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Ⅳ. 书面表达(25 分)
30. 初中三年的学习生活即将结束,你一定有很多话想和即将进入七年级的学弟学妹们说。请根据下图的内容提示,为学校英语社团写一篇英语短文,给七年级新生在学习和生活上提几点建议,并祝福他们在未来的学习和生活中过得愉快。
要求：(1)参考内容提示,可以适当发挥;
(2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
(4)词数不少于 120(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Welcome to our school! In junior high school,
I believe that you will have a happy life in our school.
30. 初中三年的学习生活即将结束,你一定有很多话想和即将进入七年级的学弟学妹们说。请根据下图的内容提示,为学校英语社团写一篇英语短文,给七年级新生在学习和生活上提几点建议,并祝福他们在未来的学习和生活中过得愉快。
要求：(1)参考内容提示,可以适当发挥;
(2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
(4)词数不少于 120(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Welcome to our school! In junior high school,
life will be different from that in primary school. Here are some suggestions about the study and life for you.
Firstly, you will have more subjects to learn, so it is important to find good learning methods. Good learning methods can help you learn better and more easily. For example, you need to listen to the teachers carefully and take notes in class. After class, you need to read more books and review what you have learned. When you have some problems with your study, you'd better ask your friends or teachers for help. Secondly, you should do more exercise and keep healthy. Health is the most important. Thirdly, you can join some clubs and keep your life colorful. It's necessary for you to spend some time on your hobbies. That will make your school life more interesting.
I believe that you will have a happy life in our school.
答案
30.【参考范文】
Welcome to our school! In junior high
school, life will be different from that in
primary school. Here are some suggestions
about the study and life for you.
Firstly, you will have more subjects to
learn, so it is important to find good learning
methods. Good learning methods can help you
learn better and more easily. For example, you
need to listen to the teachers carefully and take
notes in class. After class, you need to read
more books and review what you have learned.
When you have some problems with your
study, you'd better ask your friends or teachers
for help. Secondly, you should do more exercise
and keep healthy. Health is the most important.
Thirdly, you can join some clubs and keep
your life colorful. It's necessary for you to spend
some time on your hobbies. That will make your
school life more interesting.
Welcome to our school! In junior high
school, life will be different from that in
primary school. Here are some suggestions
about the study and life for you.
Firstly, you will have more subjects to
learn, so it is important to find good learning
methods. Good learning methods can help you
learn better and more easily. For example, you
need to listen to the teachers carefully and take
notes in class. After class, you need to read
more books and review what you have learned.
When you have some problems with your
study, you'd better ask your friends or teachers
for help. Secondly, you should do more exercise
and keep healthy. Health is the most important.
Thirdly, you can join some clubs and keep
your life colorful. It's necessary for you to spend
some time on your hobbies. That will make your
school life more interesting.
解析
【分析】本题为建议类英语书面表达，要求给七年级新生提学习与生活建议，需结合思维导图的三个核心要点（找良好学习方法、多锻炼保健康、参加社团丰富生活），适当补充细节，衔接自然，满足词数要求，开头结尾已给出，只需补充中间内容，确保语句通顺、逻辑连贯，无真实信息。
【解析】写作时，先承接开头引出“给你学习和生活的建议”；接着分三点展开：第一点围绕“找好的学习方法”，举例说明具体做法（认真听课、记笔记、复习、求助他人）；第二点讲“多锻炼保健康”，点明健康的重要性；第三点说“参加社团丰富生活”，说明培养爱好的意义；最后衔接结尾，确保内容完整，紧扣提示，适当发挥，符合词数要求。
【答案】Welcome to our school! In junior high school, life will be different from that in primary school. Here are some suggestions about the study and life for you. Firstly, you will have more subjects to learn, so it is important to find good learning methods. Good learning methods can help you learn better and more easily. For example, you need to listen to the teachers carefully and take notes in class. After class, you need to read more books and review what you have learned. When you have some problems with your study, you'd better ask your friends or teachers for help. Secondly, you should do more exercise and keep healthy. Health is the most important. Thirdly, you can join some clubs and keep your life colorful. It's necessary for you to spend some time on your hobbies. That will make your school life more interesting. I believe that you will have a happy life in our school.
【知识点】英语书面表达、建议类作文写作
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，结合思维导图所有提示要点，结构清晰，分点阐述建议，内容充实有细节，语句通顺连贯，符合词数要求，是优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时，先承接开头引出“给你学习和生活的建议”；接着分三点展开：第一点围绕“找好的学习方法”，举例说明具体做法（认真听课、记笔记、复习、求助他人）；第二点讲“多锻炼保健康”，点明健康的重要性；第三点说“参加社团丰富生活”，说明培养爱好的意义；最后衔接结尾，确保内容完整，紧扣提示，适当发挥，符合词数要求。
【答案】Welcome to our school! In junior high school, life will be different from that in primary school. Here are some suggestions about the study and life for you. Firstly, you will have more subjects to learn, so it is important to find good learning methods. Good learning methods can help you learn better and more easily. For example, you need to listen to the teachers carefully and take notes in class. After class, you need to read more books and review what you have learned. When you have some problems with your study, you'd better ask your friends or teachers for help. Secondly, you should do more exercise and keep healthy. Health is the most important. Thirdly, you can join some clubs and keep your life colorful. It's necessary for you to spend some time on your hobbies. That will make your school life more interesting. I believe that you will have a happy life in our school.
【知识点】英语书面表达、建议类作文写作
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，结合思维导图所有提示要点，结构清晰，分点阐述建议，内容充实有细节，语句通顺连贯，符合词数要求，是优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】0.5
