五、书面表达
学校英语俱乐部将举办校园英语戏剧表演活动,现面向全体同学征集优秀英文短剧剧本。请根据下面提示,写一篇100词左右的剧本参赛。剧本的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Background
• Tom is 14 years old.
• He broke his right leg and had to rest at home for one week, missing lots of lessons.
Plot
• Tom is worried about his schoolwork.
• His deskmate Daniel comes to visit him after school.
Act 1, Scene 1
Tom’s bedroom
[Tom sits on the bed with his right leg wrapped in bandages (绷带). He looks at textbooks worriedly. Daniel walks in with exercise books and class notes in hand.]
学校英语俱乐部将举办校园英语戏剧表演活动,现面向全体同学征集优秀英文短剧剧本。请根据下面提示,写一篇100词左右的剧本参赛。剧本的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Background
• Tom is 14 years old.
• He broke his right leg and had to rest at home for one week, missing lots of lessons.
Plot
• Tom is worried about his schoolwork.
• His deskmate Daniel comes to visit him after school.
Act 1, Scene 1
Tom’s bedroom
[Tom sits on the bed with his right leg wrapped in bandages (绷带). He looks at textbooks worriedly. Daniel walks in with exercise books and class notes in hand.]
答案
Act 1, Scene 1
Tom’s bedroom
[Tom sits on the bed with his right leg wrapped in bandages(绷带). He looks at textbooks worriedly. Daniel walks in with exercise books and class notes in hand.]
Daniel: Hello Tom! How are you feeling these days?
Tom: Much better, but I'm worried about my schoolwork. I've missed a week's classes and will fall behind others.
Daniel: I know your trouble, so I've brought all our class notes for you.
Tom: Thanks a lot! But there are too many new lessons. I don't know where to start.
Daniel: Don't worry. I can come every day after school to explain difficult knowledge to you.
Tom: It's so nice of you!
Daniel: We're deskmates, so we should help each other. Let's start with today's English points right now.
Tom: Great! With your help, I believe I can catch up soon.
Tom’s bedroom
[Tom sits on the bed with his right leg wrapped in bandages(绷带). He looks at textbooks worriedly. Daniel walks in with exercise books and class notes in hand.]
Daniel: Hello Tom! How are you feeling these days?
Tom: Much better, but I'm worried about my schoolwork. I've missed a week's classes and will fall behind others.
Daniel: I know your trouble, so I've brought all our class notes for you.
Tom: Thanks a lot! But there are too many new lessons. I don't know where to start.
Daniel: Don't worry. I can come every day after school to explain difficult knowledge to you.
Tom: It's so nice of you!
Daniel: We're deskmates, so we should help each other. Let's start with today's English points right now.
Tom: Great! With your help, I believe I can catch up soon.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求:补全英文短剧剧本,需结合给定背景(Tom摔腿缺课担心学业)和情节(Daniel来探望帮忙),以对话形式呈现,符合剧本场景和人物身份,控制字数。解题思路:先承接开头的场景,从问候切入,Tom表达学业担忧,Daniel说明来意(带笔记),提出帮忙,最后达成共识,对话要自然流畅,符合学生日常交流的语气。
【解析】根据剧本开头的场景,需补全符合人物关系和情节的对话:1. Daniel先问候Tom的身体状况;2. Tom表达缺课的担忧;3. Daniel说明带了笔记并提出帮忙补习;4. Tom感谢,两人约定开始补习,符合提示的情节逻辑,语言简洁,符合剧本要求。
【答案】Act 1, Scene 1
Tom’s bedroom
[Tom sits on the bed with his right leg wrapped in bandages(绷带). He looks at textbooks worriedly. Daniel walks in with exercise books and class notes in hand.]
Daniel: Hello Tom! How are you feeling these days?
Tom: Much better, but I'm worried about my schoolwork. I've missed a week's classes and will fall behind others.
Daniel: I know your trouble, so I've brought all our class notes for you.
Tom: Thanks a lot! But there are too many new lessons. I don't know where to start.
Daniel: Don't worry. I can come every day after school to explain difficult knowledge to you.
Tom: It's so nice of you!
Daniel: We're deskmates, so we should help each other. Let's start with today's English points right now.
Tom: Great! With your help, I believe I can catch up soon.
【知识点】英语剧本写作、情景对话、日常交际用语
【点评】本题为校园主题的英文剧本补全题,贴近学生生活实际,要求结合给定背景和情节完成对话,考察学生的情景表达和逻辑衔接能力,难度适中,易于学生发挥。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】根据剧本开头的场景,需补全符合人物关系和情节的对话:1. Daniel先问候Tom的身体状况;2. Tom表达缺课的担忧;3. Daniel说明带了笔记并提出帮忙补习;4. Tom感谢,两人约定开始补习,符合提示的情节逻辑,语言简洁,符合剧本要求。
【答案】Act 1, Scene 1
Tom’s bedroom
[Tom sits on the bed with his right leg wrapped in bandages(绷带). He looks at textbooks worriedly. Daniel walks in with exercise books and class notes in hand.]
Daniel: Hello Tom! How are you feeling these days?
Tom: Much better, but I'm worried about my schoolwork. I've missed a week's classes and will fall behind others.
Daniel: I know your trouble, so I've brought all our class notes for you.
Tom: Thanks a lot! But there are too many new lessons. I don't know where to start.
Daniel: Don't worry. I can come every day after school to explain difficult knowledge to you.
Tom: It's so nice of you!
Daniel: We're deskmates, so we should help each other. Let's start with today's English points right now.
Tom: Great! With your help, I believe I can catch up soon.
【知识点】英语剧本写作、情景对话、日常交际用语
【点评】本题为校园主题的英文剧本补全题,贴近学生生活实际,要求结合给定背景和情节完成对话,考察学生的情景表达和逻辑衔接能力,难度适中,易于学生发挥。
【难度系数】0.7
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