tell you something about my friend Mike.
Yours,
Li Hua
【审题立意】
1. 审主题:介绍朋友及友谊观
2. 审体裁:应用文
3. 审人称:第一人称
4. 审时态:一般现在时
【思路点拨】
【佳作欣赏】
Dear Wang Lin,
I'm happy to tell you something about my friend Mike. He is a tall boy with big eyes. He is funnier than anyone else I know.
As the saying goes, a friend is a second self. Mike and I have similar hobbies and interests. For example, we both love sports, especially basketball. We are similar in other ways. We both love reading and we often share interesting books with each other. But our personalities are quite different. Mike is more outgoing and humorous, while I am quieter and kind of serious. We are different, but we are stronger together.
A friend in need is a friend indeed. True friends are always there whenever we are in difficult situations. True friends should also respect each other’s differences and learn from each other.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
He is a tall boy with big eyes, and he is more hard-working than most students in our class.
We are similar because we both love sports and often play basketball together after school. But he is much more outgoing than me, while I am quieter and more careful.
I think true friends should always lend a hand when we are in trouble, and we can learn from each other to make progress together.
Yours,
Li Hua
We are similar because we both love sports and often play basketball together after school. But he is much more outgoing than me, while I am quieter and more careful.
I think true friends should always lend a hand when we are in trouble, and we can learn from each other to make progress together.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，需以李华身份向王林介绍好友Mike，解题思路如下：1. 审题：明确主题为介绍朋友及友谊观，体裁是书信，人称第一人称，时态用一般现在时，词数80左右；2. 构思：先介绍Mike的外貌与性格，再说明与自己的相似点、不同点（需用到形容词/副词比较级），最后点明对友谊的看法，紧扣“同伴交往、相互帮助”的主题；3. 运用给定词汇、句型，确保内容连贯符合要求。
【解析】
按照写作步骤完成：1. 承接已给开头句，介绍Mike的外貌（高个子、大眼睛）及性格（比多数同学更勤奋）；2. 阐述与Mike的相似点（共同爱好运动，常一起打篮球）和不同点（性格差异：他更外向，我更安静细心），使用比较级；3. 表达友谊观，运用给定短语“lend a hand”，说明朋友应互助、相互学习进步，符合主题。
【答案】
He is a tall boy with big eyes, and he is more hard-working than most students in our class. We are similar because we both love sports and often play basketball together after school. But he is much more outgoing than me, while I am quieter and more careful. I think true friends should always lend a hand when we are in trouble, and we can learn from each other to make progress together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、形容词比较级运用、话题词汇表达
【点评】
本篇写作紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，内容围绕“同伴交往”主题展开，正确运用了给定词汇、句型及比较级，语言通顺自然，符合书信格式，是一篇合格的写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作题，需以李华身份向王林介绍好友Mike，解题思路如下：1. 审题：明确主题为介绍朋友及友谊观，体裁是书信，人称第一人称，时态用一般现在时，词数80左右；2. 构思：先介绍Mike的外貌与性格，再说明与自己的相似点、不同点（需用到形容词/副词比较级），最后点明对友谊的看法，紧扣“同伴交往、相互帮助”的主题；3. 运用给定词汇、句型，确保内容连贯符合要求。
【解析】
按照写作步骤完成：1. 承接已给开头句，介绍Mike的外貌（高个子、大眼睛）及性格（比多数同学更勤奋）；2. 阐述与Mike的相似点（共同爱好运动，常一起打篮球）和不同点（性格差异：他更外向，我更安静细心），使用比较级；3. 表达友谊观，运用给定短语“lend a hand”，说明朋友应互助、相互学习进步，符合主题。
【答案】
He is a tall boy with big eyes, and he is more hard-working than most students in our class. We are similar because we both love sports and often play basketball together after school. But he is much more outgoing than me, while I am quieter and more careful. I think true friends should always lend a hand when we are in trouble, and we can learn from each other to make progress together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、形容词比较级运用、话题词汇表达
【点评】
本篇写作紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，内容围绕“同伴交往”主题展开，正确运用了给定词汇、句型及比较级，语言通顺自然，符合书信格式，是一篇合格的写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
