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主题语境:人与自我——个人规划
写作题目:
每个人都有自己的梦想。有的想当科学家，有的想成为记者……你的梦想是什么呢？请根据所给提示，以“My Dream”为题写一篇短文。
提示:1. What are you going to be when you grow up? Why?
2. How can you make your dream come true?
要求:1.结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
2.不得出现真实的人名及校名。
3.词数80左右。
Step 1.辨模式(Patterns)——辨识特征 列纲建模
1.辨人称: 第一人称
2.辨时态: 一般现在时、一般将来时
3.辨核心:个人信息，对未来的打算
Step 2.明实例(Examples)——润色成篇 典例示范
续表
范文点评:
本篇文章要点齐全、条理清晰、逻辑性强。文中既使用了本单元新知，又使用了谚语，体现了作者较深的语言功底。
①②处分别引导时间状语从句和原因状语从句，使简单句得到升华。
③处使用谚语，为文章增加了亮点。
④处使用“not only... but also...”结构连接自己要做的几件事，比简单的罗列显得更加高级。
⑤处为本单元所学语法，做到了学以致用。
⑥All in all 用来总结全文，使文章条理清晰，内容完整。
Step 3.会实践(Practice)——迁移创新 实战演练
新的一年即将开启，请以“My New Year’s Resolution”为题，用英语写一篇短文表达你的新年决心。
要求:
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
3.词数80左右。
写作题目:
每个人都有自己的梦想。有的想当科学家，有的想成为记者……你的梦想是什么呢？请根据所给提示，以“My Dream”为题写一篇短文。
提示:1. What are you going to be when you grow up? Why?
2. How can you make your dream come true?
要求:1.结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
2.不得出现真实的人名及校名。
3.词数80左右。
Step 1.辨模式(Patterns)——辨识特征 列纲建模
1.辨人称: 第一人称
2.辨时态: 一般现在时、一般将来时
3.辨核心:个人信息，对未来的打算
Step 2.明实例(Examples)——润色成篇 典例示范
续表
范文点评:
本篇文章要点齐全、条理清晰、逻辑性强。文中既使用了本单元新知，又使用了谚语，体现了作者较深的语言功底。
①②处分别引导时间状语从句和原因状语从句，使简单句得到升华。
③处使用谚语，为文章增加了亮点。
④处使用“not only... but also...”结构连接自己要做的几件事，比简单的罗列显得更加高级。
⑤处为本单元所学语法，做到了学以致用。
⑥All in all 用来总结全文，使文章条理清晰，内容完整。
Step 3.会实践(Practice)——迁移创新 实战演练
新的一年即将开启，请以“My New Year’s Resolution”为题，用英语写一篇短文表达你的新年决心。
要求:
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
3.词数80左右。
My New Year’s Resolution
A new year always comes with wishes and hopes. I hope I am going to make a great change. As a student, my New Year’s resolution is to get good grades so that I can go to my dream school in the future.
My dream school is No. 1 High School. It is one of the best high schools in our city.
Of all my subjects I do worst in P. E. To improve it, I am going to get up earlier and run to school every morning.
I am going to spend one more hour in doing sports after school.
I'm sure I will succeed.
答案
My New Year’s Resolution
A new year always comes with wishes and hopes. I hope I am going to make a great change. As a student, my New Year’s resolution is to get good grades so that I can go to my dream school in the future. My dream school is No. 1 High School. It is one of the best high schools in our city. Of all my subjects I do worst in P. E. To improve it, I am going to get up earlier and run to school every morning. I am going to spend one more hour in doing sports after school. I'm sure I will succeed.
A new year always comes with wishes and hopes. I hope I am going to make a great change. As a student, my New Year’s resolution is to get good grades so that I can go to my dream school in the future. My dream school is No. 1 High School. It is one of the best high schools in our city. Of all my subjects I do worst in P. E. To improve it, I am going to get up earlier and run to school every morning. I am going to spend one more hour in doing sports after school. I'm sure I will succeed.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，主题属于个人规划类，要求以“My New Year’s Resolution”为题写80词左右的短文。解题思路：1. 确定人称用第一人称，时态结合一般现在时（介绍现状）和一般将来时（表述决心与计划）；2. 结构需完整，要包含引出新年决心、说明决心内容及原因、阐述实现决心的具体计划、结尾表达信心；3. 需符合词数要求，不得出现真实人名、校名等信息，语言通顺规范、语法正确。
【解析】
按照写作要求，步骤如下：1. 开篇点题，说明新年带来新愿望与决心；2. 明确决心为取得好成绩以考入理想高中，同时点明体育薄弱的现状；3. 给出具体实现计划（早起跑步上学、课后加练一小时）；4. 结尾表达对成功的信心，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【答案】
My New Year’s Resolution
A new year always comes with wishes and hopes. I hope I am going to make a great change. As a student, my New Year’s resolution is to get good grades so that I can go to my dream school in the future. My dream school is No. 1 High School. It is one of the best high schools in our city. Of all my subjects I do worst in P. E. To improve it, I am going to get up earlier and run to school every morning. I am going to spend one more hour in doing sports after school. I'm sure I will succeed.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般将来时、个人规划类话题表达
【点评】
本篇短文紧扣主题，要点完整，结构清晰，逻辑连贯；运用了目的状语从句等语法结构，语言规范，符合词数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作题，主题属于个人规划类，要求以“My New Year’s Resolution”为题写80词左右的短文。解题思路：1. 确定人称用第一人称，时态结合一般现在时（介绍现状）和一般将来时（表述决心与计划）；2. 结构需完整，要包含引出新年决心、说明决心内容及原因、阐述实现决心的具体计划、结尾表达信心；3. 需符合词数要求，不得出现真实人名、校名等信息，语言通顺规范、语法正确。
【解析】
按照写作要求，步骤如下：1. 开篇点题，说明新年带来新愿望与决心；2. 明确决心为取得好成绩以考入理想高中，同时点明体育薄弱的现状；3. 给出具体实现计划（早起跑步上学、课后加练一小时）；4. 结尾表达对成功的信心，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【答案】
My New Year’s Resolution
A new year always comes with wishes and hopes. I hope I am going to make a great change. As a student, my New Year’s resolution is to get good grades so that I can go to my dream school in the future. My dream school is No. 1 High School. It is one of the best high schools in our city. Of all my subjects I do worst in P. E. To improve it, I am going to get up earlier and run to school every morning. I am going to spend one more hour in doing sports after school. I'm sure I will succeed.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般将来时、个人规划类话题表达
【点评】
本篇短文紧扣主题，要点完整，结构清晰，逻辑连贯；运用了目的状语从句等语法结构，语言规范，符合词数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
