如何写介绍自己或他人的文章
本单元的话题是介绍自己或他人，要求学生能用所学词汇和句型介绍人物。与此相关的写作通常有：①介绍自己；②介绍他人（如新同学、朋友等）。
在具体介绍人物时，通常包含以下要点：
①引出介绍对象；
②介绍人物的姓名、年龄、班级、外貌、性格、爱好等；
③对人物进行简要评价或表达想交朋友的想法。
【抛砖引玉】
假如你是周兵，刚刚步入中学，进入新的学
校。请根据表格中的内容，用英语写一篇自我介绍，在学校学生交流会上介绍你自己。

要求：
1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，条理清楚，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 90词左右。

Hello everyone!
Nice to meet all of you here. My Chinese name is Zhou Bing, and you can also call me Harry. I am 12 years old, and now I am in Class 4, Grade 7.
My favourite subjects are Science and PE, they are really fun for me. I love swimming and playing football, and I often play football with my classmates after school. I am friendly and helpful, I hope we can become good friends later.

【分析】本题是人物介绍类英语写作，解题思路为：1. 开头礼貌引出，说明自我介绍的目的；2. 依次介绍姓名（中文名和英文名）、年龄、班级等基本信息；3. 介绍最喜欢的科目和爱好；4. 描述性格并表达交友愿望，确保覆盖表格所有要点，语言通顺流畅。
【解析】首先用礼貌的开场句引出自我介绍；接着说明自己的中文名和英文名，再介绍年龄与所在班级；然后阐述最喜欢的科目，结合表格内容说明爱好；最后描述性格并表达交友的愿望，符合题目要求的字数和场景。
【答案】Hello everyone!
Nice to meet all of you here. My Chinese name is Zhou Bing, and you can also call me Harry. I am 12 years old, and now I am in Class 4, Grade 7.
My favourite subjects are Science and PE, they are really fun for me. I love swimming and playing football, and I often play football with my classmates after school. I am friendly and helpful, I hope we can become good friends later.
【知识点】英语写作、人物介绍
【点评】本题考查人物介绍类英语写作，要求学生根据给定信息组织语言，涵盖姓名、年龄、班级、爱好、性格等要点，语言需符合交流场景，难度适中，能考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5

【写作构思】

段落布局
开头：介绍自己的基本信息
姓名：I am .../My name is .../I go by...
年龄：I am ... years old.
年级和班级：I am in Class 4, Grade 7.
中间：根据表格内容详细介绍自己
性格：I am friendly and helpful. I’m always ready to help others.
最喜欢的科目：My favourite subjects are .../Of all the subjects, I like ... best.
爱好：I like/love/enjoy ... I often ... at the weekend.
结尾：表达想交朋友的想法
Do you want to be my friend? /Would you like to be my friend?

参考范文：
My name is Zhang Ming. I am 12 years old. I am in Class 4, Grade 7.
I am friendly and helpful. I'm always ready to help others. My favourite subjects are Chinese and English. They are both very fun and I can learn many new things in the classes. I love playing football after school. I often play football with my friends at the weekend. I also enjoy listening to music when I finish my homework.
Do you want to be my friend?

【分析】
这是一道英语自我介绍写作题，解题思路是依据给定的段落布局分步完成：第一步，开头用指定句型介绍姓名、年龄、年级班级等基本信息；第二步，中间依次介绍性格、最喜欢的科目、爱好，使用对应句型表达；第三步，结尾用指定句型表达想交朋友的想法，确保内容完整、符合要求。
【解析】
写作时遵循段落布局：
1. 开头：用“My name is Zhang Ming. I am 12 years old. I am in Class 4, Grade 7.”介绍基本信息；
2. 中间：先写性格“I am friendly and helpful. I'm always ready to help others.”，再写最喜欢的科目“My favourite subjects are Chinese and English. They are both very fun and I can learn many new things in the classes.”，最后写爱好“I love playing football after school. I often play football with my friends at the weekend. I also enjoy listening to music when I finish my homework.”；
3. 结尾：用“Do you want to be my friend?”表达交友意愿，完成写作。
【答案】
My name is Zhang Ming. I am 12 years old. I am in Class 4, Grade 7.
I am friendly and helpful. I'm always ready to help others. My favourite subjects are Chinese and English. They are both very fun and I can learn many new things in the classes. I love playing football after school. I often play football with my friends at the weekend. I also enjoy listening to music when I finish my homework.
Do you want to be my friend?
【知识点】
英语自我介绍写作、常用句型运用
【点评】
范文严格遵循给定的段落布局，覆盖了所有要求的内容要点，语句通顺，符合英语表达习惯，适合七年级学生学习参考。
【难度系数】
0.4

假如你是阳光中学的一名新生，经过一周的学习，你交到了一个名叫李娜的好朋友，她的英文名叫Anna。现在杂志社正在举办征文活动。请根据以下提示，以“My Friend Anna”为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿。

要求：
（1）短文应包含图中的全部内容，可适当发挥；
（2）词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Friend Anna
This is my new friend Anna. I am glad to tell you something about her.

She is 13 years old. We are in the same class, Class 3, Grade 7. She is tall and pretty, and wears a pair of glasses.
She likes reading books very much. She thinks that reading can help open her mind. In her free time, she also enjoys playing tennis. She often plays it with her dad after school.
Anna is very nice and always ready to help others. She gets on well with everyone in our class.
Anna is a good girl and I like her a lot. Do you want to make friends with her?

【分析】
本次写作要求介绍朋友Anna，需覆盖思维导图中的6个核心要点：年龄、班级年级、外貌、爱好、性格、个人看法。先梳理各要点的英文表达，结合已给出的开头，将这些要点串联成逻辑通顺的短文，注意控制词数在90左右，适当添加细节让内容更连贯自然。
【解析】
1. 先介绍Anna的基本信息：年龄（13岁）、班级年级（七年级三班）；2. 描述外貌特征：高个子、漂亮，戴眼镜；3. 说明爱好：喜欢读书、打网球；4. 介绍性格：友善、乐于助人；5. 表达对Anna的看法，收尾呼应。将这些内容按顺序组织，确保语句通顺，符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
She is 13 years old. We are in the same class, Class 3, Grade 7. She is tall and pretty, and wears a pair of glasses.
She likes reading books very much. She thinks that reading can help open her mind. In her free time, she also enjoys playing tennis. She often plays it with her dad after school.
Anna is very nice and always ready to help others. She gets on well with everyone in our class.
Anna is a good girl and I like her a lot. Do you want to make friends with her?
【知识点】
英语写作、记叙文写作
【点评】
本文完整覆盖了题目要求的所有要点，内容连贯，语句通顺，符合初中英语写作的规范，适当补充了细节使文章更生动。
【难度系数】
0.6