每个人都有自己的梦想,你为实现梦想制订过切实可行的计划吗?请你根据以下提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文,介绍你的计划并在英语课上和大家分享。
提示:
1. What do you want to be?
2. How are you going to make your dream come true?
▶▶审作文题
1. 文体：
2. 人称：
3. 时态：
4. 写作要点:①；②；③
▶▶搭建框架
(温馨提示:请先完成下面的写作提纲)

▶▶小试身手

▶▶审作文题
1. 说明文
2. 第一人称
3. 一般将来时和一般现在时
4. ①自己的梦想 ②如何实现自己的梦想 ③自己的感受
▶▶搭建框架
Beginning: What my dream is
Body: How to make my dream come true
Ending: My feeling
▶▶小试身手
【基础版】
One possible version:
Everyone has his dream job. As for me, I want to be a writer when I grow up because I like reading and am good at writing.
To make my dream come true, I plan to read many books and practise writing every day. I'm going to write essays and send them to magazines and newspapers, and keep on studying hard. Although I will face many difficulties, I won't give up.
Where there is a will, there is a way. I'm going to try my best to make my dream come true.
【提升版】
One possible version:
Dreams have to do with hobbies. I enjoy reading and am good at writing. For this reason, I want to be a writer when I grow up.
In order to make my dream come true, I make some plans. Firstly, I'm going to read lots of books. It not only makes me learn more things, but also helps me improve my writing skills. Secondly, I plan to write essays and send them to magazines and newspapers. What's more, I'm going to keep on studying hard. Although I will face difficulties, I won't lose hope.
As the saying goes,"Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. " I believe that if I work hard and never give up, I will be able to make my dream come true.

【分析】
首先审题确定文体为说明文，人称用第一人称，时态结合一般现在时（说明梦想的依据）和一般将来时（表述未来计划）；接着明确写作要点：①自己的梦想；②实现梦想的具体计划；③自身的感受或决心；然后搭建“开头-主体-结尾”的写作框架，最后组织语言时控制词数在80词左右，确保要点完整、语句通顺。
【解析】
1. 审题：明确文体为说明文，人称用第一人称，时态结合一般现在时和一般将来时；
2. 确定写作要点：①说明自己的梦想（如成为作家）；②阐述实现梦想的具体计划（多读书、练习写作、投稿等）；③表达自身的感受或决心；
3. 搭建框架：
Beginning：点明梦想及原因（如喜欢阅读写作，想成为作家）；
Body：具体说明实现梦想的计划（每天读书、练习写作、投稿到报刊、努力学习等）；
Ending：表达实现梦想的决心，可引用谚语增强表达效果；
4. 组织语言：确保要点齐全，语句通顺，词数符合要求。
【答案】
▶▶审作文题
1. 说明文
2. 第一人称
3. 一般将来时和一般现在时
4. ①自己的梦想 ②如何实现自己的梦想 ③自己的感受
▶▶搭建框架
Beginning: What my dream is
Body: How to make my dream come true
Ending: My feeling
▶▶小试身手
【基础版】
One possible version:
Everyone has his dream job. As for me, I want to be a writer when I grow up because I like reading and am good at writing.
To make my dream come true, I plan to read many books and practise writing every day. I'm going to write essays and send them to magazines and newspapers, and keep on studying hard. Although I will face many difficulties, I won't give up.
Where there is a will, there is a way. I'm going to try my best to make my dream come true.
【提升版】
One possible version:
Dreams have to do with hobbies. I enjoy reading and am good at writing. For this reason, I want to be a writer when I grow up.
In order to make my dream come true, I make some plans. Firstly, I'm going to read lots of books. It not only makes me learn more things, but also helps me improve my writing skills. Secondly, I plan to write essays and send them to magazines and newspapers. What's more, I'm going to keep on studying hard. Although I will face difficulties, I won't lose hope.
As the saying goes,"Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. " I believe that if I work hard and never give up, I will be able to make my dream come true.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般将来时运用、英语写作结构
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，要点完整，语言流畅自然，符合英语写作规范，能清晰分享自己的梦想与实现计划，是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.6