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素材积累＞＞
[开头句]
1. Giant pandas are so popular all over the world! （开篇引入,下同）
2. Let me tell you something about giant pandas.
[中间句]
1. It is difficult for giant pandas to have babies. （阐述原因）
2. Wild animals are in danger for many reasons. （总结概括）
3. However, we humans can do something to help. （转折过渡）
[结尾句]
1. We believe things will get better and better, for where there is Xiwang, there is hope. （升华结尾）
2. Let's take action to protect them.（发出呼吁）
[名言警句]
1. Be kind to animals and live in harmony! 善待动物,和谐相处!
2. Protect animals and maintain ecological balance. 保护动物,维护生态平衡。
写作演练＞＞
假设你是一只在大自然中奋力求生的野生动物,一天,你意外知晓了WCS(野生动物保护协会)网站,上面人类对野生动物生存现状的热烈讨论深深触动了你。请以你的视角,用英语写一封信,向人类发出保护的恳切呼吁,词数80
② 内容完整,覆盖了题目框架的核心维度:个性(cute、friendly);生活习性(live happily in the big bamboo forest、eating bamboo shoots);生存危机(living space is getting smaller、don't have enough bamboo);保护措施(build more nature reserves、plant more bamboo)。
③ 最后提出自己的诉求,呼吁人类与熊猫和谐相处,富有感染力。
左右。内容需涵盖:1. What animal are you? 2. What problems do you have? 3. What help do you need?
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第一人称为主;② 时态:以一般现在时为主;③ 开篇用简短语句介绍自己,然后写出野生动物生存的核心困境,最后提出诉求。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear humans,
I am an Indian tiger.
An Indian tiger
(更多精彩作文素材见"强基手册")
[开头句]
1. Giant pandas are so popular all over the world! （开篇引入,下同）
2. Let me tell you something about giant pandas.
[中间句]
1. It is difficult for giant pandas to have babies. （阐述原因）
2. Wild animals are in danger for many reasons. （总结概括）
3. However, we humans can do something to help. （转折过渡）
[结尾句]
1. We believe things will get better and better, for where there is Xiwang, there is hope. （升华结尾）
2. Let's take action to protect them.（发出呼吁）
[名言警句]
1. Be kind to animals and live in harmony! 善待动物,和谐相处!
2. Protect animals and maintain ecological balance. 保护动物,维护生态平衡。
写作演练＞＞
假设你是一只在大自然中奋力求生的野生动物,一天,你意外知晓了WCS(野生动物保护协会)网站,上面人类对野生动物生存现状的热烈讨论深深触动了你。请以你的视角,用英语写一封信,向人类发出保护的恳切呼吁,词数80
② 内容完整,覆盖了题目框架的核心维度:个性(cute、friendly);生活习性(live happily in the big bamboo forest、eating bamboo shoots);生存危机(living space is getting smaller、don't have enough bamboo);保护措施(build more nature reserves、plant more bamboo)。
③ 最后提出自己的诉求,呼吁人类与熊猫和谐相处,富有感染力。
左右。内容需涵盖:1. What animal are you? 2. What problems do you have? 3. What help do you need?
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第一人称为主;② 时态:以一般现在时为主;③ 开篇用简短语句介绍自己,然后写出野生动物生存的核心困境,最后提出诉求。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear humans,
I am an Indian tiger.
I live in the thick forests and grasslands of India. I mainly eat deer, wild pigs and other small and medium-sized animals.
But now I'm in big trouble.
Our living area is getting smaller and smaller because people are cutting down forests to build houses and farmlands.
Also, there are some bad people who hunt us for our beautiful fur and bones. As a result, our number is dropping quickly.
In the future, I hope you can plant more trees and stop any activities that harm us.
Please don't buy any products made from our body parts.
Also, I hope more people could join in protecting us
and help create a better home for me and my friends.
An Indian tiger
(更多精彩作文素材见"强基手册")
答案
One possible version:
Dear humans,
I am an Indian tiger. I live in the thick forests and grasslands of India. I mainly eat deer, wild pigs and other small and medium-sized animals.
But now I'm in big trouble. Our living area is getting smaller and smaller because people are cutting down forests to build houses and farmlands. Also, there are some bad people who hunt us for our beautiful fur and bones. As a result, our number is dropping quickly.
In the future, I hope you can plant more trees and stop any activities that harm us. Please don't buy any products made from our body parts. Also, I hope more people could join in protecting us and help create a better home for me and my friends.
An Indian tiger
Dear humans,
I am an Indian tiger. I live in the thick forests and grasslands of India. I mainly eat deer, wild pigs and other small and medium-sized animals.
But now I'm in big trouble. Our living area is getting smaller and smaller because people are cutting down forests to build houses and farmlands. Also, there are some bad people who hunt us for our beautiful fur and bones. As a result, our number is dropping quickly.
In the future, I hope you can plant more trees and stop any activities that harm us. Please don't buy any products made from our body parts. Also, I hope more people could join in protecting us and help create a better home for me and my friends.
An Indian tiger
解析
【分析】
这是一篇以野生动物视角创作的英语呼吁信，需遵循书信格式，采用第一人称、一般现在时写作。解题思路：1. 开篇（第一段）：明确自身身份、生活环境与食性，回应题目要求的“what animal are you”；2. 中间（第二段）：阐述生存危机，包括栖息地缩减、被偷猎等问题，回应“what problems do you have”；3. 结尾（第三段）：提出具体保护诉求，呼吁人类停止伤害、参与保护，回应“what help do you need”，最后规范署名。
【解析】
需按书信结构分三段完成：
1. 第一段：开篇点明身份为印度虎，说明生活在印度的森林草原，食性为捕食鹿、野猪等，完成身份与基本信息介绍；
2. 第二段：说明生存困境：人类砍树建房、开垦农田导致栖息地缩小，偷猎者为皮毛和骨头猎杀，数量锐减，覆盖生存危机要点；
3. 第三段：提出诉求：希望人类多种树、停止伤害行为，不购买动物制品，呼吁更多人参与保护，最后署名，完成呼吁要求。
【答案】
Dear humans,
I am an Indian tiger. I live in the thick forests and grasslands of India. I mainly eat deer, wild pigs and other small and medium-sized animals.
But now I'm in big trouble. Our living area is getting smaller and smaller because people are cutting down forests to build houses and farmlands. Also, there are some bad people who hunt us for our beautiful fur and bones. As a result, our number is dropping quickly.
In the future, I hope you can plant more trees and stop any activities that harm us. Please don't buy any products made from our body parts. Also, I hope more people could join in protecting us and help create a better home for me and my friends.
An Indian tiger
【知识点】
英语书信写作；野生动物话题表达
【点评】
本文以印度虎的第一人称视角写作，符合书信格式，覆盖题目所有核心要点，语言通顺、逻辑清晰，结尾的呼吁情感真挚，满足写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一篇以野生动物视角创作的英语呼吁信，需遵循书信格式，采用第一人称、一般现在时写作。解题思路：1. 开篇（第一段）：明确自身身份、生活环境与食性，回应题目要求的“what animal are you”；2. 中间（第二段）：阐述生存危机，包括栖息地缩减、被偷猎等问题，回应“what problems do you have”；3. 结尾（第三段）：提出具体保护诉求，呼吁人类停止伤害、参与保护，回应“what help do you need”，最后规范署名。
【解析】
需按书信结构分三段完成：
1. 第一段：开篇点明身份为印度虎，说明生活在印度的森林草原，食性为捕食鹿、野猪等，完成身份与基本信息介绍；
2. 第二段：说明生存困境：人类砍树建房、开垦农田导致栖息地缩小，偷猎者为皮毛和骨头猎杀，数量锐减，覆盖生存危机要点；
3. 第三段：提出诉求：希望人类多种树、停止伤害行为，不购买动物制品，呼吁更多人参与保护，最后署名，完成呼吁要求。
【答案】
Dear humans,
I am an Indian tiger. I live in the thick forests and grasslands of India. I mainly eat deer, wild pigs and other small and medium-sized animals.
But now I'm in big trouble. Our living area is getting smaller and smaller because people are cutting down forests to build houses and farmlands. Also, there are some bad people who hunt us for our beautiful fur and bones. As a result, our number is dropping quickly.
In the future, I hope you can plant more trees and stop any activities that harm us. Please don't buy any products made from our body parts. Also, I hope more people could join in protecting us and help create a better home for me and my friends.
An Indian tiger
【知识点】
英语书信写作；野生动物话题表达
【点评】
本文以印度虎的第一人称视角写作，符合书信格式，覆盖题目所有核心要点，语言通顺、逻辑清晰，结尾的呼吁情感真挚，满足写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
