许多人热爱音乐,他们觉得音乐在他们的生活中是不可或缺的。你是否也和他们观点一样呢？现在,请你根据以下提示内容,以“The Role of Music”为题写一篇短文,介绍音乐的益处。
内容提示:1.音乐可以让我们放松身心,帮助我们减少压力；
2.音乐可以振奋并鼓舞人心；
3.音乐可以使我们忘记烦恼,帮助我们走出困境；
4.音乐可以……
写作要求:1.中心突出,语义连贯,层次清晰,书写规范；2.词数100左右。
The Role of Music
写作支架
开头 点明音乐的重要性 → Many people love music and think it’s an essential part of their life. I totally agree with them, because music .（高分句式1）
中间 详细介绍音乐的益处 → Firstly, music can help us , and it’s a good way to in our daily life.
Secondly, music can whenever we are in trouble or feel sad.（高分句式2）
Thirdly, music can make us forget and help us get out of .
Besides, music can also help us make new friends. People who may become good friends easily.（高分句式3）
结尾 再次强调音乐的重要性 → Music is like a bright light in our life. It makes our life . We can’t live a happy life without music.


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优秀范文
The Role of Music
Many people love music and think it’s an essential part of their life. I totally agree with them, because music brings us a lot of benefits and plays an important role in our daily life①.
Firstly②, music can help us relax our body and mind, and it’s a good way to reduce the stress in our daily life. Secondly②, music can cheer us up whenever we are in trouble or feel sad③.
Thirdly②, music can make us forget all about our troubles or worries and help us get out of difficult situations. Besides②, music can also help us make new friends. People who love the same kind of music③ may become good friends easily.
Music is like a bright light in our life.④ It makes our life more colorful and meaningful. We can’t live a happy life without music.
亮点评析
①用because引导的原因状语从句解释认同“音乐重要”的原因,让句式更有逻辑。
②以Firstly、Secondly、Thirdly 和 Besides来引出音乐的四个好处,条理清晰,层次分明。
③使用whenever引导的时间状语从句和who引导的定语从句,丰富了文章的细节,使得表达更加流畅。
④将音乐比作“生命中的光”,生动形象地突出了音乐的重要性,让文章立意更深刻。

优秀范文
The Role of Music
Many people love music and think it’s an essential part of their life. I totally agree with them, because music brings us a lot of benefits and plays an important role in our daily life①.
Firstly②, music can help us relax our body and mind, and it’s a good way to reduce the stress in our daily life. Secondly②, music can cheer us up whenever we are in trouble or feel sad③.
Thirdly②, music can make us forget all about our troubles or worries and help us get out of difficult situations. Besides②, music can also help us make new friends. People who love the same kind of music③ may become good friends easily.
Music is like a bright light in our life.④ It makes our life more colorful and meaningful. We can’t live a happy life without music.
亮点评析
①用because引导的原因状语从句解释认同“音乐重要”的原因,让句式更有逻辑。
②以Firstly、Secondly、Thirdly 和 Besides来引出音乐的四个好处,条理清晰,层次分明。
③使用whenever引导的时间状语从句和who引导的定语从句,丰富了文章的细节,使得表达更加流畅。
④将音乐比作“生命中的光”,生动形象地突出了音乐的重要性,让文章立意更深刻。