十四、书面表达。(共7分)
Jimmy计划今天大扫除,他正在写大扫除计划。请你根据问题和图片内容提示,帮他完成这份计划。

提示:1. How is Jimmy's bedroom now?
2. What will he do to make it clean?
3. What shouldn't he do to keep it clean later?
要求:语句连贯、通顺,书写规范、准确,不少于50词。
Sunday, 17th January
My bedroom is
Jimmy计划今天大扫除,他正在写大扫除计划。请你根据问题和图片内容提示,帮他完成这份计划。
提示:1. How is Jimmy's bedroom now?
2. What will he do to make it clean?
3. What shouldn't he do to keep it clean later?
要求:语句连贯、通顺,书写规范、准确,不少于50词。
Sunday, 17th January
My bedroom is
答案
One possible version:
Sunday, 17th January
My bedroom is very messy now. I can't even find my shoes! I will do some cleaning today. To make it clean, I will pick up all the rubbish and put it in the bin. I will also put my things in order.
It is good to have a clean and tidy room. I want to keep it clean all the time. So I won't leave things on the floor or eat snacks in my bedroom again.
Sunday, 17th January
My bedroom is very messy now. I can't even find my shoes! I will do some cleaning today. To make it clean, I will pick up all the rubbish and put it in the bin. I will also put my things in order.
It is good to have a clean and tidy room. I want to keep it clean all the time. So I won't leave things on the floor or eat snacks in my bedroom again.
解析
【分析】首先观察图片,Jimmy的卧室里物品杂乱,玩具、书本、香蕉皮等散落在地面,衣服随意放置在床上,因此卧室现状是凌乱的。根据提示的三个问题,第一步需描述卧室当前状态;第二步要制定打扫计划,比如清理垃圾、整理物品;第三步要说明后续保持整洁不能做的事,比如不随意扔东西、不在卧室吃零食。写作时需结合图片内容,用连贯的语句、正确的时态(一般将来时)完成,满足不少于50词的要求。
【解析】先根据图片描述卧室现状:My bedroom is very messy now. 接着写打扫计划:I will pick up all the rubbish and put it in the bin, and put my things in order. 最后写保持整洁的注意事项:I won't leave things on the floor or eat snacks in my bedroom again. 组合成符合要求的短文,确保语句通顺、内容完整。
【答案】Sunday, 17th January
My bedroom is very messy now. I can't even find my shoes! I will do some cleaning today. To make it clean, I will pick up all the rubbish and put it in the bin. I will also put my things in order.
It is good to have a clean and tidy room. I want to keep it clean all the time. So I won't leave things on the floor or eat snacks in my bedroom again.
【知识点】书面表达、一般将来时
【点评】本题结合图片与提示考查英语书面表达能力,要求学生根据图片内容完成现状描述、打扫计划及后续注意事项,能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力,需注意语句连贯、书写规范。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】先根据图片描述卧室现状:My bedroom is very messy now. 接着写打扫计划:I will pick up all the rubbish and put it in the bin, and put my things in order. 最后写保持整洁的注意事项:I won't leave things on the floor or eat snacks in my bedroom again. 组合成符合要求的短文,确保语句通顺、内容完整。
【答案】Sunday, 17th January
My bedroom is very messy now. I can't even find my shoes! I will do some cleaning today. To make it clean, I will pick up all the rubbish and put it in the bin. I will also put my things in order.
It is good to have a clean and tidy room. I want to keep it clean all the time. So I won't leave things on the floor or eat snacks in my bedroom again.
【知识点】书面表达、一般将来时
【点评】本题结合图片与提示考查英语书面表达能力,要求学生根据图片内容完成现状描述、打扫计划及后续注意事项,能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力,需注意语句连贯、书写规范。
【难度系数】0.6
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