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五、书面表达
假设你是住在山区的小王，去年夏天，你的家乡遭遇了一场洪灾。请你根据下面拟好的流程图，写一篇90词左右的短文，描述一下当时的情形，并谈谈你的感悟。
Last summer, we had a terrible disaster in our hometown.
假设你是住在山区的小王，去年夏天，你的家乡遭遇了一场洪灾。请你根据下面拟好的流程图，写一篇90词左右的短文，描述一下当时的情形，并谈谈你的感悟。
Last summer, we had a terrible disaster in our hometown.
答案
One possible version:
Last summer, we had a terrible disaster in our hometown. A big flood happened because it kept raining heavily for days. Our houses came down and people ran in all directions in a hurry. What was worse, some people even lost their lives in this flood.
Luckily, many kind people helped us. They provided places for us to live and food for us to eat. They also helped us build houses again.
I think we'd better not cut down trees because trees can help prevent floods. We should plant more trees. We should also help others in need. If everyone can give a helping hand, our world will be better.
Last summer, we had a terrible disaster in our hometown. A big flood happened because it kept raining heavily for days. Our houses came down and people ran in all directions in a hurry. What was worse, some people even lost their lives in this flood.
Luckily, many kind people helped us. They provided places for us to live and food for us to eat. They also helped us build houses again.
I think we'd better not cut down trees because trees can help prevent floods. We should plant more trees. We should also help others in need. If everyone can give a helping hand, our world will be better.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求根据给定的流程图（洪水期间、洪水后、个人感受）及开头句完成短文。解题思路：1. 对应流程图“During the flood”模块，结合提示词rain、houses，描述洪水成因（持续大雨）与当时的状况（房屋倒塌、人们慌乱）；2. 对应“After the flood”模块，结合提示词places、food，描述灾后他人提供帮助的情况；3. 对应“Your feelings”模块，结合提示词plant trees，表达环保与互助的感悟，同时控制词数在90左右，保证语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接开头句，说明洪水发生的原因：A big flood happened because it kept raining heavily for days.
2. 描述洪水期间的场景：Our houses came down and people ran in all directions in a hurry. What was worse, some people even lost their lives in this flood.
3. 叙述洪水后的情况：Luckily, many kind people helped us. They provided places for us to live and food for us to eat. They also helped us build houses again.
4. 表达个人感悟：I think we'd better not cut down trees because trees can help prevent floods. We should plant more trees. We should also help others in need. If everyone can give a helping hand, our world will be better.
【答案】
One possible version:
Last summer, we had a terrible disaster in our hometown. A big flood happened because it kept raining heavily for days. Our houses came down and people ran in all directions in a hurry. What was worse, some people even lost their lives in this flood.
Luckily, many kind people helped us. They provided places for us to live and food for us to eat. They also helped us build houses again.
I think we'd better not cut down trees because trees can help prevent floods. We should plant more trees. We should also help others in need. If everyone can give a helping hand, our world will be better.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作（自然灾害）
【点评】
本题结合流程图提示考查自然灾害话题的书面表达，既考查学生的语言组织与运用能力，又渗透了环保和互助的情感教育，是初中英语常见的基础写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语书面表达题，要求根据给定的流程图（洪水期间、洪水后、个人感受）及开头句完成短文。解题思路：1. 对应流程图“During the flood”模块，结合提示词rain、houses，描述洪水成因（持续大雨）与当时的状况（房屋倒塌、人们慌乱）；2. 对应“After the flood”模块，结合提示词places、food，描述灾后他人提供帮助的情况；3. 对应“Your feelings”模块，结合提示词plant trees，表达环保与互助的感悟，同时控制词数在90左右，保证语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接开头句，说明洪水发生的原因：A big flood happened because it kept raining heavily for days.
2. 描述洪水期间的场景：Our houses came down and people ran in all directions in a hurry. What was worse, some people even lost their lives in this flood.
3. 叙述洪水后的情况：Luckily, many kind people helped us. They provided places for us to live and food for us to eat. They also helped us build houses again.
4. 表达个人感悟：I think we'd better not cut down trees because trees can help prevent floods. We should plant more trees. We should also help others in need. If everyone can give a helping hand, our world will be better.
【答案】
One possible version:
Last summer, we had a terrible disaster in our hometown. A big flood happened because it kept raining heavily for days. Our houses came down and people ran in all directions in a hurry. What was worse, some people even lost their lives in this flood.
Luckily, many kind people helped us. They provided places for us to live and food for us to eat. They also helped us build houses again.
I think we'd better not cut down trees because trees can help prevent floods. We should plant more trees. We should also help others in need. If everyone can give a helping hand, our world will be better.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作（自然灾害）
【点评】
本题结合流程图提示考查自然灾害话题的书面表达，既考查学生的语言组织与运用能力，又渗透了环保和互助的情感教育，是初中英语常见的基础写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.7
