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今年,学校延时服务将开办各种俱乐部,丰富中学生课余生活。假设你是张华,想申请加入其中的DIY俱乐部,并草拟了申请信的流程图。请根据提示写一封英语申请信。
要求:80—100词。
Dear Chairperson,
I’m Zhang Hua in Grade 8. I’d like to join the DIY club.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
审题指导:
1.体裁:应用文 2.时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 3.人称:第一人称
写作框架:
优秀范文:
Dear Chairperson,
I’m Zhang Hua in Grade 8. I’d like to join the DIY club.
I’m friendly and helpful, so I often get on well with① others. I’m good at② DIY. I enjoy making things by myself in my free time. I want to join the club because I’m crazy about DIY. ⑤ I also hope to make more friends③.
I once made some paper roses for my mum.
, I prepared coloured paper, glue and scissors. Then I folded the paper and cut the flower shapes. At last④, I glued the pieces together. Mum really liked the paper roses and I felt happy.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
亮点词块
①get on well with 和……相处好
②be good at 擅长
③make more friends 交更多的朋友
④at last 最后
高分句子
⑤I want to join the club because I’m crazy about DIY. 我想加入俱乐部因为我对DIY很热爱。(because引导原因状语从句)
今年,学校延时服务将开办各种俱乐部,丰富中学生课余生活。假设你是张华,想申请加入其中的DIY俱乐部,并草拟了申请信的流程图。请根据提示写一封英语申请信。
要求:80—100词。
Dear Chairperson,
I’m Zhang Hua in Grade 8. I’d like to join the DIY club.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
审题指导:
1.体裁:应用文 2.时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 3.人称:第一人称
写作框架:
优秀范文:
Dear Chairperson,
I’m Zhang Hua in Grade 8. I’d like to join the DIY club.
I’m friendly and helpful, so I often get on well with① others. I’m good at② DIY. I enjoy making things by myself in my free time. I want to join the club because I’m crazy about DIY. ⑤ I also hope to make more friends③.
I once made some paper roses for my mum.
, I prepared coloured paper, glue and scissors. Then I folded the paper and cut the flower shapes. At last④, I glued the pieces together. Mum really liked the paper roses and I felt happy.I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
亮点词块
①get on well with 和……相处好
②be good at 擅长
③make more friends 交更多的朋友
④at last 最后
高分句子
⑤I want to join the club because I’m crazy about DIY. 我想加入俱乐部因为我对DIY很热爱。(because引导原因状语从句)
答案
I’m friendly and helpful, so I often get on well with others. I’m good at DIY and I enjoy making things by myself in my free time. I want to join the club because I’m crazy about DIY, and I also hope to make more friends with the same hobby.
I once made some paper roses for my mum. First, I prepared coloured paper, glue and scissors. Then I folded the paper and cut the flower shapes. At last, I glued the pieces together. Mum really liked the gift and I felt very happy.
I once made some paper roses for my mum. First, I prepared coloured paper, glue and scissors. Then I folded the paper and cut the flower shapes. At last, I glued the pieces together. Mum really liked the gift and I felt very happy.
解析
【分析】本题要求写一封加入DIY俱乐部的英语申请信，属于应用文写作。解题思路：首先明确体裁为申请信，时态以一般现在时（介绍自身情况、申请原因）和一般过去时（举例DIY经历）为主，人称用第一人称；需涵盖的要点有：自我介绍（姓名年级）、自身优势（性格、DIY能力）、申请原因、一次DIY具体经历、期待回复；写作时要注意词数80-100，运用给定的亮点词块提升表达，保证内容连贯。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，用一般现在时补充自身情况：说明性格友好乐于助人，擅长DIY，空闲时喜欢自制物品，阐述申请原因（热爱DIY，想交同好）；2. 用一般过去时叙述DIY经历：按First（准备材料）、Then（制作步骤）、At last（完成）的顺序，写做纸玫瑰的过程，结果妈妈喜欢；3. 结尾表达期待回复。注意句子连贯，使用连接词，符合词数要求。
【答案】I’m friendly and helpful, so I often get on well with others. I’m good at DIY and I enjoy making things by myself in my free time. I want to join the club because I’m crazy about DIY, and I also hope to make more friends with the same hobby.
I once made some paper roses for my mum. First, I prepared coloured paper, glue and scissors. Then I folded the paper and cut the flower shapes. At last, I glued the pieces together. Mum really liked the gift and I felt very happy.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时与一般过去时运用、原因状语从句
【点评】本题考查英语申请信的写作能力，要求学生掌握应用文格式，能准确运用时态、短语和句式，清晰表达申请意愿、自身优势及相关经历，符合中学生英语写作的考查重点，注重语言的准确性与内容完整性。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，用一般现在时补充自身情况：说明性格友好乐于助人，擅长DIY，空闲时喜欢自制物品，阐述申请原因（热爱DIY，想交同好）；2. 用一般过去时叙述DIY经历：按First（准备材料）、Then（制作步骤）、At last（完成）的顺序，写做纸玫瑰的过程，结果妈妈喜欢；3. 结尾表达期待回复。注意句子连贯，使用连接词，符合词数要求。
【答案】I’m friendly and helpful, so I often get on well with others. I’m good at DIY and I enjoy making things by myself in my free time. I want to join the club because I’m crazy about DIY, and I also hope to make more friends with the same hobby.
I once made some paper roses for my mum. First, I prepared coloured paper, glue and scissors. Then I folded the paper and cut the flower shapes. At last, I glued the pieces together. Mum really liked the gift and I felt very happy.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时与一般过去时运用、原因状语从句
【点评】本题考查英语申请信的写作能力，要求学生掌握应用文格式，能准确运用时态、短语和句式，清晰表达申请意愿、自身优势及相关经历，符合中学生英语写作的考查重点，注重语言的准确性与内容完整性。
【难度系数】0.5
