Ⅵ. Writing(作文)(本大题共1题,共20分)
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
你的学校正在开展主题为“My ideal place”的英语写作活动,请描述一处你最喜欢的建筑或空间(可以是你去过的地方,也可以是你想象中的理想居所)。
(1)描述该建筑或空间的主要特点(外观、位置、内部设计等);
(2)说明你为什么喜欢这个地方,以及它对你的意义。
My ideal place







(60)

One possible version:
My ideal place
My ideal place is a small reading room at the top of an old building near the park. It has wide windows on three sides,letting in light all morning and offering a clear view of the treetops below. The walls are lined with wooden shelves filled with books,and there is one comfortable chair by the window where you can sit for hours without being disturbed.
I love this kind of space because it combines a sense of calm with a feeling of being connected to the outside world. To me,a building does not need to be large or impressive. It just needs to make you feel at home.

【分析】
本题为英语命题作文，主题是“My ideal place”，写作需紧扣两个要求：一是描述理想场所的特点（位置、外观、内部设计等），二是说明喜欢的原因及意义。解题思路为：1. 选定具体的理想场所（如小阅览室）；2. 从位置、环境、内部陈设等方面细致描写其特点；3. 结合个人感受阐述该场所对自己的价值，确保内容完整、字数达标。
【解析】
首先点明理想场所是公园附近老建筑顶层的小阅览室，接着描述其特点：三面宽窗引入晨光、可俯瞰树梢，墙面有满是书籍的木书架，窗边有舒适座椅；最后说明喜欢的原因：兼具宁静与外界连接感，让人有归属感，形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】
One possible version:
My ideal place
My ideal place is a small reading room at the top of an old building near the park. It has wide windows on three sides,letting in light all morning and offering a clear view of the treetops below. The walls are lined with wooden shelves filled with books,and there is one comfortable chair by the window where you can sit for hours without being disturbed.
I love this kind of space because it combines a sense of calm with a feeling of being connected to the outside world. To me,a building does not need to be large or impressive. It just needs to make you feel at home.
【知识点】
英语短文写作；命题作文
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，先描写理想场所的特点，再阐述其意义，语言流畅自然，符合题目对内容和字数的要求，是一篇规范的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6