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61. 假设你是李华，你校英语社团的“暖心故事”栏目正在征集稿件。请你以“A Time I Helped Someone”为题，写一篇短文投稿，分享你帮助他人的一次经历。
要求:(1)表中内容要点仅供参考;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;(3)80一100词;(4)短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A Time I Helped Someone
Helping others is a great way to make our world warmer.
要求:(1)表中内容要点仅供参考;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;(3)80一100词;(4)短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A Time I Helped Someone
Helping others is a great way to make our world warmer.
答案
One possible version：
A Time I Helped Someone
Helping others is a great way to make our world warmer. I still remember clearly how I helped my classmate, Linlin.
Last month, before the maths exam, I noticed Linlin looked very worried. She told me she was really bad at solving equation problems and felt anxious. Knowing this, I decided to help her. During the lunch breaks for the next three days, I sat with her and explained the key steps to her patiently. I also shared my methods with her and encouraged her not to give up.
Finally, she passed the exam and her smile was the best reward for me. I felt so warm and happy inside. This experience made me truly understand the joy of helping. A small act of kindness can make a big difference.
（119 words）
A Time I Helped Someone
Helping others is a great way to make our world warmer. I still remember clearly how I helped my classmate, Linlin.
Last month, before the maths exam, I noticed Linlin looked very worried. She told me she was really bad at solving equation problems and felt anxious. Knowing this, I decided to help her. During the lunch breaks for the next three days, I sat with her and explained the key steps to her patiently. I also shared my methods with her and encouraged her not to give up.
Finally, she passed the exam and her smile was the best reward for me. I felt so warm and happy inside. This experience made me truly understand the joy of helping. A small act of kindness can make a big difference.
（119 words）
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题记叙文写作题，要求以“A Time I Helped Someone”为题分享帮助他人的经历。解题思路：首先明确写作框架，开头已给出，需补充主体（人物、困难、帮助行为）与结尾（感受体会）；其次紧扣表格内容要点，选取同学作为帮助对象，描述其学习上的困扰，写出具体帮助动作，最后表达帮助后的感悟；同时注意控制词数，避免真实信息，合理运用参考词汇。
【解析】1. 承接给定开头，点明帮助对象；2. 描述对方困境，用参考词汇说明其遇到的问题；3. 阐述帮助行为，运用参考词汇具体说明如何提供帮助；4. 结尾写结果与感受，升华主题，确保语言通顺、符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version：
A Time I Helped Someone
Helping others is a great way to make our world warmer. I still remember clearly how I helped my classmate.
Last month, before the maths exam, I noticed my classmate looked very worried. She told me she had trouble with solving equation problems and felt anxious. Knowing this, I decided to help her. During the lunch breaks for the next three days, I sat with her and explained the key steps to her patiently. I also shared my methods with her and encouraged her not to give up.
Finally, she passed the exam and her smile was the best reward for me. I felt so warm and happy inside. This experience made me truly understand the joy of helping. A small act of kindness can make a big difference.
【知识点】英语话题作文、记叙文写作、词汇运用
【点评】本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有内容要点，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，用词准确恰当，符合写作要求，生动传达了帮助他人的意义，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 承接给定开头，点明帮助对象；2. 描述对方困境，用参考词汇说明其遇到的问题；3. 阐述帮助行为，运用参考词汇具体说明如何提供帮助；4. 结尾写结果与感受，升华主题，确保语言通顺、符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version：
A Time I Helped Someone
Helping others is a great way to make our world warmer. I still remember clearly how I helped my classmate.
Last month, before the maths exam, I noticed my classmate looked very worried. She told me she had trouble with solving equation problems and felt anxious. Knowing this, I decided to help her. During the lunch breaks for the next three days, I sat with her and explained the key steps to her patiently. I also shared my methods with her and encouraged her not to give up.
Finally, she passed the exam and her smile was the best reward for me. I felt so warm and happy inside. This experience made me truly understand the joy of helping. A small act of kindness can make a big difference.
【知识点】英语话题作文、记叙文写作、词汇运用
【点评】本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有内容要点，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，用词准确恰当，符合写作要求，生动传达了帮助他人的意义，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】0.5
