XII. Writing. 书面表达。(10分)
成长悄悄发生在每个人的身上,现在的Kate和五年前相比有了很大的变化。Kate利用DeepSeek(深度求索)梳理了自己的一些变化。请你根据梳理的内容,帮Kate写一篇短文描述这些变化。
要求:1. 不少于6句话。
2. 标点正确,句子连贯,书写工整、规范。
3. 包含表格信息(“😰”表示“害怕”,“😀”表示“不怕”)。

成长悄悄发生在每个人的身上,现在的Kate和五年前相比有了很大的变化。Kate利用DeepSeek(深度求索)梳理了自己的一些变化。请你根据梳理的内容,帮Kate写一篇短文描述这些变化。
要求:1. 不少于6句话。
2. 标点正确,句子连贯,书写工整、规范。
3. 包含表格信息(“😰”表示“害怕”,“😀”表示“不怕”)。
答案
【参考范文】Hi! My name is Kate. Five years ago, I was eight years old. I was afraid of spiders. I was afraid of the cold, too. But I was not afraid of snakes and swimming in the sea. Now I am thirteen. I am afraid of the dark and sleeping alone. But I am not afraid of crocodiles and horror films. What about you? What are you afraid of?
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求:需对比Kate五年前与现在的变化,包含表格中所有信息(😰表示害怕,😀表示不怕),不少于6句话,句子连贯。解题思路:1. 开头介绍Kate的身份及年龄变化(体现五年的时间跨度);2. 用一般过去时描述五年前害怕的事物(spiders、the cold,对应😰)和不害怕的事物(swim in the sea、snakes,对应😀);3. 用一般现在时描述现在害怕的事物(sleep alone、the dark,对应😰)和不害怕的事物(crocodiles、horror films,对应😀);4. 结尾添加询问对方情况的句子,使内容完整,满足字数要求。
【解析】根据表格信息,结合时态和be afraid of的结构组织语言:先介绍身份与年龄变化,再分别描述五年前和现在的情绪变化,最后补充询问句,确保信息完整、句子连贯。具体内容为:Hi! My name is Kate. Five years ago, I was eight years old. I was afraid of spiders. I was afraid of the cold, too. But I was not afraid of snakes and swimming in the sea. Now I am thirteen. I am afraid of the dark and sleeping alone. But I am not afraid of crocodiles and horror films. What about you? What are you afraid of?
【答案】Hi! My name is Kate. Five years ago, I was eight years old. I was afraid of spiders. I was afraid of the cold, too. But I was not afraid of snakes and swimming in the sea. Now I am thirteen. I am afraid of the dark and sleeping alone. But I am not afraid of crocodiles and horror films. What about you? What are you afraid of?
【知识点】一般过去时、一般现在时、be afraid of用法
【点评】本题考查对比描述人物过去与现在的变化,需准确提取表格情绪信息,正确运用不同时态,语言连贯流畅,是基础情景写作题,符合初中英语书面表达的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】根据表格信息,结合时态和be afraid of的结构组织语言:先介绍身份与年龄变化,再分别描述五年前和现在的情绪变化,最后补充询问句,确保信息完整、句子连贯。具体内容为:Hi! My name is Kate. Five years ago, I was eight years old. I was afraid of spiders. I was afraid of the cold, too. But I was not afraid of snakes and swimming in the sea. Now I am thirteen. I am afraid of the dark and sleeping alone. But I am not afraid of crocodiles and horror films. What about you? What are you afraid of?
【答案】Hi! My name is Kate. Five years ago, I was eight years old. I was afraid of spiders. I was afraid of the cold, too. But I was not afraid of snakes and swimming in the sea. Now I am thirteen. I am afraid of the dark and sleeping alone. But I am not afraid of crocodiles and horror films. What about you? What are you afraid of?
【知识点】一般过去时、一般现在时、be afraid of用法
【点评】本题考查对比描述人物过去与现在的变化,需准确提取表格情绪信息,正确运用不同时态,语言连贯流畅,是基础情景写作题,符合初中英语书面表达的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.5
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