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假如你是 Li Hua,你的美国朋友 David 对你校上周前往 Senshan Town 的研学活动(study tour)很感兴趣,请根据下表信息给 David 写一封 Email 分享活动经历,并邀请他在暑假来义乌参观。
| 内容要点 | 参考词汇 |
| ---- | ---- |
| Place | Senshan Town |
| Activities | ◆Had a party
◆Took a king class
◆Visited herb(药草) farms
◆Knew life history of some famous people |
| Feelings & Hopes | ... |
注意:1.邮件中必须包含所有内容要点,可适当发挥;
2.邮件中不得出现真实的校名和人名;
3.词数 80 左右。邮件的开头和落款已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Glad to share my study tour with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是 Li Hua,你的美国朋友 David 对你校上周前往 Senshan Town 的研学活动(study tour)很感兴趣,请根据下表信息给 David 写一封 Email 分享活动经历,并邀请他在暑假来义乌参观。
| 内容要点 | 参考词汇 |
| ---- | ---- |
| Place | Senshan Town |
| Activities | ◆Had a party
◆Took a king class
◆Visited herb(药草) farms
◆Knew life history of some famous people |
| Feelings & Hopes | ... |
注意:1.邮件中必须包含所有内容要点,可适当发挥;
2.邮件中不得出现真实的校名和人名;
3.词数 80 左右。邮件的开头和落款已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Glad to share my study tour with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear David,
Glad to share my study tour with you. Last week, our school organised a study tour to Senshan Town. We had a great time there! We visited herb farms and learned about the life history of some famous people. In addition, we took a cooking class and had a party. Though we were tired, we did have a great day and learned a lot.
I hope you can come to Yiwu this summer vacation to experience it yourself. I believe you would have a wonderful time here. Looking forward to your visit!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear David,
Glad to share my study tour with you. Last week, our school organised a study tour to Senshan Town. We had a great time there! We visited herb farms and learned about the life history of some famous people. In addition, we took a cooking class and had a party. Though we were tired, we did have a great day and learned a lot.
I hope you can come to Yiwu this summer vacation to experience it yourself. I believe you would have a wonderful time here. Looking forward to your visit!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务是给美国朋友David写邮件，分享学校前往Senshan Town的研学经历并邀请他暑假来义乌。需覆盖所有内容要点：地点Senshan Town，四项活动（举办派对、上烹饪课、参观药草农场、了解名人生活史），还要包含感受与邀请。写作思路：1. 开头承接给定内容，说明研学的时间与地点；2. 用合适的连接词串联四项活动，确保不遗漏；3. 表达个人感受（累但收获大）；4. 自然邀请David暑假来义乌，表达期待。注意控制词数，避免真实校名人名，使用参考词汇。
【解析】
1. 开头承接：直接点明研学活动的时间和地点，即“Last week, our school organised a study tour to Senshan Town.”；2. 串联活动：用“and”“In addition”连接四项活动，先写参观药草农场和了解名人历史，再写上烹饪课和举办派对，即“We visited herb farms and learned about the life history of some famous people. In addition, we took a cooking class and had a party.”；3. 表达感受：用“Though”转折，体现累但收获多，即“Though we were tired, we did have a great day and learned a lot.”；4. 邀请与期待：自然引出暑假来义乌的邀请，表达期待，即“I hope you can come to Yiwu this summer vacation to experience it yourself. I believe you would have a wonderful time here. Looking forward to your visit!”；整体逻辑连贯，覆盖所有要点，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear David,
Glad to share my study tour with you. Last week, our school organised a study tour to Senshan Town. We had a great time there! We visited herb farms and learned about the life history of some famous people. In addition, we took a cooking class and had a party. Though we were tired, we did have a great day and learned a lot.
I hope you can come to Yiwu this summer vacation to experience it yourself. I believe you would have a wonderful time here. Looking forward to your visit!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、要点整合表达、英语连接词运用
【点评】
该范文严格覆盖所有内容要点，逻辑清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合邮件格式和词数要求，自然融入邀请内容，是符合题目要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次写作任务是给美国朋友David写邮件，分享学校前往Senshan Town的研学经历并邀请他暑假来义乌。需覆盖所有内容要点：地点Senshan Town，四项活动（举办派对、上烹饪课、参观药草农场、了解名人生活史），还要包含感受与邀请。写作思路：1. 开头承接给定内容，说明研学的时间与地点；2. 用合适的连接词串联四项活动，确保不遗漏；3. 表达个人感受（累但收获大）；4. 自然邀请David暑假来义乌，表达期待。注意控制词数，避免真实校名人名，使用参考词汇。
【解析】
1. 开头承接：直接点明研学活动的时间和地点，即“Last week, our school organised a study tour to Senshan Town.”；2. 串联活动：用“and”“In addition”连接四项活动，先写参观药草农场和了解名人历史，再写上烹饪课和举办派对，即“We visited herb farms and learned about the life history of some famous people. In addition, we took a cooking class and had a party.”；3. 表达感受：用“Though”转折，体现累但收获多，即“Though we were tired, we did have a great day and learned a lot.”；4. 邀请与期待：自然引出暑假来义乌的邀请，表达期待，即“I hope you can come to Yiwu this summer vacation to experience it yourself. I believe you would have a wonderful time here. Looking forward to your visit!”；整体逻辑连贯，覆盖所有要点，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear David,
Glad to share my study tour with you. Last week, our school organised a study tour to Senshan Town. We had a great time there! We visited herb farms and learned about the life history of some famous people. In addition, we took a cooking class and had a party. Though we were tired, we did have a great day and learned a lot.
I hope you can come to Yiwu this summer vacation to experience it yourself. I believe you would have a wonderful time here. Looking forward to your visit!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、要点整合表达、英语连接词运用
【点评】
该范文严格覆盖所有内容要点，逻辑清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合邮件格式和词数要求，自然融入邀请内容，是符合题目要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
