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四、书面表达(本题有1小题,共10分)
你校今天组织一次农场研学活动,活动中你拍了不少照片。回家后你回放照片,回忆这次研学活动,反思研学过程中要改进的一些问题,写一篇英语日记。
要求:1. 根据图片内容,可作适当发挥;
2. 日记中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Wednesday, 4 June
Today, we went on a study tour to a farm. It was an exciting and educational trip.
你校今天组织一次农场研学活动,活动中你拍了不少照片。回家后你回放照片,回忆这次研学活动,反思研学过程中要改进的一些问题,写一篇英语日记。
要求:1. 根据图片内容,可作适当发挥;
2. 日记中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Wednesday, 4 June
Today, we went on a study tour to a farm. It was an exciting and educational trip.
答案
One possible version:
Wednesday, 4 June
Today, we went on a study tour to a farm. It was an exciting and educational trip. It's a pity that something unpleasant happened during the trip. For example, some of my classmates did not arrive on time. We had to wait for them in the classroom. As a result, we left 30 minutes later than expected. I think it's everyone's duty to arrive on time. Besides, on the farm, some classmates played with water instead of doing farm work. I think they should work hard with their classmates. It's important for us students to learn some farming skills and build class spirit. What's more, some classmates littered fresh fruit. We should not waste food. As the saying goes, "Every grain comes from hard work." Hope our school can make rules to help us have a better trip.
Wednesday, 4 June
Today, we went on a study tour to a farm. It was an exciting and educational trip. It's a pity that something unpleasant happened during the trip. For example, some of my classmates did not arrive on time. We had to wait for them in the classroom. As a result, we left 30 minutes later than expected. I think it's everyone's duty to arrive on time. Besides, on the farm, some classmates played with water instead of doing farm work. I think they should work hard with their classmates. It's important for us students to learn some farming skills and build class spirit. What's more, some classmates littered fresh fruit. We should not waste food. As the saying goes, "Every grain comes from hard work." Hope our school can make rules to help us have a better trip.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求结合图片内容写一篇关于农场研学活动的日记。解题思路：1. 明确日记格式（开头已给出，时态以一般过去时为主）；2. 提取三张图片的核心信息：①部分同学未按时到达（对应“Arrive on time”）；②部分同学在农场玩水而非劳作（对应“Work hard on the farm”）；③部分同学浪费食物（对应“Don’t waste food”）；3. 围绕“描述活动+反思问题+表达感悟”的结构写作，词数控制在80左右，不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
【解析】
首先衔接开头，总述研学的感受；接着结合图片中的三个问题展开：①说明部分同学迟到导致出发延迟，强调守时的重要性；②指出部分同学未认真劳作，应培养团队精神与劳作意识；③点明部分同学浪费食物，引用谚语“Every grain comes from hard work”强调节约的意义；最后表达对未来活动的期待，完成日记写作。
【答案】
One possible version:
Wednesday, 4 June
Today, we went on a study tour to a farm. It was an exciting and educational trip. It's a pity that something unpleasant happened during the trip. For example, some of my classmates did not arrive on time. We had to wait for them in the classroom. As a result, we left 30 minutes later than expected. I think it's everyone's duty to arrive on time. Besides, on the farm, some classmates played with water instead of doing farm work. I think they should work hard with their classmates. It's important for us students to learn some farming skills and build class spirit. What's more, some classmates littered fresh fruit. We should not waste food. As the saying goes, "Every grain comes from hard work." Hope our school can make rules to help us have a better trip.
【知识点】
英语日记写作、看图写话、话题作文
【点评】
本题结合图片信息考查英语书面表达能力，既要求学生提炼图片要点组织语言，又渗透了守时、劳作、节约的德育教育，符合英语学科核心素养要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，要求结合图片内容写一篇关于农场研学活动的日记。解题思路：1. 明确日记格式（开头已给出，时态以一般过去时为主）；2. 提取三张图片的核心信息：①部分同学未按时到达（对应“Arrive on time”）；②部分同学在农场玩水而非劳作（对应“Work hard on the farm”）；③部分同学浪费食物（对应“Don’t waste food”）；3. 围绕“描述活动+反思问题+表达感悟”的结构写作，词数控制在80左右，不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
【解析】
首先衔接开头，总述研学的感受；接着结合图片中的三个问题展开：①说明部分同学迟到导致出发延迟，强调守时的重要性；②指出部分同学未认真劳作，应培养团队精神与劳作意识；③点明部分同学浪费食物，引用谚语“Every grain comes from hard work”强调节约的意义；最后表达对未来活动的期待，完成日记写作。
【答案】
One possible version:
Wednesday, 4 June
Today, we went on a study tour to a farm. It was an exciting and educational trip. It's a pity that something unpleasant happened during the trip. For example, some of my classmates did not arrive on time. We had to wait for them in the classroom. As a result, we left 30 minutes later than expected. I think it's everyone's duty to arrive on time. Besides, on the farm, some classmates played with water instead of doing farm work. I think they should work hard with their classmates. It's important for us students to learn some farming skills and build class spirit. What's more, some classmates littered fresh fruit. We should not waste food. As the saying goes, "Every grain comes from hard work." Hope our school can make rules to help us have a better trip.
【知识点】
英语日记写作、看图写话、话题作文
【点评】
本题结合图片信息考查英语书面表达能力，既要求学生提炼图片要点组织语言，又渗透了守时、劳作、节约的德育教育，符合英语学科核心素养要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
