Ⅸ. Writing. 你即将成为一名中学生,在中学校园里,你会接触到新的同学和老师,请你以“About me”为题,写一篇英语短文,对自己的情况进行介绍。(10分)
要求:1. 紧扣题目,条理清晰,意思连贯,语句通顺。2. 标点正确,书写规范。3. 不少于八句话。

要求:1. 紧扣题目,条理清晰,意思连贯,语句通顺。2. 标点正确,书写规范。3. 不少于八句话。
答案
【参考范文】 About me
Hi, everyone. My name is Mark. I am strong and tall. I have got short hair. I am active and friendly, so I have got many friends. I usually go to school on foot. My hobbies are listening to music and playing sports. I often play basketball after school. I also like travelling during the holidays. I usually do my homework before dinner. Do you want to be my friend?
Hi, everyone. My name is Mark. I am strong and tall. I have got short hair. I am active and friendly, so I have got many friends. I usually go to school on foot. My hobbies are listening to music and playing sports. I often play basketball after school. I also like travelling during the holidays. I usually do my homework before dinner. Do you want to be my friend?
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题是“About me”(介绍自己),需结合表格给出的四个维度(外貌、性格、爱好、日常生活);接着按照“开头介绍姓名→描写外貌→阐述性格→说明爱好→讲述日常生活→结尾互动”的逻辑结构组织内容,确保句子数量不少于8句,语句通顺连贯,使用正确的英语表达。
【解析】1. 开头:用“Hi, everyone. My name is...”引出自己,如My name is Mark;2. 外貌:结合表格的strong、short hair,写“I am strong and have short hair.”;3. 性格:用friendly、active,写“I am friendly and active, so I have many friends.”;4. 爱好:用listening to music、travelling,写“My hobbies are listening to music and travelling.”;5. 日常生活:用go to school、do homework,写“I usually go to school on foot and do my homework before dinner.”;6. 结尾:添加“Do you want to be my friend?”,确保句子数量达标,内容完整。
【答案】About me
Hi, everyone. My name is Mark. I am strong and tall. I have got short hair. I am active and friendly, so I have got many friends. I usually go to school on foot. My hobbies are listening to music and playing sports. I often play basketball after school. I also like travelling during the holidays. I usually do my homework before dinner. Do you want to be my friend?
【知识点】英语自我介绍写作、形容词运用、常用动词短语
【点评】该范文紧扣题目要求,条理清晰,覆盖了外貌、性格、爱好、日常生活四个指定维度,语句通顺连贯,符合不少于八句话的要求,结尾自然互动,是符合题目标准的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】1. 开头:用“Hi, everyone. My name is...”引出自己,如My name is Mark;2. 外貌:结合表格的strong、short hair,写“I am strong and have short hair.”;3. 性格:用friendly、active,写“I am friendly and active, so I have many friends.”;4. 爱好:用listening to music、travelling,写“My hobbies are listening to music and travelling.”;5. 日常生活:用go to school、do homework,写“I usually go to school on foot and do my homework before dinner.”;6. 结尾:添加“Do you want to be my friend?”,确保句子数量达标,内容完整。
【答案】About me
Hi, everyone. My name is Mark. I am strong and tall. I have got short hair. I am active and friendly, so I have got many friends. I usually go to school on foot. My hobbies are listening to music and playing sports. I often play basketball after school. I also like travelling during the holidays. I usually do my homework before dinner. Do you want to be my friend?
【知识点】英语自我介绍写作、形容词运用、常用动词短语
【点评】该范文紧扣题目要求,条理清晰,覆盖了外貌、性格、爱好、日常生活四个指定维度,语句通顺连贯,符合不少于八句话的要求,结尾自然互动,是符合题目标准的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.3
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