2026年上海作业九年级英语上册沪教版五四制第37页答案
Ⅵ. Writing(作文)(本大题共1题,共20分)
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文)
你的学校即将举办“职业体验日(Career Day)”。请写一篇短文介绍你理想的职业。
(1)你的理想职业是什么(如:室内建筑、法律相关等)。
(2)从事该职业需要具备哪些条件或技能。
(3)你为什么想从事这份工作。

答案

One possible version:
For the upcoming Career Day,I plan to share my dream job—interior architecture. To become a professional in this field,one must meet strict requirements that include getting a special certification and operating complex equipment. I strongly desire to take this job because an excellent architect is a person who creates both beautiful and safe living spaces for others. Although achieving this goal requires much effort,I will never stop chasing my dream.

解析

【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题,要求围绕“理想职业”展开,需覆盖三个核心要点:明确理想职业、说明该职业所需的条件或技能、阐述选择该职业的原因,且词数不少于60词。解题思路为:先确定具体的理想职业,再梳理对应职业的要求,最后结合职业意义说明选择原因,确保内容连贯、要点齐全。
【解析】
写作时遵循“总-分”结构:1. 开篇点明理想职业,呼应“Career Day”的情境;2. 说明从事该职业的条件;3. 阐述选择该职业的原因;4. 结尾表达追梦决心,确保词数达标,语言准确通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
For the upcoming Career Day,I plan to share my dream job—interior architecture. To become a professional in this field,one must meet strict requirements that include getting a special certification and operating complex equipment. I strongly desire to take this job because an excellent architect is a person who creates both beautiful and safe living spaces for others. Although achieving this goal requires much effort,I will never stop chasing my dream.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作,职业话题表达,要点式写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖三个写作要点,结构清晰,语言流畅自然,符合英语写作规范,是一篇合格的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.6