Ⅳ. 书面表达(25 分)
30. 生活中总会有不期而遇的事带给我们感动或惊喜。请以“An Unexpected Thing”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
要点：(1)这件不期而遇的事是什么；
(2)这件事是如何发生的；
(3)你的感受。
要求：(1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
(2)词数 100 左右。
An Unexpected Thing

30.[参考范文]
An Unexpected Thing
Unexpected things may happen to
everyone—they can make people happy or sad.
For me, an unexpected thing about a card
makes me feel happy.
Two weeks ago, I went out with my friend
Nancy. We made a card by hand. I liked the
card very much, but when I saw Nancy didn't
move her fingers away from it, I decided to
give the card to her. However, yesterday I
found the card in my book with the words "I
appreciate the friendship you give me more
than the card. Keep it as a symbol of our
friendship."
I was really moved and happy because of
the card and Nancy.

【分析】
首先明确题目要求：需以“An Unexpected Thing”为题写英语短文，涵盖“不期而遇的事是什么、如何发生、个人感受”三个要点，词数100左右，不得出现校名和师生姓名。接着选取贴近生活的小事（如友谊相关的卡片事件），按“开头点题→中间叙事→结尾抒情”的结构组织内容，确保覆盖所有要点，语言符合初中英语水平。
【解析】
1. 审题：确定体裁为英语记叙文，主题围绕“不期而遇的感动/惊喜”，遵守词数和隐私要求；
2. 选材：选取与朋友间的卡片事件，内容真实易展开；
3. 写作：开头引出“不期而遇的事带来感动”，中间按时间顺序叙述事件（两周前和朋友做卡片，本想送她，昨日发现卡片在自己书中带留言），结尾抒发感动与开心的感受；
4. 检查：确保词数合适，无违规信息，语法正确。
【答案】
An Unexpected Thing
Unexpected things may happen to everyone—they can make people happy or sad.
For me, an unexpected thing about a card makes me feel happy.
Two weeks ago, I went out with my friend Nancy. We made a card by hand. I liked the card very much, but when I saw Nancy didn't move her fingers away from it, I decided to give the card to her. However, yesterday I found the card in my book with the words "I appreciate the friendship you give me more than the card. Keep it as a symbol of our friendship."
I was really moved and happy because of the card and Nancy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、记叙文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，选取真实生活小事，结构清晰、要点齐全，语言简洁流畅，准确表达主题，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6