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本单元的话题是生活方式，涉及饮食、运动和睡眠等相关内容。与此相关的写作通常有：①描述自己或他人的生活方式；②分析、评价自己或他人的生活方式是否健康；③对不健康的生活方式提出改进建议。
在具体介绍自己或他人的生活方式时，通常包含以下要点：①介绍饮食习惯，包括三餐所吃的食物等；②介绍运动情况，如做运动的频率等；③介绍睡眠情况，如睡眠时间等；④点评生活习惯健康与否。
【抛砖引玉】
假如你是李华，你在学校获得了“健康之星”的称号。请根据右面表格中的内容，写一篇英语短文，给学校的英语报投稿，向大家介绍自己健康的生活方式。
要求：
1. 短文须包括表格中所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数90左右。
本单元的话题是生活方式，涉及饮食、运动和睡眠等相关内容。与此相关的写作通常有：①描述自己或他人的生活方式；②分析、评价自己或他人的生活方式是否健康；③对不健康的生活方式提出改进建议。
在具体介绍自己或他人的生活方式时，通常包含以下要点：①介绍饮食习惯，包括三餐所吃的食物等；②介绍运动情况，如做运动的频率等；③介绍睡眠情况，如睡眠时间等；④点评生活习惯健康与否。
【抛砖引玉】
假如你是李华，你在学校获得了“健康之星”的称号。请根据右面表格中的内容，写一篇英语短文，给学校的英语报投稿，向大家介绍自己健康的生活方式。
要求：
1. 短文须包括表格中所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数90左右。
答案
My Healthy Lifestyle
Hello everyone. I'm Li Hua, a 13-year-old student from Class 1, Grade 7. I got the "Healthy Star" award at our school not long ago.
I have good healthy eating habits. I eat lots of vegetables and fruit every day and seldom eat junk food. I love doing sports, and I usually play basketball or run for half an hour after class. I never stay up late, so I can get enough sleep every night. Besides, I always look on the bright side of things and keep happy all the time.
A healthy lifestyle makes me fit and energetic.
Hello everyone. I'm Li Hua, a 13-year-old student from Class 1, Grade 7. I got the "Healthy Star" award at our school not long ago.
I have good healthy eating habits. I eat lots of vegetables and fruit every day and seldom eat junk food. I love doing sports, and I usually play basketball or run for half an hour after class. I never stay up late, so I can get enough sleep every night. Besides, I always look on the bright side of things and keep happy all the time.
A healthy lifestyle makes me fit and energetic.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：以李华的身份，向学校英语报介绍自己的健康生活方式，需涵盖表格所有要点，适当发挥，词数约90，不出现真实信息。第一步，开头介绍基本身份（年龄、班级）和获奖情况，引出主题；第二步，按表格要点展开：补充饮食习惯的具体内容（如吃蔬菜、水果，少吃垃圾食品），运动的具体项目和时长，睡眠的好处，以及乐观心态的表现；第三步，总结健康生活方式的益处，确保语言流畅、符合要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：点明身份（李华，13岁，七年级一班学生），说明获得“健康之星”称号，引出介绍生活方式的主题。
2. 主体部分：
饮食习惯：说明有健康的饮食习惯，每天吃大量蔬菜和水果，很少吃垃圾食品，补充细节丰富内容。
运动情况：说明喜欢运动，课后通常打篮球或跑步半小时，体现运动习惯。
睡眠情况：说明从不熬夜，因此每晚能获得充足睡眠，突出健康。
心态：说明总是乐观看待事物，保持积极情绪。
3. 结尾：总结健康生活方式让自己健康有活力，升华主题。
4. 检查：确认涵盖所有表格要点，适当发挥，词数达标，无真实信息，语言通顺。
【答案】
My Healthy Lifestyle
Hello everyone. I'm Li Hua, a 13-year-old student from Class 1, Grade 7. I got the "Healthy Star" award at our school not long ago.
I have good healthy eating habits. I eat lots of vegetables and fruit every day and seldom eat junk food. I love doing sports, and I usually play basketball or run for half an hour after class. I never stay up late, so I can get enough sleep every night. Besides, I always look on the bright side of things and keep happy all the time.
A healthy lifestyle makes me fit and energetic.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；生活方式话题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖表格所有要点，适当补充细节使内容更充实，语言符合七年级学生的英语水平，流畅自然，词数达标，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作任务：以李华的身份，向学校英语报介绍自己的健康生活方式，需涵盖表格所有要点，适当发挥，词数约90，不出现真实信息。第一步，开头介绍基本身份（年龄、班级）和获奖情况，引出主题；第二步，按表格要点展开：补充饮食习惯的具体内容（如吃蔬菜、水果，少吃垃圾食品），运动的具体项目和时长，睡眠的好处，以及乐观心态的表现；第三步，总结健康生活方式的益处，确保语言流畅、符合要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：点明身份（李华，13岁，七年级一班学生），说明获得“健康之星”称号，引出介绍生活方式的主题。
2. 主体部分：
饮食习惯：说明有健康的饮食习惯，每天吃大量蔬菜和水果，很少吃垃圾食品，补充细节丰富内容。
运动情况：说明喜欢运动，课后通常打篮球或跑步半小时，体现运动习惯。
睡眠情况：说明从不熬夜，因此每晚能获得充足睡眠，突出健康。
心态：说明总是乐观看待事物，保持积极情绪。
3. 结尾：总结健康生活方式让自己健康有活力，升华主题。
4. 检查：确认涵盖所有表格要点，适当发挥，词数达标，无真实信息，语言通顺。
【答案】
My Healthy Lifestyle
Hello everyone. I'm Li Hua, a 13-year-old student from Class 1, Grade 7. I got the "Healthy Star" award at our school not long ago.
I have good healthy eating habits. I eat lots of vegetables and fruit every day and seldom eat junk food. I love doing sports, and I usually play basketball or run for half an hour after class. I never stay up late, so I can get enough sleep every night. Besides, I always look on the bright side of things and keep happy all the time.
A healthy lifestyle makes me fit and energetic.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；生活方式话题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖表格所有要点，适当补充细节使内容更充实，语言符合七年级学生的英语水平，流畅自然，词数达标，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
假如你是李华，下周你班要举办一次“My healthy lifestyle”的英文演讲活动。请根据图片及英文提示，写一篇演讲稿，介绍自己的生活方式，并呼吁你班同学拥有健康的生活方式。
要求：
1. 紧扣图片及英文提示，可适当发挥；
2. 词数90左右，演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My healthy lifestyle
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm very happy to share my healthy lifestyle with all of you.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
要求：
1. 紧扣图片及英文提示，可适当发挥；
2. 词数90左右，演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My healthy lifestyle
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm very happy to share my healthy lifestyle with all of you.
I play sports with my father every day, such as running and playing ping-pong. On weekdays, I always go to bed early and get up early. I never stay up late. And before going to bed, I usually read for half an hour. It helps me relax and sleep better. As for my eating habits, I often eat fruit and vegetables. And I never eat potato chips or drink coffee. I think they are not good for my health. Besides, I seldom eat snacks between meals. It's important for us to have a healthy lifestyle. It is good for both our studies and everyday lives. I hope you all live a healthy life.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
答案
单元写作指导
【写作提示】
1. 主题:介绍生活习惯
2. 人称:以第一人称为主
3. 时态:一般现在时
4. 要点:运动、睡眠、饮食、发出呼吁
5. 写作思路:正文部分分别从运动、睡眠和饮食三个方面介绍生活方式,结尾号召大家拥有健康的生活方式。
【参考范文】
My healthy lifestyle
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm very happy to share my healthy lifestyle with all of you.
I play sports with my father every day, such as running and playing ping-pong. On weekdays, I always go to bed early and get up early. I never stay up late. And before going to bed, I usually read for half an hour. It helps me relax and sleep better. As for my eating habits, I often eat fruit and vegetables. And I never eat potato chips or drink coffee. I think they are not good for my health. Besides, I seldom eat snacks between meals.
It's important for us to have a healthy lifestyle. It is good for both our studies and everyday lives. I hope you all live a healthy life.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
【写作提示】
1. 主题:介绍生活习惯
2. 人称:以第一人称为主
3. 时态:一般现在时
4. 要点:运动、睡眠、饮食、发出呼吁
5. 写作思路:正文部分分别从运动、睡眠和饮食三个方面介绍生活方式,结尾号召大家拥有健康的生活方式。
【参考范文】
My healthy lifestyle
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm very happy to share my healthy lifestyle with all of you.
I play sports with my father every day, such as running and playing ping-pong. On weekdays, I always go to bed early and get up early. I never stay up late. And before going to bed, I usually read for half an hour. It helps me relax and sleep better. As for my eating habits, I often eat fruit and vegetables. And I never eat potato chips or drink coffee. I think they are not good for my health. Besides, I seldom eat snacks between meals.
It's important for us to have a healthy lifestyle. It is good for both our studies and everyday lives. I hope you all live a healthy life.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
解析
【分析】本题是英语应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份完成“My healthy lifestyle”主题演讲稿。解题思路：1. 明确人称（第一人称）和时态（一般现在时）；2. 紧扣图片及频率提示（every day/always/usually/often/never），从运动、睡眠、饮食三个核心方面介绍健康生活方式；3. 补充合理细节，控制词数，结尾发出健康生活的呼吁，符合演讲稿的格式要求。
【解析】写作时需围绕三个要点展开：①运动：对应图1，用every day描述每天和父亲做运动（如跑步、打乒乓球）；②睡眠：对应图2，用always写早睡早起，usually写睡前读书，never写不熬夜；③饮食：对应图3，用often写常吃果蔬，never写不吃薯片、咖啡；最后添加呼吁健康生活的内容，确保语言通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】My healthy lifestyle
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm very happy to share my healthy lifestyle with all of you.
I play sports with my father every day, such as running and playing ping-pong. On weekdays, I always go to bed early and get up early. I never stay up late. And before going to bed, I usually read for half an hour. It helps me relax and sleep better. As for my eating habits, I often eat fruit and vegetables. And I never eat potato chips or drink coffee. I think they are not good for my health. Besides, I seldom eat snacks between meals.
It's important for us to have a healthy lifestyle. It is good for both our studies and everyday lives. I hope you all live a healthy life.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、频率副词运用、健康生活话题表达
【点评】本题结合图片与频率提示，贴近学生日常，考查学生信息提取、篇章组织及语言表达能力，是初中英语常见的单元写作题型，能有效检验学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时需围绕三个要点展开：①运动：对应图1，用every day描述每天和父亲做运动（如跑步、打乒乓球）；②睡眠：对应图2，用always写早睡早起，usually写睡前读书，never写不熬夜；③饮食：对应图3，用often写常吃果蔬，never写不吃薯片、咖啡；最后添加呼吁健康生活的内容，确保语言通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】My healthy lifestyle
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm very happy to share my healthy lifestyle with all of you.
I play sports with my father every day, such as running and playing ping-pong. On weekdays, I always go to bed early and get up early. I never stay up late. And before going to bed, I usually read for half an hour. It helps me relax and sleep better. As for my eating habits, I often eat fruit and vegetables. And I never eat potato chips or drink coffee. I think they are not good for my health. Besides, I seldom eat snacks between meals.
It's important for us to have a healthy lifestyle. It is good for both our studies and everyday lives. I hope you all live a healthy life.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、频率副词运用、健康生活话题表达
【点评】本题结合图片与频率提示，贴近学生日常，考查学生信息提取、篇章组织及语言表达能力，是初中英语常见的单元写作题型，能有效检验学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
