假如你是王亚明,周日你要搬家,你想请你的美国好友 Peter 帮忙做以下事情。请你给他写一封 80 词左右的电子邮件,请求他的帮助。

▶▶审作文题
1. 文体:
2. 人称:
3. 时态:
4. 写作要点:①;②;③
▶▶搭建框架
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▶▶小试身手
Dear Peter,










Yours,
Wang Yaming

▶▶审作文题
1. 应用文
2. 第一人称
3. 一般现在时
4. ①写信的目的 ②具体要求 Peter 帮忙做的事情 ③表示感谢
▶▶搭建框架
on Friday: tidy the books
on Saturday: buy some boxes
on Sunday: help move to the new house
next Monday: sweep the floor of the new house
▶▶小试身手
【基础版】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
How's it going? I am busy moving to a new house this Sunday and I want your help.
Could you please help me tidy the books this Friday? It'll make them easier to move. On Saturday, would you mind buying some boxes? We can use them to pack things. On Sunday, I really need you to help move to the new house. It's meaningful to do something for a new start. And next Monday, could you please sweep the floor of the new house?
After all the work, we can share our feelings and experiences with each other. Let me know if you have time.
Thanks a lot.
Yours,
Wang Yaming
【提升版】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Hope this email finds you well. I am busy moving to a new house this Sunday and I'm writing to ask you for help.
Could you please help me tidy the books this Friday? It'll make them easier to move. Then, on Saturday, would you mind buying some boxes? We can use them to pack things. On Sunday, I really need you to help move to the new house. It's meaningful to do something for a new start. And next Monday, could you please sweep the floor of the new house to make it clean?
After all the work, we can share our feelings and experiences with each other. Let me know if you have time.
I'm looking forward to your reply and sincerely hope you can give me a hand.
Yours,
Wang Yaming

【分析】
首先审题确定文体为电子邮件（应用文），人称第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主；写作要点需涵盖写信目的、具体帮忙事项、感谢。接着按时间搭建写作框架，最后用礼貌的请求语句完成邮件，遵循格式，控制词数。
【解析】
1. 审题：明确文体是应用文（电子邮件），人称第一人称，时态用一般现在时；写作要点为①说明写信目的（请求帮忙搬家）②列出具体帮忙任务（周五整理书籍、周六买箱子、周日搬家、周一清扫新房）③表达感谢与期待回复。2. 搭建框架：按时间顺序安排任务，使内容条理清晰。3. 写作时使用礼貌表达（如Could you please...），符合好友间的语气，遵循电子邮件格式，词数约80。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
How's it going? I am busy moving to a new house this Sunday and I want your help.
Could you please help me tidy the books this Friday? It'll make them easier to move. On Saturday, would you mind buying some boxes? We can use them to pack things. On Sunday, I really need you to help move to the new house. It's meaningful to do something for a new start. And next Monday, could you please sweep the floor of the new house?
After all the work, we can share our feelings and experiences with each other. Let me know if you have time.
Thanks a lot.
Yours,
Wang Yaming
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、电子邮件格式、请求表达
【点评】
本题为英语应用文写作题，考查学生电子邮件写作能力，要求掌握书信格式、礼貌用语及内容安排，是贴近学生生活的基础写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5