十三、健康的饮食对我们的身体很重要。在健康的饮食清单里,都有哪些食物呢?它们在每一餐里的量又是多少呢?请根据所给图片,以“A healthy diet”为题写一篇短文。(8分)

要求:1.语句通顺,书写清晰、规范;
2.不少于五句话,词数在50词左右(已给出部分不计入总词数)。
A healthy diet
In a healthy diet,
要求:1.语句通顺,书写清晰、规范;
2.不少于五句话,词数在50词左右(已给出部分不计入总词数)。
A healthy diet
In a healthy diet,
there should be all
kinds of food. We should eat some rice and
bread. We should also eat a lot of
vegetables and fruit. Milk is good. We
should drink some milk every day. We
should eat a few eggs every week. We can
have some meat and fish in our meals too.
At the same time, we can only eat a little
sweet food at a time.
kinds of food. We should eat some rice and
bread. We should also eat a lot of
vegetables and fruit. Milk is good. We
should drink some milk every day. We
should eat a few eggs every week. We can
have some meat and fish in our meals too.
At the same time, we can only eat a little
sweet food at a time.
答案
参考范文:
A healthy diet
In a healthy diet, there should be all
kinds of food. We should eat some rice and
bread. We should also eat a lot of
vegetables and fruit. Milk is good. We
should drink some milk every day. We
should eat a few eggs every week. We can
have some meat and fish in our meals too.
At the same time, we can only eat a little
sweet food at a time.
A healthy diet
In a healthy diet, there should be all
kinds of food. We should eat some rice and
bread. We should also eat a lot of
vegetables and fruit. Milk is good. We
should drink some milk every day. We
should eat a few eggs every week. We can
have some meat and fish in our meals too.
At the same time, we can only eat a little
sweet food at a time.
解析
【分析】首先观察图片中的食物金字塔,明确各层食物的类别和摄入量:底层为谷物类(米饭、面包等),摄入量最多;中间层为肉、鱼、蛋等动物性食物,摄入量适中;上层为蔬菜水果类,摄入量较多;顶层为甜食,摄入量最少。写作时需围绕健康饮食的食物种类和摄入量展开,结合图片信息,用通顺的英语表达,满足不少于五句话、50词左右的要求。
【解析】根据图片的食物金字塔结构,先总述健康饮食应包含各类食物,再分别说明不同类别食物的摄入量:谷物类要吃足够,蔬菜水果要多吃,蛋奶、肉鱼适量,甜食少量。组织语言时注意语句通顺,符合英语表达习惯,控制词数。
【答案】A healthy diet
In a healthy diet, there should be all kinds of food. We should eat some rice and bread. We should also eat a lot of vegetables and fruit. Milk is good. We should drink some milk every day. We should eat a few eggs every week. We can have some meat and fish in our meals too. At the same time, we can only eat a little sweet food at a time.
【知识点】英语短文写作、健康饮食表达
【点评】本题结合食物图片考查健康饮食的英语写作,需准确识别图片中食物类别并对应健康饮食的摄入量要求,语言需通顺规范,符合词数要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】根据图片的食物金字塔结构,先总述健康饮食应包含各类食物,再分别说明不同类别食物的摄入量:谷物类要吃足够,蔬菜水果要多吃,蛋奶、肉鱼适量,甜食少量。组织语言时注意语句通顺,符合英语表达习惯,控制词数。
【答案】A healthy diet
In a healthy diet, there should be all kinds of food. We should eat some rice and bread. We should also eat a lot of vegetables and fruit. Milk is good. We should drink some milk every day. We should eat a few eggs every week. We can have some meat and fish in our meals too. At the same time, we can only eat a little sweet food at a time.
【知识点】英语短文写作、健康饮食表达
【点评】本题结合食物图片考查健康饮食的英语写作,需准确识别图片中食物类别并对应健康饮食的摄入量要求,语言需通顺规范,符合词数要求。
【难度系数】0.5
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