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Ⅳ.书面表达(15分)
32.[2024江苏连云港期末]如今,很多动物处于危险之中,保护动物是我们每个人的职责。你们学校校刊自然专栏正在征集有关动物保护的文章。请根据下面思维导图的提示,以“Ways to protect animals”为题写一篇文章进行投稿。
写作要求:
(1)短文应包括思维导图中所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(3)词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:plastic 塑料(的)
Ways to protect animals
Many animals are in danger now and protecting these animals is the duty of everyone. The following ways are the simple things that we can do in our daily life.
32.[2024江苏连云港期末]如今,很多动物处于危险之中,保护动物是我们每个人的职责。你们学校校刊自然专栏正在征集有关动物保护的文章。请根据下面思维导图的提示,以“Ways to protect animals”为题写一篇文章进行投稿。
写作要求:
(1)短文应包括思维导图中所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(3)词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:plastic 塑料(的)
Ways to protect animals
Many animals are in danger now and protecting these animals is the duty of everyone. The following ways are the simple things that we can do in our daily life.
答案
32.【参考范文】
Ways to protect animals
Many animals are in danger now and protecting these animals is the duty of everyone. The following ways are the simple things that we can do in our daily life.
First, we can't buy any products made from animals. This can help to save and protect animals and we can do it easily. Second, we can't throw rubbish here and there, especially plastic rubbish. When animals eat plastic rubbish by mistake, they may get sick or even die. Third, we must protect the homes of animals. Trees are homes of many animals. When we see people cutting down trees, we must stop them at once. If we see a wild animal that seems alone or sick, we'd better get in touch with the animal centre for help.
I think we should try our best to protect animals in different ways.
Ways to protect animals
Many animals are in danger now and protecting these animals is the duty of everyone. The following ways are the simple things that we can do in our daily life.
First, we can't buy any products made from animals. This can help to save and protect animals and we can do it easily. Second, we can't throw rubbish here and there, especially plastic rubbish. When animals eat plastic rubbish by mistake, they may get sick or even die. Third, we must protect the homes of animals. Trees are homes of many animals. When we see people cutting down trees, we must stop them at once. If we see a wild animal that seems alone or sick, we'd better get in touch with the animal centre for help.
I think we should try our best to protect animals in different ways.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“Ways to protect animals”为题，结合思维导图的三个核心要点（不购买动物制品、不乱扔垃圾、保护动物家园）完成短文。解题思路：首先明确需覆盖所有思维导图要点，用First、Second、Third等连接词梳理内容使逻辑清晰；其次适当补充细节（如塑料垃圾的危害、保护动物家园的具体做法）丰富内容；最后遵循词数要求，不出现真实信息，完成符合要求的投稿。
【解析】
承接给定开头，依次展开三个要点：1. 说明不购买动物制品可帮助保护动物，简单易操作；2. 强调不乱扔垃圾（尤其是塑料垃圾），避免动物误食生病或死亡；3. 指出要保护动物家园，如制止砍树、联系动物中心帮助野生动物；最后收尾表达应尽力以多种方式保护动物，完成全文。
【答案】
Ways to protect animals
Many animals are in danger now and protecting these animals is the duty of everyone. The following ways are the simple things that we can do in our daily life.
First, we can't buy any products made from animals. This can help to save and protect animals and we can do it easily. Second, we can't throw rubbish here and there, especially plastic rubbish. When animals eat plastic rubbish by mistake, they may get sick or even die. Third, we must protect the homes of animals. Trees are homes of many animals. When we see people cutting down trees, we must stop them at once. If we see a wild animal that seems alone or sick, we'd better get in touch with the animal centre for help.
I think we should try our best to protect animals in different ways.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作、要点整合
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖思维导图所有要点，补充细节合理贴合主题，逻辑连贯，语言通顺，符合词数要求，是一篇合格的投稿文章。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“Ways to protect animals”为题，结合思维导图的三个核心要点（不购买动物制品、不乱扔垃圾、保护动物家园）完成短文。解题思路：首先明确需覆盖所有思维导图要点，用First、Second、Third等连接词梳理内容使逻辑清晰；其次适当补充细节（如塑料垃圾的危害、保护动物家园的具体做法）丰富内容；最后遵循词数要求，不出现真实信息，完成符合要求的投稿。
【解析】
承接给定开头，依次展开三个要点：1. 说明不购买动物制品可帮助保护动物，简单易操作；2. 强调不乱扔垃圾（尤其是塑料垃圾），避免动物误食生病或死亡；3. 指出要保护动物家园，如制止砍树、联系动物中心帮助野生动物；最后收尾表达应尽力以多种方式保护动物，完成全文。
【答案】
Ways to protect animals
Many animals are in danger now and protecting these animals is the duty of everyone. The following ways are the simple things that we can do in our daily life.
First, we can't buy any products made from animals. This can help to save and protect animals and we can do it easily. Second, we can't throw rubbish here and there, especially plastic rubbish. When animals eat plastic rubbish by mistake, they may get sick or even die. Third, we must protect the homes of animals. Trees are homes of many animals. When we see people cutting down trees, we must stop them at once. If we see a wild animal that seems alone or sick, we'd better get in touch with the animal centre for help.
I think we should try our best to protect animals in different ways.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作、要点整合
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖思维导图所有要点，补充细节合理贴合主题，逻辑连贯，语言通顺，符合词数要求，是一篇合格的投稿文章。
【难度系数】
0.6
