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保持健康对于我们来说非常重要，我们应该意识到健康生活方式的重要性，请你以“How to be healthy”为题，根据表格要点提示，用英语写一篇小短文向英文校刊投稿。
注意：
1. 内容必须包含表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 词数70左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
【写作指导】
这是一篇说明文。根据提示可知：① 人称：用第一人称；② 时态：一般现在时；③ 写作步骤为：第一步，点题。健康很重要，我们要如何保持健康；第二步，具体阐述保持健康的方法；第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
【写作提纲】
【小试身手】
How to be healthy
It's very important for us to stay healthy. We can do something to keep fit.
保持健康对于我们来说非常重要，我们应该意识到健康生活方式的重要性，请你以“How to be healthy”为题，根据表格要点提示，用英语写一篇小短文向英文校刊投稿。
注意：
1. 内容必须包含表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 词数70左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
【写作指导】
这是一篇说明文。根据提示可知：① 人称：用第一人称；② 时态：一般现在时；③ 写作步骤为：第一步，点题。健康很重要，我们要如何保持健康；第二步，具体阐述保持健康的方法；第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
【写作提纲】
【小试身手】
How to be healthy
It's very important for us to stay healthy. We can do something to keep fit.
First, eat green vegetables and fresh fruit. Drinking milk is also good for our health. Second, do exercise every day. For example, you can play football or basketball.
Third, make sure you have enough sleep. Don't stay up late watching TV or playing games. It's bad for your health.
Last but not least, keep a good mood. A good mood brings good luck. Health is important to us. So we should try our best to keep healthy.
答案
Period 7 Assessment & Further study(单元主题写作)
One possible version:
How to be healthy
It's very important for us to stay healthy. We can do something to keep fit.
First, eat green vegetables and fresh fruit. Drinking milk is also good for our health. Second, do exercise every day. For example, you can play football or basketball. Third, make sure you have enough sleep. Don't stay up late watching TV or playing games. It's bad for your health. Last but not least, keep a good mood. A good mood brings good luck.
Health is important to us. So we should try our best to keep healthy.
One possible version:
How to be healthy
It's very important for us to stay healthy. We can do something to keep fit.
First, eat green vegetables and fresh fruit. Drinking milk is also good for our health. Second, do exercise every day. For example, you can play football or basketball. Third, make sure you have enough sleep. Don't stay up late watching TV or playing games. It's bad for your health. Last but not least, keep a good mood. A good mood brings good luck.
Health is important to us. So we should try our best to keep healthy.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语单元主题写作，要求以“How to be healthy”为题写短文，首句已给出，需包含健康相关的饮食、运动、睡眠、情绪等要点，词数70左右，时态为一般现在时。解题思路：1. 承接首句，分点列出保持健康的具体做法，确保覆盖所有要求要点；2. 每个做法搭配简单例子，使内容具体；3. 最后总结呼应主题，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
首先承接首句，分点阐述：①饮食方面，建议吃绿色蔬菜、新鲜水果，喝牛奶；②运动方面，每天锻炼，如踢足球、打篮球；③睡眠方面，保证充足睡眠，不熬夜；④情绪方面，保持好心情。最后总结健康重要，要尽力保持健康，确保内容完整、结构清晰、词数达标。
【答案】
How to be healthy
It's very important for us to stay healthy. We can do something to keep fit.
First, eat green vegetables and fresh fruit. Drinking milk is also good for our health. Second, do exercise every day. For example, you can play football or basketball. Third, make sure you have enough sleep. Don't stay up late watching TV or playing games. It's bad for your health. Last but not least, keep a good mood. A good mood brings good luck.
Health is important to us. So we should try our best to keep healthy.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，健康话题表达，要点式短文写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，分点阐述保持健康的方法，覆盖所有要求要点，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的单元主题写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语单元主题写作，要求以“How to be healthy”为题写短文，首句已给出，需包含健康相关的饮食、运动、睡眠、情绪等要点，词数70左右，时态为一般现在时。解题思路：1. 承接首句，分点列出保持健康的具体做法，确保覆盖所有要求要点；2. 每个做法搭配简单例子，使内容具体；3. 最后总结呼应主题，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
首先承接首句，分点阐述：①饮食方面，建议吃绿色蔬菜、新鲜水果，喝牛奶；②运动方面，每天锻炼，如踢足球、打篮球；③睡眠方面，保证充足睡眠，不熬夜；④情绪方面，保持好心情。最后总结健康重要，要尽力保持健康，确保内容完整、结构清晰、词数达标。
【答案】
How to be healthy
It's very important for us to stay healthy. We can do something to keep fit.
First, eat green vegetables and fresh fruit. Drinking milk is also good for our health. Second, do exercise every day. For example, you can play football or basketball. Third, make sure you have enough sleep. Don't stay up late watching TV or playing games. It's bad for your health. Last but not least, keep a good mood. A good mood brings good luck.
Health is important to us. So we should try our best to keep healthy.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，健康话题表达，要点式短文写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，分点阐述保持健康的方法，覆盖所有要求要点，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的单元主题写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.5
