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三、教材佳句仿写·核心句式训练
1. 教材原句:But it took forever to find a bike!
仿写:我花了整个早上的时间才学会使用这个设备。
2. 教材原句:As I always make digital payments in China, I never carry my wallet.
仿写:因为我们可以通过智能手机做那么多事情,很多人到哪儿都带着它。
3. 教材原句:The technology there lets me live a more convenient life!
仿写:与我们的父母相比,我们过着更加幸福的生活。
4. 教材原句:It was strange to read the words.
仿写:她很惊讶,因为在房间里发现树叶很奇怪。
1. 教材原句:But it took forever to find a bike!
仿写:我花了整个早上的时间才学会使用这个设备。
It took me all morning to learn to use the device.
2. 教材原句:As I always make digital payments in China, I never carry my wallet.
仿写:因为我们可以通过智能手机做那么多事情,很多人到哪儿都带着它。
As we can do so many things through the smartphone, many people carry it everywhere.
3. 教材原句:The technology there lets me live a more convenient life!
仿写:与我们的父母相比,我们过着更加幸福的生活。
Compared to/with our parents, we are living a happier life.
4. 教材原句:It was strange to read the words.
仿写:她很惊讶,因为在房间里发现树叶很奇怪。
She is surprised because it's strange to find leaves in the room.
答案
1. It took me all morning to learn to use the device.
2. As we can do so many things through the smartphone, many people carry it everywhere.
3. Compared to/with our parents, we are living a happier life.
4. She is surprised because it's strange to find leaves in the room.
2. As we can do so many things through the smartphone, many people carry it everywhere.
3. Compared to/with our parents, we are living a happier life.
4. She is surprised because it's strange to find leaves in the room.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语核心句式仿写题，需先明确每个教材原句的核心句式结构，再将给定中文内容准确转化为符合句式要求的英文表达，注意人称、短语搭配、从句引导词等细节，确保仿写句子语法正确、语义通顺。
【解析】
1. 套用原句“It takes sb + 时间 + to do sth”的句式，对应中文“我花了整个早上的时间才学会使用这个设备”，“我”作宾语用me，“整个早上”译为all morning，“学会使用这个设备”译为learn to use the device，组合得It took me all morning to learn to use the device.
2. 套用原句“As引导原因状语从句+主句”的句式，对应中文“因为我们可以通过智能手机做那么多事情，很多人到哪儿都带着它”，原因从句译为As we can do so many things through the smartphone，主句译为many people carry it everywhere，组合得As we can do so many things through the smartphone, many people carry it everywhere.
3. 套用原句“Compared to/with... + live a + 形容词 + life”的句式，对应中文“与我们的父母相比，我们过着更加幸福的生活”，“与我们的父母相比”译为Compared to/with our parents，“过着更加幸福的生活”译为we are living a happier life，组合得Compared to/with our parents, we are living a happier life.
4. 套用原句“It's + adj + to do sth”的句式，对应中文“她很惊讶，因为在房间里发现树叶很奇怪”，主语为She，“很惊讶”译为is surprised，原因状语从句译为because it's strange to find leaves in the room，组合得She is surprised because it's strange to find leaves in the room.
【答案】
1. It took me all morning to learn to use the device.
2. As we can do so many things through the smartphone, many people carry it everywhere.
3. Compared to/with our parents, we are living a happier life.
4. She is surprised because it's strange to find leaves in the room.
【知识点】
It takes sb time to do sth句式、As引导原因状语从句、英语句式仿写
【点评】
本题聚焦教材核心句式的仿写训练，考查学生对重点句式的理解与灵活运用能力，要求将中文语义转化为符合英语语法规则的句子，属于基础英语应用类题目，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语核心句式仿写题，需先明确每个教材原句的核心句式结构，再将给定中文内容准确转化为符合句式要求的英文表达，注意人称、短语搭配、从句引导词等细节，确保仿写句子语法正确、语义通顺。
【解析】
1. 套用原句“It takes sb + 时间 + to do sth”的句式，对应中文“我花了整个早上的时间才学会使用这个设备”，“我”作宾语用me，“整个早上”译为all morning，“学会使用这个设备”译为learn to use the device，组合得It took me all morning to learn to use the device.
2. 套用原句“As引导原因状语从句+主句”的句式，对应中文“因为我们可以通过智能手机做那么多事情，很多人到哪儿都带着它”，原因从句译为As we can do so many things through the smartphone，主句译为many people carry it everywhere，组合得As we can do so many things through the smartphone, many people carry it everywhere.
3. 套用原句“Compared to/with... + live a + 形容词 + life”的句式，对应中文“与我们的父母相比，我们过着更加幸福的生活”，“与我们的父母相比”译为Compared to/with our parents，“过着更加幸福的生活”译为we are living a happier life，组合得Compared to/with our parents, we are living a happier life.
4. 套用原句“It's + adj + to do sth”的句式，对应中文“她很惊讶，因为在房间里发现树叶很奇怪”，主语为She，“很惊讶”译为is surprised，原因状语从句译为because it's strange to find leaves in the room，组合得She is surprised because it's strange to find leaves in the room.
【答案】
1. It took me all morning to learn to use the device.
2. As we can do so many things through the smartphone, many people carry it everywhere.
3. Compared to/with our parents, we are living a happier life.
4. She is surprised because it's strange to find leaves in the room.
【知识点】
It takes sb time to do sth句式、As引导原因状语从句、英语句式仿写
【点评】
本题聚焦教材核心句式的仿写训练，考查学生对重点句式的理解与灵活运用能力，要求将中文语义转化为符合英语语法规则的句子，属于基础英语应用类题目，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
四、典例剖析·主题写作行文指导
家是所有未来的起点，未来总是让人充满幻想。你对未来的家的憧憬是什么呢？假定你是李华，请结合下图提示信息，以“My Dream Home”为题，用英语写一篇短文介绍你梦想的家的样子。
时态：一般将来时
人称：以第一人称为主
语篇类型：说明文
要求：
（1）短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
（3）词数80左右（短文题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Dream Home
Home is where the future starts. Everyone has their own opinion about their dream home. Here is something about mine.
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
Step 2 高阶表达应用
1. I have enough money. I will get a large house near the sea.（用连词when升格）
2. There will be enough rooms for us to sleep in. I also expect to have a room with digital devices.（用besides升格，并补充房间用途）
Step 3 佳作展示评析
家是所有未来的起点，未来总是让人充满幻想。你对未来的家的憧憬是什么呢？假定你是李华，请结合下图提示信息，以“My Dream Home”为题，用英语写一篇短文介绍你梦想的家的样子。
时态：一般将来时
人称：以第一人称为主
语篇类型：说明文
要求：
（1）短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
（3）词数80左右（短文题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Dream Home
Home is where the future starts. Everyone has their own opinion about their dream home. Here is something about mine.
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
Step 2 高阶表达应用
1. I have enough money. I will get a large house near the sea.（用连词when升格）
When I have enough money, I will get a large house near the sea.
2. There will be enough rooms for us to sleep in. I also expect to have a room with digital devices.（用besides升格，并补充房间用途）
Besides enough rooms for us to sleep in, I also expect to have a room with digital devices to play music and watch videos.
Step 3 佳作展示评析
答案
1. When I have enough money, I will get a large house near the sea.
2. Besides enough rooms for us to sleep in, I also expect to have a room with digital devices to play music and watch videos.
2. Besides enough rooms for us to sleep in, I also expect to have a room with digital devices to play music and watch videos.
解析
【分析】本题要求用指定连词when和besides对句子进行升格，需先明确两个连词的功能：when用于引导时间状语从句，连接时间相关的两个分句；besides用于补充额外信息，表“除……之外（还有）”。解题时需将原句的两个分句按连词的语法规则合并，同时补充合理细节使句子更完整。
【解析】1. 原句为两个时间关联的简单句，用when引导时间状语从句，将从句置于句首，调整语序后得到：When I have enough money, I will get a large house near the sea. 2. 原句需用besides补充额外内容，先说明基础的房间情况，再用besides引出额外的带数字设备的房间，并补充其用途，得到：Besides enough rooms for us to sleep in, I also expect to have a room with digital devices to play music and watch videos.
【答案】1. When I have enough money, I will get a large house near the sea.
2. Besides enough rooms for us to sleep in, I also expect to have a room with digital devices to play music and watch videos.
【知识点】英语连词用法；英语写作升格
【点评】本题考查英语写作中连词的应用，通过指定连词合并句子并补充细节，提升表达的连贯性与丰富性，是提升写作水平的基础训练。
【难度系数】0.4
【解析】1. 原句为两个时间关联的简单句，用when引导时间状语从句，将从句置于句首，调整语序后得到：When I have enough money, I will get a large house near the sea. 2. 原句需用besides补充额外内容，先说明基础的房间情况，再用besides引出额外的带数字设备的房间，并补充其用途，得到：Besides enough rooms for us to sleep in, I also expect to have a room with digital devices to play music and watch videos.
【答案】1. When I have enough money, I will get a large house near the sea.
2. Besides enough rooms for us to sleep in, I also expect to have a room with digital devices to play music and watch videos.
【知识点】英语连词用法；英语写作升格
【点评】本题考查英语写作中连词的应用，通过指定连词合并句子并补充细节，提升表达的连贯性与丰富性，是提升写作水平的基础训练。
【难度系数】0.4
