十三、书面表达。(共6分)
请根据思维导图,以“Old things,new life”为题,写一篇短文。
要求:1. 语句连贯,注意时态(以一般过去时为主),书写规范。2. 不少于8句话。

Old things,new life
请根据思维导图,以“Old things,new life”为题,写一篇短文。
要求:1. 语句连贯,注意时态(以一般过去时为主),书写规范。2. 不少于8句话。
Old things,new life
答案
One possible version:
Old things, new life
Last weekend, I tried to give old things new life.
First, I found some old things at home: a glass bottle and a cardboard box. I cleaned the glass bottle and painted it pink. Then, I turned it into a flower vase for my mum. I also cut the cardboard box into a small pen holder. Reusing old things is good because it helps reduce waste and protect the Earth. Old things don't have to be rubbish. When I finished, I felt very happy and proud of myself. My parents said I was clever to make new things from old ones. I will keep doing this to make our home greener.
Old things, new life
Last weekend, I tried to give old things new life.
First, I found some old things at home: a glass bottle and a cardboard box. I cleaned the glass bottle and painted it pink. Then, I turned it into a flower vase for my mum. I also cut the cardboard box into a small pen holder. Reusing old things is good because it helps reduce waste and protect the Earth. Old things don't have to be rubbish. When I finished, I felt very happy and proud of myself. My parents said I was clever to make new things from old ones. I will keep doing this to make our home greener.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求:以“Old things, new life”为题,结合思维导图的四个要点(旧物品、重复利用的方法、重复利用的原因、个人感受),用一般过去时写不少于8句的短文。解题思路:1. 开头点明主题,说明自己开展旧物改造的经历;2. 列举具体旧物品,详细描述改造过程;3. 阐述重复利用旧物品的意义;4. 表达完成改造后的感受,呼应主题。
【解析】按照思维导图的四个要点,结合一般过去时的要求组织内容:开头交代时间和主题,接着说明找到的旧物品,具体描述改造细节,阐述重复利用的原因,最后表达感受和未来计划,确保语句连贯,满足不少于8句的要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Old things, new life
Last weekend, I tried to give old things new life.
First, I found some old things at home: a glass bottle and a cardboard box. I cleaned the glass bottle and painted it pink. Then, I turned it into a flower vase for my mum. I also cut the cardboard box into a small pen holder. Reusing old things is good because it helps reduce waste and protect the Earth. Old things don't have to be rubbish. When I finished, I felt very happy and proud of myself. My parents said I was clever to make new things from old ones. I will keep doing this to make our home greener.
【知识点】书面表达、一般过去时、环保主题
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查学生的书面表达能力,既要求围绕旧物改造主题清晰组织内容,又渗透了环保意识,能锻炼学生的语言运用和逻辑表达能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照思维导图的四个要点,结合一般过去时的要求组织内容:开头交代时间和主题,接着说明找到的旧物品,具体描述改造细节,阐述重复利用的原因,最后表达感受和未来计划,确保语句连贯,满足不少于8句的要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Old things, new life
Last weekend, I tried to give old things new life.
First, I found some old things at home: a glass bottle and a cardboard box. I cleaned the glass bottle and painted it pink. Then, I turned it into a flower vase for my mum. I also cut the cardboard box into a small pen holder. Reusing old things is good because it helps reduce waste and protect the Earth. Old things don't have to be rubbish. When I finished, I felt very happy and proud of myself. My parents said I was clever to make new things from old ones. I will keep doing this to make our home greener.
【知识点】书面表达、一般过去时、环保主题
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查学生的书面表达能力,既要求围绕旧物改造主题清晰组织内容,又渗透了环保意识,能锻炼学生的语言运用和逻辑表达能力。
【难度系数】0.6
登录