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七、书面表达(满分25分)
你所居住的苏州阳光小区即将举办一场社区交流活动,向新搬入社区的国际友人介绍苏州的城市概况、风景名胜、传统手工艺品和本小区特色,活动致力于共同打造一个温暖互助的和谐社区。请你代表社区写一份英文演讲稿。
参考词汇：
苏绣：Suzhou embroidery；苏丝：Suzhou Silk；
桃花坞木版年画：Taohuawu Woodblock New Year Prints；
苏州檀香扇：Suzhou Sandalwood Fans；拙政园：the Humble Administrator's Garden
要求:1. 词数90左右,文章开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数；
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥；
3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
Hello, everyone!
I'd like to share with you some wonderful things about my hometown Suzhou.
Welcome to Suzhou! Let's make our community a loving home!
你所居住的苏州阳光小区即将举办一场社区交流活动,向新搬入社区的国际友人介绍苏州的城市概况、风景名胜、传统手工艺品和本小区特色,活动致力于共同打造一个温暖互助的和谐社区。请你代表社区写一份英文演讲稿。
参考词汇：
苏绣：Suzhou embroidery；苏丝：Suzhou Silk；
桃花坞木版年画：Taohuawu Woodblock New Year Prints；
苏州檀香扇：Suzhou Sandalwood Fans；拙政园：the Humble Administrator's Garden
要求:1. 词数90左右,文章开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数；
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥；
3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
Hello, everyone!
I'd like to share with you some wonderful things about my hometown Suzhou.
Suzhou is a really pretty city with a long, long history. There are lots of beautiful places to visit, like the Humble Administrator's Garden. It shows how special Chinese gardens are.
When it comes to traditional crafts, Suzhou is famous for its embroidery (that's like sewing pretty pictures on cloth). Taohuawu Woodblock New Year Prints are colourful and show what life is like in Suzhou. And don't forget about Suzhou Sandalwood Fans—everyone loves them!
In our neighbourhood, we often do fun activities together, like craft classes. You can feel how friendly and warm everyone is here.
Welcome to Suzhou! Let's make our community a loving home!
答案
书面表达
One possible version:
Hello, everyone!
I'd like to share with you some wonderful things about my hometown Suzhou.
Suzhou is a really pretty city with a long, long history. There are lots of beautiful places to visit, like the Humble Administrator's Garden. It shows how special Chinese gardens are.
When it comes to traditional crafts, Suzhou is famous for its embroidery (that's like sewing pretty pictures on cloth). Taohuawu Woodblock New Year Prints are colourful and show what life is like in Suzhou. And don't forget about Suzhou Sandalwood Fans—everyone loves them!
In our neighbourhood, we often do fun activities together, like craft classes. You can feel how friendly and warm everyone is here.
Welcome to Suzhou! Let's make our community a loving home!
One possible version:
Hello, everyone!
I'd like to share with you some wonderful things about my hometown Suzhou.
Suzhou is a really pretty city with a long, long history. There are lots of beautiful places to visit, like the Humble Administrator's Garden. It shows how special Chinese gardens are.
When it comes to traditional crafts, Suzhou is famous for its embroidery (that's like sewing pretty pictures on cloth). Taohuawu Woodblock New Year Prints are colourful and show what life is like in Suzhou. And don't forget about Suzhou Sandalwood Fans—everyone loves them!
In our neighbourhood, we often do fun activities together, like craft classes. You can feel how friendly and warm everyone is here.
Welcome to Suzhou! Let's make our community a loving home!
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：为苏州阳光小区新搬来的国际友人写英文演讲稿，开头结尾已给出，需涵盖苏州概况、风景名胜、传统手工艺品、小区特色四个要点，词数90左右。解题思路：1. 先介绍苏州整体，点明其历史悠久、风景优美的特点；2. 风景名胜选著名的拙政园，说明其是中国园林的代表；3. 传统手工艺品用题目给出的苏绣、桃花坞木版年画、苏州檀香扇，用简单易懂的语言介绍；4. 小区特色写共同参与的手工活动，体现温暖互助的氛围；最后衔接结尾，确保语气亲切，适合国际友人理解，控制词数。
【解析】
根据思路依次整合内容：1. 苏州概况：Suzhou is a really pretty city with a long, long history. 2. 风景名胜：There are lots of beautiful places to visit, like the Humble Administrator's Garden. It shows how special Chinese gardens are. 3. 传统手工艺品：When it comes to traditional crafts, Suzhou is famous for its embroidery (that's like sewing pretty pictures on cloth). Taohuawu Woodblock New Year Prints are colourful and show what life is like in Suzhou. And don't forget about Suzhou Sandalwood Fans—everyone loves them! 4. 小区特色：In our neighbourhood, we often do fun activities together, like craft classes. You can feel how friendly and warm everyone is here. 衔接给定开头结尾，确保流畅自然。
【答案】
Hello, everyone!
I'd like to share with you some wonderful things about my hometown Suzhou.
Suzhou is a really pretty city with a long, long history. There are lots of beautiful places to visit, like the Humble Administrator's Garden. It shows how special Chinese gardens are.
When it comes to traditional crafts, Suzhou is famous for its embroidery (that's like sewing pretty pictures on cloth). Taohuawu Woodblock New Year Prints are colourful and show what life is like in Suzhou. And don't forget about Suzhou Sandalwood Fans—everyone loves them!
In our neighbourhood, we often do fun activities together, like craft classes. You can feel how friendly and warm everyone is here.
Welcome to Suzhou! Let's make our community a loving home!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、苏州文化英文表达、要点整合写作
【点评】
该范文严格覆盖所有要求要点，语言简洁易懂，符合国际友人理解水平，结构清晰，语气亲切自然，体现苏州特色与社区温暖，是符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作任务：为苏州阳光小区新搬来的国际友人写英文演讲稿，开头结尾已给出，需涵盖苏州概况、风景名胜、传统手工艺品、小区特色四个要点，词数90左右。解题思路：1. 先介绍苏州整体，点明其历史悠久、风景优美的特点；2. 风景名胜选著名的拙政园，说明其是中国园林的代表；3. 传统手工艺品用题目给出的苏绣、桃花坞木版年画、苏州檀香扇，用简单易懂的语言介绍；4. 小区特色写共同参与的手工活动，体现温暖互助的氛围；最后衔接结尾，确保语气亲切，适合国际友人理解，控制词数。
【解析】
根据思路依次整合内容：1. 苏州概况：Suzhou is a really pretty city with a long, long history. 2. 风景名胜：There are lots of beautiful places to visit, like the Humble Administrator's Garden. It shows how special Chinese gardens are. 3. 传统手工艺品：When it comes to traditional crafts, Suzhou is famous for its embroidery (that's like sewing pretty pictures on cloth). Taohuawu Woodblock New Year Prints are colourful and show what life is like in Suzhou. And don't forget about Suzhou Sandalwood Fans—everyone loves them! 4. 小区特色：In our neighbourhood, we often do fun activities together, like craft classes. You can feel how friendly and warm everyone is here. 衔接给定开头结尾，确保流畅自然。
【答案】
Hello, everyone!
I'd like to share with you some wonderful things about my hometown Suzhou.
Suzhou is a really pretty city with a long, long history. There are lots of beautiful places to visit, like the Humble Administrator's Garden. It shows how special Chinese gardens are.
When it comes to traditional crafts, Suzhou is famous for its embroidery (that's like sewing pretty pictures on cloth). Taohuawu Woodblock New Year Prints are colourful and show what life is like in Suzhou. And don't forget about Suzhou Sandalwood Fans—everyone loves them!
In our neighbourhood, we often do fun activities together, like craft classes. You can feel how friendly and warm everyone is here.
Welcome to Suzhou! Let's make our community a loving home!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、苏州文化英文表达、要点整合写作
【点评】
该范文严格覆盖所有要求要点，语言简洁易懂，符合国际友人理解水平，结构清晰，语气亲切自然，体现苏州特色与社区温暖，是符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
