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主题写作专项 练写作 答案D34
主题词网
宠物 宠物的特点 自己的看法
优选词汇
faithful cute loyal cheer up patience
funny relieve be good for company stay indoors
in short calm wise in my opinion bring happiness
写作实例
在我们的生活中,宠物常常作为人类亲密的伙伴出现。许多人坚信狗是完美宠物,而有的人认为猫是完美宠物。那你呢?请以“The Perfect Pet”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要点:1.你认为什么动物是完美宠物?
2.你为什么这样认为?
审要点
审时态:一般现在时
审人称:以第三人称为主
要求:1.词数不少于80;
2.语言表达清晰流畅,表述合理;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等信息。
The Perfect Pet
are often called , so I think that .
First, .
No matter what happens, they will always .（高分句式1）
Second, .
love to .
Moreover, . They can learn .
In short, .
I believe that .（高分句式2）
智慧背囊
在写作时,要适当使用连接词。正确使用连接词能使文章过渡自然、表达流畅。比如,用and、as well as、or等表并列关系;用but、yet、however等表转折关系。如:We want to go to the concert, but we are too busy.
优秀范文
The Perfect Pet
Dogs are often called "man's best friend", so I think that dogs are the perfect pet.
First¹, dogs are loyal. No matter what happens², they will always stay by your side. If you are feeling sad, a dog can sense it and come to cheer you up². Second¹, they are very friendly. Dogs love to play with people. Taking a walk with a dog is a great way to enjoy some fresh air and get some exercise. Moreover¹, dogs are smart. They can learn many things, like how to sit or fetch things. With patience, you can train them to do amazing tricks.
In short, dogs bring so much joy and love into our lives. I believe that a dog is the perfect pet for anyone³.
亮点评析
①First、Second、Moreover的使用使得作者在阐述观点时思路清晰、逻辑性强。
②no matter what、cheer sb. up的使用为文章增色不少。
③含宾语从句的主从复合句的使用提升了文章的表达层次。
主题词网
宠物 宠物的特点 自己的看法
优选词汇
faithful cute loyal cheer up patience
funny relieve be good for company stay indoors
in short calm wise in my opinion bring happiness
写作实例
在我们的生活中,宠物常常作为人类亲密的伙伴出现。许多人坚信狗是完美宠物,而有的人认为猫是完美宠物。那你呢?请以“The Perfect Pet”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要点:1.你认为什么动物是完美宠物?
2.你为什么这样认为?
审要点审时态:一般现在时
审人称:以第三人称为主
要求:1.词数不少于80;
2.语言表达清晰流畅,表述合理;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等信息。
The Perfect Pet
are often called , so I think that .
First, .
No matter what happens, they will always .（高分句式1）
Second, .
love to .Moreover, . They can learn .
In short, .
I believe that .（高分句式2）
智慧背囊
在写作时,要适当使用连接词。正确使用连接词能使文章过渡自然、表达流畅。比如,用and、as well as、or等表并列关系;用but、yet、however等表转折关系。如:We want to go to the concert, but we are too busy.
优秀范文
The Perfect Pet
Dogs are often called "man's best friend", so I think that dogs are the perfect pet.
First¹, dogs are loyal. No matter what happens², they will always stay by your side. If you are feeling sad, a dog can sense it and come to cheer you up². Second¹, they are very friendly. Dogs love to play with people. Taking a walk with a dog is a great way to enjoy some fresh air and get some exercise. Moreover¹, dogs are smart. They can learn many things, like how to sit or fetch things. With patience, you can train them to do amazing tricks.
In short, dogs bring so much joy and love into our lives. I believe that a dog is the perfect pet for anyone³.
亮点评析
①First、Second、Moreover的使用使得作者在阐述观点时思路清晰、逻辑性强。
②no matter what、cheer sb. up的使用为文章增色不少。
③含宾语从句的主从复合句的使用提升了文章的表达层次。
答案
The Perfect Pet
Dogs are often called "man's best friend", so I think that dogs are the perfect pet.
First, dogs are loyal. No matter what happens, they will always stay by your side. If you are feeling sad, a dog can sense it and come to cheer you up. Second, they are very friendly. Dogs love to play with people. Taking a walk with a dog is a great way to enjoy some fresh air and get some exercise. Moreover, dogs are smart. They can learn many things, like how to sit or fetch things. With patience, you can train them to do amazing tricks.
In short, dogs bring so much joy and love into our lives. I believe that a dog is the perfect pet for anyone.
Dogs are often called "man's best friend", so I think that dogs are the perfect pet.
First, dogs are loyal. No matter what happens, they will always stay by your side. If you are feeling sad, a dog can sense it and come to cheer you up. Second, they are very friendly. Dogs love to play with people. Taking a walk with a dog is a great way to enjoy some fresh air and get some exercise. Moreover, dogs are smart. They can learn many things, like how to sit or fetch things. With patience, you can train them to do amazing tricks.
In short, dogs bring so much joy and love into our lives. I believe that a dog is the perfect pet for anyone.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务：以“The Perfect Pet”为题，确定完美宠物的种类（本题选狗，符合示例要求），需使用给定的连接词梳理逻辑，运用高分句式，遵循一般现在时、第三人称为主的要求，词数达标且无真实信息。写作思路为：开篇点题→分三点阐述理由（忠诚、友好、聪明）→总结重申观点。
【解析】1. 开篇：套用框架句式，填入对应内容点题；2. 第一点：阐述狗的忠诚，运用高分句式“No matter what happens, they will always stay by your side”，补充狗安慰人的细节；3. 第二点：阐述狗的友好，补充散步的好处；4. 第三点：阐述狗的聪明，说明学习技能及训练的内容；5. 总结：用“In short”总结狗的价值，再用高分句式收尾。
【答案】The Perfect Pet
Dogs are often called "man's best friend", so I think that dogs are the perfect pet.
First, dogs are loyal. No matter what happens, they will always stay by your side. If you are feeling sad, a dog can sense it and come to cheer you up. Second, they are very friendly. Dogs love to play with people. Taking a walk with a dog is a great way to enjoy some fresh air and get some exercise. Moreover, dogs are smart. They can learn many things, like how to sit or fetch things. With patience, you can train them to do amazing tricks.
In short, dogs bring so much joy and love into our lives. I believe that a dog is the perfect pet for anyone.
【知识点】英语主题写作、连接词运用、高分句式写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，通过First、Second、Moreover等连接词使论述逻辑连贯，运用了no matter what等高分句式提升表达层次，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】1. 开篇：套用框架句式，填入对应内容点题；2. 第一点：阐述狗的忠诚，运用高分句式“No matter what happens, they will always stay by your side”，补充狗安慰人的细节；3. 第二点：阐述狗的友好，补充散步的好处；4. 第三点：阐述狗的聪明，说明学习技能及训练的内容；5. 总结：用“In short”总结狗的价值，再用高分句式收尾。
【答案】The Perfect Pet
Dogs are often called "man's best friend", so I think that dogs are the perfect pet.
First, dogs are loyal. No matter what happens, they will always stay by your side. If you are feeling sad, a dog can sense it and come to cheer you up. Second, they are very friendly. Dogs love to play with people. Taking a walk with a dog is a great way to enjoy some fresh air and get some exercise. Moreover, dogs are smart. They can learn many things, like how to sit or fetch things. With patience, you can train them to do amazing tricks.
In short, dogs bring so much joy and love into our lives. I believe that a dog is the perfect pet for anyone.
【知识点】英语主题写作、连接词运用、高分句式写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，通过First、Second、Moreover等连接词使论述逻辑连贯，运用了no matter what等高分句式提升表达层次，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.3
